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This meta-analysis synthesising 243 records from 46 papers with 814,084 participants from 13 countries demonstrated that long working hours had a positive relationship with occupational health problems. The aggregated odds ratio for the effect of long working hours on occupational health was 1.245 (95% CI: 1.195–1.298). Amongst the five occupational health conditions, the condition ‘related health’ showed the strongest association with long working hours; the health measures in this category were short sleep duration, sleep disturbance, sleep problem, exhaustion and injuries.
Based on the odds ratios of the five health measures for the condition of related health, short sleep duration had the highest odds ratio and is the problem to be most concerned about with regard to long working hours. Studies referred to in this meta-analysis were concerned with investigating the relationship between long working hours and short sleep duration [ 8 , 47 , 48 , 78 ]. The length of hours defined for short sleep was less than 6 h per day by Artazcoz et al. [ 8 ] and Ohtsu et al. [ 78 ], and less than 7 h per day by Virtanen et al. [ 48 ]. These four studies demonstrated that the longer the working hours, the higher risk of suffering from insufficient sleep for both male and female workers. Virtanen et al. [ 48 ] found that the odds ratios for both males and females working more than 55 h per week were higher than those working 41 to 55 h per week. Nakashima et al. [ 47 ] found that the values for odds ratios between long working hours and short sleep duration were proportional to the relationship with the working hours. Artazcoz et al. [ 8 ] showed that the odds ratio between working 51 to 60 h per week and short sleep duration was higher than the odds ratio for working 41 to 50 h per week. Interestingly, this study also showed that female workers had a higher chance of experiencing short sleep duration than male workers when both worked 51 to 60 h per week. The problems suffered by female workers were more severe than for male workers when working long hours. Conversely, the result from Ohtsu [ 78 ] conflicted with that from Artazcoz [ 8 ] in that male workers tended to experience the problem of short sleep duration more than female workers while working from 9 h to less than 11 h per day. Several studies have reported that the length of sleep for females was longer than for males [ 79 , 80 , 81 ]. However, some researchers suggested that female workers do more unpaid work than males, for example, housework, which reduces the duration of sleep for female workers [ 82 , 83 ]. The effect of long working hours on short sleep duration based on the gender difference needs to be further investigated. In addition, the studies just investigated the relationship between working hours and sleep hours, which might potentially neglect other causes of short sleep, such as spending much time on leisure and social activities [ 84 ]. Research suggests that short sleep duration seriously threatens the health of workers. Many researchers have examined the adverse effects of short sleep duration. Short sleep duration increases the risk of suffering from cardiovascular heart diseases [ 85 ], coronary heart diseases [ 86 , 87 ], obesity [ 88 , 89 , 90 ], hypertension [ 91 ] and type 2 diabetes mellitus [ 92 , 93 ]. The consciousness on the importance of sleep of the workers should be enhanced. Fatigue was the items in the condition of related health constituting the second highest value of odds ratio. One of the reasons resulting in fatigue or exhaustion was undoubtedly insufficient sleep [ 85 ]. Exhaustion adversely influences the performance of workers and the productivity of organisations [ 94 , 95 , 96 , 97 ]. Sleep disturbance was also a health problem yielding a significant effect in the conditions of related health and involves difficulty in falling asleep, insomnia and disorder during different stages of sleep [ 98 ]. Sleep disturbance affects the mental health, circadian rhythms and cognitive function of workers [ 99 , 100 ]. In the long-term, sleep disturbance can lead to cardiovascular diseases, obesity and diabetes [ 101 ]. The impacts resulting from the problem of sleep are intimately linked with various physiological and mental health problems defined as occupational health problems by the World Health Organization. To ensure the good duration of sleep for workers, guidelines should be provided to publicise the most appropriate sleeping hours as well as to raise public consciousness on the importance of the duration and quality of sleep.
This meta-analysis evaluated the effects of various moderators to identify the associations between such moderators and long working hours, and the consequences for occupational health. Health measure is a significant moderator on the effect sizes of the conditions of physiological health and related health. In the condition of physiological health, a considerable increase was found in the effect size of cardiovascular heart diseases and a slight increase was found in the effect size of metabolic syndrome. This finding means that workers working long hours have a higher risk of suffering from cardiovascular heart diseases and metabolic syndrome compared to those not working long hours. Some studies have demonstrated that the risk of cardiovascular heart diseases was caused by increase in weekly work hours [ 102 , 103 ]. Yu [ 104 ] reported that long working hours, especially 60 or more per week, increased the risk of metabolic syndrome. In the condition of related health, a significant increase in the effect sizes of fatigue, injury, poor sleep quality, short sleep duration and sleep disturbance was found. This indicates that workers are more likely to experience health problems when working long hours. This result is consistent with the study of Afonso et al. [ 30 ], which demonstrated that longer work hours resulted in poorer sleep quality and more severe sleep disturbance. Similarly, Son et al. [ 105 ] reported that the main factor affecting sleepiness was long working hours. Akerstedt et al. [ 58 ] noted that long working hours resulted in sleep disturbance and fatigue. Lombardi et al. [ 106 ] also pointed out that increase in working hours led to a decrease in daily sleep hours and an increased risk of work-related injury.
The statistically significant effects of study design showed that the method of case-control study was a stronger estimator than cross-sectional study for the impact of working long hours on occupational health. This result may be due to the characteristics of the study methods in terms of the selection of the participants. For a case-control study, a number of participants with certain diseases or situations should be selected as the case group, and a number of participants without the diseases or situations should be selected as the control group. With case-control study design, the associated risk factors and diseases may be promptly identified, and establishment of causation is more powerful than in a cross-sectional study [ 107 ]. The problem of cross-sectional studies is the nonrepresentative sampling due to the existence of bias between participants and nonparticipants [ 107 ]. Thus, case-control study design yields a stronger association between long working hours and occupational health than cross-sectional study design. The nonsignificant effect of a prospective cohort study may be due to a relatively low bias method of selecting participants.
Country of origin has a significant influence on the overall effect size. It was found that the effects of long working hours on the occupational health of Asian workers were more severe than for Western workers. A few studies have reported that workers in Asian Countries have longer working hours than workers in Western countries [ 108 , 109 ]. Overwork seems to be common in China, Japan, Korea, Singapore, Hong Kong and Taiwan, and it has been reported that many workers in these countries and cities suffer from cardiovascular heart diseases and cerebrovascular diseases due to overwork [ 110 , 111 , 112 ]. The governments of Japan, Korea and Taiwan have formulated and established a series of regulations to prevent death from overwork, for instance, the implementation of standard working hours [ 113 ]. Working hours in these countries became shorter in the wake of the establishment of such standard working hours. However, the definition of standard working hours is still a controversial issue, and many workers have requested that standard working hours should be shorter [ 114 ]. Standard working hours have still not been established in many countries [ 115 ]. The issue of working hours is unavoidable in the long-term struggle among governments, employers and employees. The establishment of standard working hours should be a first step towards resolving the problem of long working hours.
The cut-off point for long working hours has a significant effect on the overall effect size. Workers working more than 50 h per week or more than 10 h per day had a higher chance of experiencing occupational health problems than those working 50 or less hours per week or 10 or less hours per day. This finding supports the previous study of Virtanen et al. [ 19 ] that reported that the risk of coronary heart disease for those working more than 50 h per week was higher than those working 50 h or less per week. However, the odds ratio of working more than 50 h per week or more than 10 h per day in this study was 1.420, which was lower than the odds ratio of 2.37 reported by Virtanen et al. [ 19 ]. Further investigation is needed on this odds ratio discrepancy for the effects of long working hours on occupational health. Virtanen et al. [ 19 ] only investigated the association between long working hours and coronary heart disease. The meta-analysis reported here covered different types of occupational health illnesses, making comparisons difficult.
There were no significant effects for gender or diagnosis method. This result for diagnosis method agrees with the finding of Kivimäki et al. [ 22 ] that diagnosis method had no significant effect on the association of long working hours with health. Here, there was also no significant effect for working class.
For the effect of working class on the association between long working hours and the five conditions (PH, MH, HB, RH and NH), working class only constitutes a significant influence on the effect size of related health (sleep problem, chronic exhaustion, and occupational injury) in which the blue collar occupations had a higher risk of suffering from health problems than white and pink collar occupations. This finding might be due to the low control over own working time [ 116 ]. This is an important issue for future research.
In a previous meta-analysis conducted by Sparks et al. [ 5 ], they found a small positive correlation between long hours of work and health, and the value of the correlation of psychological health was higher than for physiological health. In the study reported here, it was found that long working hours increased the chance of suffering from occupational health problems by 24.3%, and the chance of suffering from the mental health problems was higher than that of suffering physiological health problems. These results were in agreement with the study by Sparks et al. [ 5 ]. However, the difference was that this study covered broader health measures than the study by Sparks et al. [ 5 ]. This broader coverage may reflect the issue that more occupational health problems were caused by long working hours and reported on in the review period (1998–2018) used here. In addition, it was found in the study reported here that the effect of long working hours on cardiovascular heart diseases had a higher odds ratio of 1.56 (95% CI: 1.344–1.824) than in the study by Kang et al. [ 21 ] in 2012 (OR: 1.37; 95% CI: 1.11–1.70). A major difference between the work reported in this analysis and the analysis by Kang et al. [ 21 ] was that in this analysis, more studies on the effect of long working hours on cardiovascular heart diseases were involved than were in Kang et al. [ 21 ]. This meta-analysis was conducted with the addition of the more recent studies of Fukuoka et al. [ 9 ], Virtanen et al. [ 117 ], Cheng et al. [ 13 ], Jeong et al. [ 118 ] and Ma et al. [ 119 ]. The increase of odds ratio from this meta-analysis to that of Kang et al. [ 21 ] suggests that the risk of suffering from cardiovascular heart diseases for overtime workers has increased in recent years, though more work is required to clarify the issue. The study of Virtanen et al. [ 117 ] could not be compared with the study reported here, as coronary heart disease was considered as just one of the diseases in the category of cardiovascular heart diseases in this study. A meta-analysis conducted by Kivimäki et al. [ 75 ] examined the relationship between long working hours and the risk of type 2 diabetes by socioeconomic status stratification. Kivimäki et al. [ 75 ], reported only that the effect size of the low socioeconomic status group was robust with a risk ratio of 1.29 (95% CI: 1.06–1.17) and null for the high socioeconomic status group. In the study reported here, it was found that the odds ratio of the effect of long working hours on the risk of type 2 diabetes was 0.855 (95% CI: 0.497–1.472). The discrepancy in the results between these two studies might be because 82.6% (19 of 23) of the papers used in the meta-analysis by Kivimäki et al. [ 75 ] were unpublished. Further, socioeconomic status includes various demographic variables such as income, educational level and occupation. These variables for socioeconomic status make it difficult to compare results from different studies [ 120 ]. For instance, an individual with a high educational level should belong to the high socioeconomic status group. However, a high educational level might not imply a high-income level (high socioeconomic status group). To avoid this contradiction, this study adopted working class instead of socioeconomic status stratification. However, comparing with the meta-analysis conducted by Kivimäki et al. [ 22 ], in the study here, coronary heart disease and stroke were categorised in the same group, cardiovascular heart diseases, and thus, no comparisons could be made. Further, 78.26% (18 of 23) of the selected papers in the study of Kivimäki et al. [ 22 ] were unpublished, whereas the meta-analysis reported here only included published papers. The reason was that unpublished data involved the privacy concerns of employers and employees and, therefore, the companies and agencies involved had not given permission for the data to be made public.
There is increasing attention on the effects of long working hours on various types of occupational health problems, and a relatively large amount of related publications over the past decade was seen. Compared with the types of health problems caused by long working hours in the meta-analysis of Sparks and Cooper in 1997 [ 5 ], a relatively larger amount of different types of health problems caused by long working hours was identified in this meta-analysis. This reflected that long working hours seem to become a perilous act threatening the health of workers. Based on the results of this meta-analysis, the strongest association between long working hours and short sleep duration was found. Interconnected relationships between various types of occupational health problems were shown. Short sleep duration was shown to adversely affect the physical and mental health of workers working for long hours. In addition, gender difference on the sleep duration was also a significant finding in this study. In many countries, male and female workers may have different roles in their daily lives. This can affect the time allocation for their work and other life aspects. There is still a dispute on which gender tends to have a relatively short sleep duration in view of different specific roles between males and females. Further, working class, a commonly neglected factor in past studies, was found to be a significant factor for the difference of length of working hours in this study. It was found that blue collar workers had a higher risk of experiencing the occupational health problems than white and pink collar workers.
This study provides evidence for governments, employers and employees about the negative effects of long working hours on the health of workers. Governments should clearly recognise the importance of maintaining the health of workers because the productivity of the workforce is what sustains the development and enhancement of society and the economy. Governments should work to establish standard working hours as a useful step towards safeguarding the health and well-being of workers. If no maximum working hours or standard working hours have been established, the health of workers is threatened by the negative health effects of long working hours. Governments should regularly review working hours and monitor the compliance of companies and employers. Furthermore, companies and employers must recognise that their workers regularly work long hours, recognise the effects on occupational health and endeavour to improve the situation. In addition, employees must be made aware of whether they are working long hours and recognise the potential effects on their physical and mental health wellbeing. Short sleep duration and fatigue are strongly associated with long working hours, and if employees regularly get too little sleep (6 h or less per day), or have chronic fatigue syndrome, they should regulate their daily routine to prevent physical or mental deterioration.
This meta-analysis had several limitations. The studies included were all in English. Some studies published in other languages satisfied the selection requirement. Future analyses will include studies in other languages to conduct a more generalisable result. Further, the odds ratios in each study were adjusted by different control variables, for instance, age, gender, education, health behaviours and marital status, which might affect the final effect sizes. Therefore, the control variables need to be considered for the extraction of odds ratios in each study. The measurement of health problems was through self-reporting, from clinical examination health reports and annual body checks. For those studies containing self-reported health problems, the result may not be as accurate as for those containing health examinations by clinics or hospitals. Some studies combined the result from male and female workers without stating the proportions. However, different proportions of males and females involved in the data might influence the result. In future studies on the effect of long working hours on occupational health, the genders should be better distinguished and reported. Furthermore, in order to provide a unified result and prevent the deviated effects caused by different work schedules, studies investigating the workers with shift work or night work schedule were excluded, and only studies investigating the daytime workers were included in this meta-analysis. Different work schedules may cause different types and extents of detrimental effects on the occupational health of workers. Focusing on the investigation on one type of work schedule can minimise certain work-schedule biased health effects. Thus, the effects of long working hours on the occupational health of night workers and workers of different work shifts were not considered or evaluated in this meta-analysis. In addition, most studies did not classify the workers into an exhaustive working class. It is difficult to analyse the effect of working class on the relationship between long working hours and occupational health. Therefore, a comprehensive working class is suggested for the future studies investigating this issue. In addition, the global economic crisis has been shown as a significant cause leading to long working hours and overtime among organisations in past studies [ 121 , 122 ]. Thus, the extents and effects of dynamics of economic crisis on the association between long working hours and occupational health can be evaluated in future studies.
This meta-analysis synthesised 243 records from 46 papers published from 1998 to 2018 to examine the effect of long working hours on the occupational health of workers. Five conditions were classified for occupational health, namely, physiological health, mental health, health behaviours, related health and nonspecified health. The odds ratios and adjustments for publication bias were computed for each condition. The result demonstrated that employees working long hours were vulnerable to suffering from diverse types of occupational health problem. The condition ‘related health’ constituted the highest odds ratio and the health measures included in this condition were short sleep duration, fatigue, sleep disturbance, sleep problem and injury. Workers working long hours had a higher chance of experiencing occupational health problems, and short sleep duration yielded the strongest association with long working hours among the health measures in the related health condition. The findings emphasise the deleterious effects of long working hours on occupational health.
The following are available online at https://www.mdpi.com/1660-4601/16/12/2102/s1 , Table S1: The information and odds ratios of the 46 papers (sorted in year of publication).
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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages, give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience., write at least 250 words..
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In the modern world, working longer hours is becoming prevalent, especially among younger people who often lack free time for various reasons. While there may be some positive aspects to this situation, a number of drawbacks could be listed and both will be covered in this essay.
To start with, people who work more may grow more self-assured as their social and professional abilities improve. For example, employees who work longer hours at a company grow into strong, independent individuals as a result of acquiring experience, which boosts their confidence and opens up more career options. Also, by not wasting time on hobbies, people may feel more like they are using their time wisely. Their sense of confidence usually increases as a result.
However, there are several drawbacks to extended work hours. First of all, fatigue from lengthened workdays is likely to occur. Their mental health is badly impacted by this circumstance. Further, after working for extended periods of time, people become tired, which can lead to numerous mistakes in their work. For instance, if doctors worked long shifts all the time, they would become so tired that they would misdiagnose illnesses. It was therefore stated that engaging in leisure activities is essential for mental relaxation, which lowers mistake rates.
All in all, although working long hours may have certain benefits, the drawbacks of not being able to relax clearly exceed these benefits. It follows that everyone needs to manage their workload adequately. (243 words)
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Problems associated with extended work hours are a common topic of conversation these days. It is undeniable that a work-life imbalance has an impact on people’s lifestyles nowadays. It can be asserted that there are more drawbacks to this tendency than benefits. This essay will examine both the disadvantages and advantages of this phenomenon.
On the one hand, staying late at work has a number of benefits. The primary merit lies in the accumulation of valuable experience as employees commit additional time to their professional duties. In other words, numerous professions necessitate extensive hours to achieve professional qualifications. For instance, roles in healthcare, where substantial experience, patience, and talent are requisite attributes. Furthermore, extended periods of time spent on the job offer occasions for honing skills and acquiring expertise in specific domains.
On the other hand, spending more time at work comes with certain drawbacks. Foremost among them is the reduction in available time for leisure activities. This implies that individuals struggling to complete their tasks within regular hours are compromising their work-life equilibrium. For example, an individual compelled to remain in the office until the late hours would consequently forfeit the opportunity to share a dinner with their family or engage in fitness activities at the gym. Additionally, these challenges can potentially lead to both mental and physical health issues.
In conclusion, it appears that working longer hours has more drawbacks than benefits. While there are numerous benefits to working long hours, such as enhanced abilities and character, there can also be severe drawbacks, such as increased risk of mental health issues and physical ailments. (266 words)
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Limited time for recreation has emerged from the growing trend of longer work hours. While there are certain benefits associated with this tendency, it can be contended that the drawbacks outweigh the benefits. In the following paragraphs, the advantages and disadvantages of working overtime will be discussed.
Firstly, extended work hours frequently result in augmented earnings, offering financial security and the capacity to fulfill diverse needs and desires. To exemplify, individuals extend their working hours to supplement their income, enabling them to save for the future or elevate their overall quality of life. Secondly, dedicating extra time to work can boost career prospects by showcasing a strong commitment to employers. Lastly, it also opens doors for skill development and expertise in various fields such as IT, healthcare, and finance.
On the flip side, prolonged work hours can give rise to both physical and mental health issues, including stress, burnout, and sleep disorders. For instance, an individual consistently working overtime may undergo heightened stress levels, adversely affecting their overall well-being. Furthermore, the unavailability during post-office hours may strain relationships with family and friends as due to late-hour work, the individual may encounter difficulties in sustaining a harmonious work-life balance, potentially leading to conflicts in relationships. In addition to the diminishing returns associated with overwork, insufficient leisure time can hinder the capacity to unwind and savor life beyond the confines of the workplace.
To sum up, although the cons outweigh the pros, the final decision of working beyond regular hours depends on individual preferences, priorities, and the specific context of the job. Nonetheless, it is important to strike a balance between professional commitments and personal well-being for overall satisfaction and a fulfilling life. (283 words)
Meaning: time when people do things for enjoyment when they are not working
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Example: The profit was augmented by the increase in the number of enrolments.
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Example: His wife started a small business to supplement their family income.
Meaning: continuing for a long time
Example: After a prolonged time of crisis, the company made a huge profit.
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Gt writing task 2 / essay sample # 63.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities.
Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Model Answer: [View – it has more disadvantages.]
Many people toil at jobs for extensive hours, thereby having hardly any time for leisure pursuits. Just like everything else, working long hours also has its pros and cons. However, I opine that the disadvantages of working long hours outstrip its advantages.
There are myriad positive aspects of working long hours. One key benefit is increasing earning which gives people’s budget a boost, helping them clear their debts and other expenses. They can also set aside some money for a pension plan. Apart from this, it can help to move up the promotion ladder. In this cut-throat corporate world, putting in extra hours is an excellent approach to impress upper-tier management. Take my brother as an example, he won his well-deserved promotion to chief executive due to working longer hours.
On the contrary, the drawbacks of working longer hours cannot be overlooked. Fast and foremost, people with sedentary working hours can severely ruin both physical and mental health. In simple words, it increases the risk of heart disease and is as detrimental to health as smoking. Likewise, many research work has discovered that intense stress of work can cause depression, insomnia, and other mental health concerns. Secondly, it can lead to job dissatisfaction as excessive overtime can drain energy and creativity, which in turn reduces productivity and one may stagnate in career. Last but not least, working longer hours significantly reduces personal time; which translates into less sleep, less time for family members and socializing. A recent study shows that excessive overtime can cause serious family-conflict and the divorce rate augments accordingly.
In fine, although there are significant benefits to working long hours, it is clear that the downsides outweigh the good points. On balance, we should maintain a healthy work-life balance because it is the key to health, relationships, productivity and ultimately work performance.
Essay Answer: People, these days, do not spend much time on leisure activities and keep on working for long hours. In my opinion, this situation brings more disadvantages. This will probably give rise to health issues, poor performance at work, and unhealthy social and personal life.
A couple of consequences can be provided to display the bad aspects of working long hours and having no or little time for leisure activities. Firstly, long working hours may be the reason for both physical and mental health issues among many working people. This is because people are so focused on their work that they neither do any exercises nor have healthy diets. In fact, this will ultimately lead to immense stresses and poor performance in offices. Secondly, these people will gradually lose the social life and have a troublesome personal life. For instance, Mr Kumal in my office, who works really long hours every day, has very fewer friends compared to others. He never allocates time out of his busy schedule to talk with friends and this has tremendously hurt his social life.
Moreover, some people believe that working long hours means there is a scope for more earning and timely accomplishment of office works. But, in my mind, health is always important than wealth, and it is necessary to look after health issues rather than earning some more money. If an employee’s health condition deteriorates, he or she will no longer be able to work and earn. This would lead to even more devastating situations. And according to many experts, it is better to have some solid investment plans to make money instead of working overtime.
To conclude, working long hours just to accomplish work on time or make more money means we are walking towards the situation where our health would be affected sooner than expected. In addition, it will hamper our personal and social life. So it is expected that employees would work sincerely during their recommended working hours and avoid working for long hours by all means.
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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. do you think this is a positive or negative development, 18.education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. however educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. to what extent do you agree or disagree, you are working for a company. you need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. write a letter to your manager. in your letter, explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away, some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. discuss both views and give your opinion. give the reasons and relative examples upon your own experiences..
We worked longer hours during the pandemic—research says we need to work smarter, not harder.
Exhausted woman working in front of laptop late at night.
The pandemic has heightened our awareness of the importance of well-being, and that is a positive development. But remote work and other factors have also resulted in many of us working longer hours, worsening the already growing problem of overwork. We cannot truly prioritize employee well-being until we learn to rein in excessive work hours.
The extra hours worked during the pandemic would be less of a concern if they were just a temporary phenomenon, a blip on the screen. However, overwork is a longstanding problem. A recently released study by the W.H.O. (World Health Organization) tracks a dramatic rise in health risks due to long work hours from 2000 to 2016. As of 2018, Americans worked 106 hours more a year than Japanese workers, 248 hours more than British workers, and 423 hours more than German workers. A 2019 survey by the Labor Department found this was a particular problem for women—who were increasingly working longer hours and sleeping less while juggling work and other commitments.
The current surge of the Delta variant makes it likely that the factors driving long hours during the pandemic—including remote work, a childcare squeeze, and other caretaking responsibilities—will continue to be with us for some time. Business leaders who want to protect their employees’ well-being and prevent burnout must explore ways of helping their employees work smarter, not harder and longer.
The findings of the W.H.O. study are alarming:
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Extended hours are bad for employees and bad for a company’s bottom line. Adverse health outcomes lead to rising health insurance costs and increased absenteeism. Moreover, in an economy where making judgment calls and exhibiting emotional intelligence is critical, overwork and accompanying behaviors undermine performance and decision-making.
In the face of this glaring problem, various proposals to shorten the workday or the workweek are gaining traction. It bears noting that the eight-hour, five-day workweek is a product of the Industrial Revolution and does not reflect the realities of the Information Age. Iceland has experimented with several trials of a four-day, 35- or 36-hour workweek, with no reduction in pay. Employees in the trials showed no loss of productivity while exhibiting gains in measures of well-being. New Zealand, Spain, and Germany are considering similar trials. A California Congressman recently introduced a bill that would make such policies more feasible in the U.S. by lowering the bar for overtime from 40 hours to 32 hours.
Others are arguing for a six-hour workday . “I’d be willing to bet that in most jobs, people would get more done in six focused hours than eight unfocused hours,” says bestselling author Adam Grant—adding that “the more complex and creative jobs are, the less it makes sense to pay attention to hours at all.” Steve Glaveski conducted a two-week six-hour workday experiment with his innovation accelerator team. “The shorter workday forced the team to prioritize effectively, limit interruptions, and operate at a much more deliberate level for the first few hours of the day.” The team maintained and, in some cases, increased productivity while showing improved mental health.
Others are following Grant’s suggestion to stop measuring work by the hour. Companies adopting a ROWE (Results Only Work Environment) model tell employees the outcomes they want—and then leave it up to employees to determine how, when, and where they need to work to get the job done.
As someone who works one-on-one coaching executives and consults with companies on their wellness programs, I am keenly aware that there is no “one size fits all” solution to overwork. Some companies may want to experiment with one of the models discussed above, while others need to tailor their solution.
Whichever path you choose, there are some underlying principles you can follow to rein in excessive work hours and empower your people to work smarter:
Our ideas about how to arrange our workdays and workweeks are in many ways antiquated. They originated in a different century, a different economy, a different way of life. The pandemic has demonstrated just how quickly we can reinvent our approach to work. Perhaps it has set a creative process in motion that will lead us down a smarter, more sustainable, more fulfilling work culture.
Many countries with prolonged working hours are successful for their economical growth; however, this has some adverse social effects. I agree with this statement because it leads to an unbalanced work-life balance, resulting in lower-birth mortality.
Prolonged working hours can lead to lower birth mortality. Because of an imbalanced work-life balance, people do not have enough time to spend with their partners, leading to fewer chances of planning for a child. This leads to decreased population growth and burdens the country’s economy to keep up with larbour shortage. For instance, in Finland, the government has made a strict four-day work policy; people have more time to focus on their personal lives. Indeed, the Finnish government is willing to pay child benefits for people planning to have kids. Thus, if long working hours would linger around, it can adversely affect the country’s population.
Double duties can lead to social consequences like burnout and less time for socialization. For instance, in China, many companies have strict working policies that force people to work for 12 hours; as a result, many people do not have enough time for themselves and socialization, resulting in developing mental health issues like depression and anxiety. Thus, in the long term this leads to decreased productivity because of burnout and the global rise in mental health issues among citizens of the country.
To conclude, while it may be worthy for country’s economical growth , long working hours have more negative social outcomes, including lower birth rates and burnout. Hence, I agree that double duties are not worthy regardless od a country’s rising economy, because it damages people’s mental health and population growth.
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These days people spend more and more time at work and less time at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? Real Past IELTS Test/Exam
These days, most people find themselves working longer hours, cutting into their home time. Though this brings economic stability to a nation, it also deprives people of a rich personal life.
The foundation of economic prosperity is a flourishing middle class unburdened by debts. A good example and counter-example of this can be seen in the changing fortunes of the American model of economics. In the 1950s the economy grew as people worked long hours and had large disposable incomes to feed back into the larger consumer economy by purchasing automobiles, houses, and luxuries. Since the economic crash of 2008, there have been fewer jobs to go around and most people make due with part-time labour. The result of an idle labour force was a long-lasting recession that has only abated in recent years as people began to work more.
When people have less time to spend either on their hobbies or with their family, they rightly feel deprived. Every person should have time for both a fulfilling public and private life. Work constitutes the bulk of public service for most people and home life the private. Those with families feel particularly justifiable anger, which can boil over to general unhappiness or depression at best and neglect or abuse, at worst. Even the childless still have loved ones, hobbies, and a variety of other pursuits. At the end of their lives, everyone strives to be able to look back proudly on their career and fondly on their daily life.
In my opinion, the tilting of work-life balance towards work is primarily a negative because it robs people of some of their most meaningful moments. People must individually find ways to not only survive but also prosper in a world where the private sphere shrinks with each passing year.
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1. These days, most people find themselves working longer hours, cutting into their home time. 2. Though this brings economic stability to a nation, it also deprives people of a rich personal life.
1. The foundation of economic prosperity is a flourishing middle class unburdened by debts. 2. A good example and counter-example of this can be seen in the changing fortunes of the American model of economics. 3. In the 1950s the economy grew as people worked long hours and had large disposable incomes to feed back into the larger consumer economy by purchasing automobiles, houses, and luxuries. 4. Since the economic crash of 2008, there have been fewer jobs to go around and most people make due with part-time labour. 5. The result of an idle labour force was a long-lasting recession that has only abated in recent years as people began to work more.
1. When people have less time to spend either on their hobbies or with their family, they rightly feel deprived. 2. Every person should have time for both a fulfilling public and private life. 3. Work constitutes the bulk of public service for most people and home life the private. 4. Those with families feel particularly justifiable anger, which can boil over to general unhappiness or depression at best and neglect or abuse, at worst. 5. Even the childless still have loved ones, hobbies, and a variety of other pursuits. 6. At the end of their lives, everyone strives to be able to look back proudly on their career and fondly on their daily life.
1. In my opinion, the tilting of work-life balance towards work is primarily a negative because it robs people of some of their most meaningful moments. 2. People must individually find ways to not only survive but also prosper in a world where the private sphere shrinks with each passing year.
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These days , most people find themselves working longer hours, cutting into their home time. Though this brings economic stability to a nation, it also deprives people of a rich personal life .
The foundation of economic prosperity is a flourishing middle class unburdened by debts . A good example and counter-example of this can be seen in the changing fortunes of the American model of economics . In the 1950s the economy grew as people worked long hours and had large disposable incomes to feed back into the larger consumer economy by purchasing automobiles, houses, and luxuries. Since the economic crash of 2008, there have been fewer jobs to go around and most people make due with part-time labour . The result of an idle labour force was a long-lasting recession that has only abated in recent years as people began to work more.
When people have less time to spend either on their hobbies or with their family, they rightly feel deprived . Every person should have time for both a fulfilling public and private life . Work constitutes the bulk of public service for most people and home life the private. Those with families feel particularly justifiable anger, which can boil over to general unhappiness or depression at best and neglect or abuse , at worst . Even the childless still have loved ones, hobbies, and a variety of other pursuits . At the end of their lives, everyone strives to be able to look back proudly on their career and fondly on their daily life.
In my opinion, the tilting of work-life balance towards work is primarily a negative because it robs people of some of their most meaningful moments. People must individually find ways to not only survive but also prosper in a world where the private sphere shrinks with each passing year .
these days nowadays
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economic stability strong economy
deprives not having
rich personal life fulfilling private life
economic prosperity good economy
flourishing middle class more money for consumers
unburdened by debts not owing any money
changing fortunes varying levels of money
American model of economics capitalism
disposable incomes money to spend
feed back give back
larger consumer economy the economy as a whole/people buying
economic crash when the economy does badly
to go around for all
make due put up with
part-time labour not working full-time
idle labour force not having work
long-lasting recession economy shrinking for a long time
abated stopped/slowed down
rightly correctly
deprived doesn’t have
fulfilling public and private life happy at home and at work
constitutes makes up
bulk most of
public service pulic life
particularly justifiable good reason for/to feel
boil over have an impact on
depression feeling very sad
neglect ignore
at worst in the worst situation
childless no children
pursuits hobbies
strives tries to
look back proudly feel good about your achievements
fondly warmly
tilting unbalancing
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each passing year every year
ðiːz deɪz ˈkʌtɪŋ ˈɪntuː ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk stəˈbɪlɪti dɪˈpraɪvz rɪʧ ˈpɜːsnl laɪf ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk prɒsˈpɛrɪti ˈflʌrɪʃɪŋ ˈmɪdl klɑːs ʌnˈbɜːdnd baɪ dɛts ˈʧeɪnʤɪŋ ˈfɔːʧənz əˈmɛrɪkən ˈmɒdl ɒv ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪks dɪsˈpəʊzəbl ˈɪnkʌmz fiːd bæk ˈlɑːʤə kənˈsjuːmər i(ː)ˈkɒnəmi ˌiːkəˈnɒmɪk kræʃ tuː gəʊ əˈraʊnd meɪk djuː pɑːt-taɪm ˈleɪbə ˈaɪdl ˈleɪbə fɔːs lɒŋ-ˈlɑːstɪŋ rɪˈsɛʃən əˈbeɪtɪd ˈraɪtli dɪˈpraɪvd fʊlˈfɪlɪŋ ˈpʌblɪk ænd ˈpraɪvɪt laɪf ˈkɒnstɪtjuːts bʌlk ˈpʌblɪk ˈsɜːvɪs pəˈtɪkjʊləli ˈʤʌstɪfaɪəbl bɔɪl ˈəʊvə dɪˈprɛʃən nɪˈglɛkt əˈbjuːs æt wɜːst ˈʧaɪldlɪs pəˈsjuːts straɪvz lʊk bæk ˈpraʊdli ˈfɒndli ˈtɪltɪŋ wɜːk-laɪf ˈbæləns rɒbz ˈprɒspə ˈpraɪvɪt sfɪə ʃrɪŋks iːʧ ˈpɑːsɪŋ jɪə
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____________ , most people find themselves working longer hours, ____________ their home time. Though this brings ____________ to a nation, it also ____________ people of a ____________ .
The foundation of ____________ is a ____________ ____________ . A good example and counter-example of this can be seen in the ____________ of the ____________ . In the 1950s the economy grew as people worked long hours and had large ____________ to ____________ into the ____________ by purchasing automobiles, houses, and luxuries. Since the ____________ of 2008, there have been fewer jobs ____________ and most people ____________ with ____________ . The result of an ____________ was a ____________ that has only ____________ in recent years as people began to work more.
When people have less time to spend either on their hobbies or with their family, they ____________ feel ____________ . Every person should have time for both a ____________ . Work ____________ the ____________ of ____________ for most people and home life the private. Those with families feel ____________ anger, which can ____________ to general unhappiness or ____________ at best and ____________ or ____________ , ____________ . Even the ____________ still have loved ones, hobbies, and a variety of other ____________ . At the end of their lives, everyone ____________ to be able to ____________ on their career and ____________ on their daily life.
In my opinion, the ____________ of ____________ towards work is primarily a negative because it ____________ people of some of their most meaningful moments. People must individually find ways to not only survive but also ____________ in a world where the ____________ with ____________ .
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In the contemporary era, an increasing number of people are prioritising their profession over their personal lives. It is advantageous for the economic development of the country but detrimental to family relationships.
To commence with, workers choosing to stay in the workplace longer will help the economy of the nation. When a workforce of a country work tirelessly then businesses grow at a rapid pace, factories could produce more goods and service industry such as call centres and software development companies could better serve their customers. Consequently, cash flow, as well as the GDP of the country, rises. For instance, after the second world war Japans economy plunged but with the efforts of the dedicated workforce, which worked almost 10 hours a day, were successful in stabilizing it.
On the other hand, working for longer hours can distance one from their family members. When a person’s day is majorly consumed in the work, they generally fall short to concentrate on their family’s emotional needs. Also, fail to make necessary bonding with their children and spouse. A good example of this could be seen in Japan, where elderly citizen die alone in their apartments as nobody cares them perhaps because they do not have loving families. Most family members get to know about their family member’s death weeks after the crimination.
In conclusion, spending more time at work in comparison to home can bring prosperity to the nation but can deprive people of the most valuable part of life which is quality family time. In my opinion, people should strive to strike a work-life balance and try to harmonize not only their personal but also professional lives.
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Today the high sales of popular goods
reflects the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in
which they are sold. Agree or disagree; give reasons.
Nowadays, advancements in technology has revolutionized many sectors of life . One of them is the use of modernized advertisement through digital media that play a pivotal role in booming the over all sell of consumer product. Many old people believe that there is no use of such advertisements and individuals always buy according to their needs but in my opinion, advertisement shown on digital media has great impact on viewer’s minds and people tempt to start buying those products which are not required to fulfill their daily demands.
To begin with, the predominate reason
of enhancing the sell through advertisements is that it creates a great impact
on individuals thinking. A common example of this can be taken from the
commercial adds shown on television and social media website about the diamond
jewelry. While watching a beautifully designed diamond jewelry, wore by a
gorgeous model, immediately attracts the attention of many females. Further, it
could easily convince her to buy that product, may be for upcoming occasion, in
spite of having many jewelry sets in the cupboard. Moreover, she starts
considering herself that she would look beautiful too and anxiously could try
to make arrangements of purchase, albeit, this product is not at all part of
her necessities.
Similarly, purposefully made
advertisements could certainly boom up the trade of consumer goods by providing
awareness of newly introduced good with promotion, for which people are usually
not aware of. In this way providing intense knowledge about a new product with
discount prices, they dramatically increase the sell. For instance, when new
electronic appliances, such as, candy maker and popcorn makers were introduced
by the Asian sky shop with 25 % discount on first day order. People specially
females, commenced ordering online immediately to get the offer, in spite of
the fact that they could easily make candies and popcorn by using traditional
In conclusion, I strongly agree with
the idea that powerfull advertisements
shown on digital devices can change
the behaviour of buyers by changing their thinking and giving awareness about
newly introtuced products, eventually enhance the sell of consumer products.
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