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While Sandel argues that pursuing perfection through genetic engineering would decrease our sense of humility, he claims that the sense of solidarity we would lose is also important.

This thesis summarizes several points in Sandel’s argument, but it does not make a claim about how we should understand his argument. A reader who read Sandel’s argument would not also need to read an essay based on this descriptive thesis.  

Broad thesis (arguable, but difficult to support with evidence) 

Michael Sandel’s arguments about genetic engineering do not take into consideration all the relevant issues.

This is an arguable claim because it would be possible to argue against it by saying that Michael Sandel’s arguments do take all of the relevant issues into consideration. But the claim is too broad. Because the thesis does not specify which “issues” it is focused on—or why it matters if they are considered—readers won’t know what the rest of the essay will argue, and the writer won’t know what to focus on. If there is a particular issue that Sandel does not address, then a more specific version of the thesis would include that issue—hand an explanation of why it is important.  

Arguable thesis with analytical claim 

While Sandel argues persuasively that our instinct to “remake” (54) ourselves into something ever more perfect is a problem, his belief that we can always draw a line between what is medically necessary and what makes us simply “better than well” (51) is less convincing.

This is an arguable analytical claim. To argue for this claim, the essay writer will need to show how evidence from the article itself points to this interpretation. It’s also a reasonable scope for a thesis because it can be supported with evidence available in the text and is neither too broad nor too narrow.  

Arguable thesis with normative claim 

Given Sandel’s argument against genetic enhancement, we should not allow parents to decide on using Human Growth Hormone for their children.

This thesis tells us what we should do about a particular issue discussed in Sandel’s article, but it does not tell us how we should understand Sandel’s argument.  

Questions to ask about your thesis 

  • Is the thesis truly arguable? Does it speak to a genuine dilemma in the source, or would most readers automatically agree with it?  
  • Is the thesis too obvious? Again, would most or all readers agree with it without needing to see your argument?  
  • Is the thesis complex enough to require a whole essay's worth of argument?  
  • Is the thesis supportable with evidence from the text rather than with generalizations or outside research?  
  • Would anyone want to read a paper in which this thesis was developed? That is, can you explain what this paper is adding to our understanding of a problem, question, or topic?
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The breadth of Georgetown’s core curriculum means that students are required to write for a wide variety of academic disciplines. Below, we provide some student samples that exhibit the key features the most popular genres. When reading through these essays, we recommend paying attention to their 

1. Structure (How many paragraphs are there? Does the author use headers?) 

2. Argument (Is the author pointing out a problem, and/or proposing a solution?) 

3. Content (Does the argument principally rely on facts, theory, or logic?) and 

4. Style (Does the writer use first person? What is the relationship with the audience?)

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Harvard University Theses, Dissertations, and Prize Papers

The Harvard University Archives ’ collection of theses, dissertations, and prize papers document the wide range of academic research undertaken by Harvard students over the course of the University’s history.

Beyond their value as pieces of original research, these collections document the history of American higher education, chronicling both the growth of Harvard as a major research institution as well as the development of numerous academic fields. They are also an important source of biographical information, offering insight into the academic careers of the authors.

Printed list of works awarded the Bowdoin prize in 1889-1890.

Spanning from the ‘theses and quaestiones’ of the 17th and 18th centuries to the current yearly output of student research, they include both the first Harvard Ph.D. dissertation (by William Byerly, Ph.D . 1873) and the dissertation of the first woman to earn a doctorate from Harvard ( Lorna Myrtle Hodgkinson , Ed.D. 1922).

Other highlights include:

  • The collection of Mathematical theses, 1782-1839
  • The 1895 Ph.D. dissertation of W.E.B. Du Bois, The suppression of the African slave trade in the United States, 1638-1871
  • Ph.D. dissertations of astronomer Cecilia Payne-Gaposchkin (Ph.D. 1925) and physicist John Hasbrouck Van Vleck (Ph.D. 1922)
  • Undergraduate honors theses of novelist John Updike (A.B. 1954), filmmaker Terrence Malick (A.B. 1966),  and U.S. poet laureate Tracy Smith (A.B. 1994)
  • Undergraduate prize papers and dissertations of philosophers Ralph Waldo Emerson (A.B. 1821), George Santayana (Ph.D. 1889), and W.V. Quine (Ph.D. 1932)
  • Undergraduate honors theses of U.S. President John F. Kennedy (A.B. 1940) and Chief Justice John Roberts (A.B. 1976)

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How to write a thesis statement, what is a thesis statement.

Almost all of us—even if we don’t do it consciously—look early in an essay for a one- or two-sentence condensation of the argument or analysis that is to follow. We refer to that condensation as a thesis statement.

Why Should Your Essay Contain a Thesis Statement?

  • to test your ideas by distilling them into a sentence or two
  • to better organize and develop your argument
  • to provide your reader with a “guide” to your argument

In general, your thesis statement will accomplish these goals if you think of the thesis as the answer to the question your paper explores.

How Can You Write a Good Thesis Statement?

Here are some helpful hints to get you started. You can either scroll down or select a link to a specific topic.

How to Generate a Thesis Statement if the Topic is Assigned How to Generate a Thesis Statement if the Topic is not Assigned How to Tell a Strong Thesis Statement from a Weak One

How to Generate a Thesis Statement if the Topic is Assigned

Almost all assignments, no matter how complicated, can be reduced to a single question. Your first step, then, is to distill the assignment into a specific question. For example, if your assignment is, “Write a report to the local school board explaining the potential benefits of using computers in a fourth-grade class,” turn the request into a question like, “What are the potential benefits of using computers in a fourth-grade class?” After you’ve chosen the question your essay will answer, compose one or two complete sentences answering that question.

Q: “What are the potential benefits of using computers in a fourth-grade class?” A: “The potential benefits of using computers in a fourth-grade class are . . .”
A: “Using computers in a fourth-grade class promises to improve . . .”

The answer to the question is the thesis statement for the essay.

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How to Generate a Thesis Statement if the Topic is not Assigned

Even if your assignment doesn’t ask a specific question, your thesis statement still needs to answer a question about the issue you’d like to explore. In this situation, your job is to figure out what question you’d like to write about.

A good thesis statement will usually include the following four attributes:

  • take on a subject upon which reasonable people could disagree
  • deal with a subject that can be adequately treated given the nature of the assignment
  • express one main idea
  • assert your conclusions about a subject

Let’s see how to generate a thesis statement for a social policy paper.

Brainstorm the topic . Let’s say that your class focuses upon the problems posed by changes in the dietary habits of Americans. You find that you are interested in the amount of sugar Americans consume.

You start out with a thesis statement like this:

Sugar consumption.

This fragment isn’t a thesis statement. Instead, it simply indicates a general subject. Furthermore, your reader doesn’t know what you want to say about sugar consumption.

Narrow the topic . Your readings about the topic, however, have led you to the conclusion that elementary school children are consuming far more sugar than is healthy.

You change your thesis to look like this:

Reducing sugar consumption by elementary school children.

This fragment not only announces your subject, but it focuses on one segment of the population: elementary school children. Furthermore, it raises a subject upon which reasonable people could disagree, because while most people might agree that children consume more sugar than they used to, not everyone would agree on what should be done or who should do it. You should note that this fragment is not a thesis statement because your reader doesn’t know your conclusions on the topic.

Take a position on the topic. After reflecting on the topic a little while longer, you decide that what you really want to say about this topic is that something should be done to reduce the amount of sugar these children consume.

You revise your thesis statement to look like this:

More attention should be paid to the food and beverage choices available to elementary school children.

This statement asserts your position, but the terms more attention and food and beverage choices are vague.

Use specific language . You decide to explain what you mean about food and beverage choices , so you write:

Experts estimate that half of elementary school children consume nine times the recommended daily allowance of sugar.

This statement is specific, but it isn’t a thesis. It merely reports a statistic instead of making an assertion.

Make an assertion based on clearly stated support. You finally revise your thesis statement one more time to look like this:

Because half of all American elementary school children consume nine times the recommended daily allowance of sugar, schools should be required to replace the beverages in soda machines with healthy alternatives.

Notice how the thesis answers the question, “What should be done to reduce sugar consumption by children, and who should do it?” When you started thinking about the paper, you may not have had a specific question in mind, but as you became more involved in the topic, your ideas became more specific. Your thesis changed to reflect your new insights.

How to Tell a Strong Thesis Statement from a Weak One

1. a strong thesis statement takes some sort of stand..

Remember that your thesis needs to show your conclusions about a subject. For example, if you are writing a paper for a class on fitness, you might be asked to choose a popular weight-loss product to evaluate. Here are two thesis statements:

There are some negative and positive aspects to the Banana Herb Tea Supplement.

This is a weak thesis statement. First, it fails to take a stand. Second, the phrase negative and positive aspects is vague.

Because Banana Herb Tea Supplement promotes rapid weight loss that results in the loss of muscle and lean body mass, it poses a potential danger to customers.

This is a strong thesis because it takes a stand, and because it's specific.

2. A strong thesis statement justifies discussion.

Your thesis should indicate the point of the discussion. If your assignment is to write a paper on kinship systems, using your own family as an example, you might come up with either of these two thesis statements:

My family is an extended family.

This is a weak thesis because it merely states an observation. Your reader won’t be able to tell the point of the statement, and will probably stop reading.

While most American families would view consanguineal marriage as a threat to the nuclear family structure, many Iranian families, like my own, believe that these marriages help reinforce kinship ties in an extended family.

This is a strong thesis because it shows how your experience contradicts a widely-accepted view. A good strategy for creating a strong thesis is to show that the topic is controversial. Readers will be interested in reading the rest of the essay to see how you support your point.

3. A strong thesis statement expresses one main idea.

Readers need to be able to see that your paper has one main point. If your thesis statement expresses more than one idea, then you might confuse your readers about the subject of your paper. For example:

Companies need to exploit the marketing potential of the Internet, and Web pages can provide both advertising and customer support.

This is a weak thesis statement because the reader can’t decide whether the paper is about marketing on the Internet or Web pages. To revise the thesis, the relationship between the two ideas needs to become more clear. One way to revise the thesis would be to write:

Because the Internet is filled with tremendous marketing potential, companies should exploit this potential by using Web pages that offer both advertising and customer support.

This is a strong thesis because it shows that the two ideas are related. Hint: a great many clear and engaging thesis statements contain words like because , since , so , although , unless , and however .

4. A strong thesis statement is specific.

A thesis statement should show exactly what your paper will be about, and will help you keep your paper to a manageable topic. For example, if you're writing a seven-to-ten page paper on hunger, you might say:

World hunger has many causes and effects.

This is a weak thesis statement for two major reasons. First, world hunger can’t be discussed thoroughly in seven to ten pages. Second, many causes and effects is vague. You should be able to identify specific causes and effects. A revised thesis might look like this:

Hunger persists in Glandelinia because jobs are scarce and farming in the infertile soil is rarely profitable.

This is a strong thesis statement because it narrows the subject to a more specific and manageable topic, and it also identifies the specific causes for the existence of hunger.

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The thesis statement or main claim must be debatable

An argumentative or persuasive piece of writing must begin with a debatable thesis or claim. In other words, the thesis must be something that people could reasonably have differing opinions on. If your thesis is something that is generally agreed upon or accepted as fact then there is no reason to try to persuade people.

Example of a non-debatable thesis statement:

This thesis statement is not debatable. First, the word pollution implies that something is bad or negative in some way. Furthermore, all studies agree that pollution is a problem; they simply disagree on the impact it will have or the scope of the problem. No one could reasonably argue that pollution is unambiguously good.

Example of a debatable thesis statement:

This is an example of a debatable thesis because reasonable people could disagree with it. Some people might think that this is how we should spend the nation's money. Others might feel that we should be spending more money on education. Still others could argue that corporations, not the government, should be paying to limit pollution.

Another example of a debatable thesis statement:

In this example there is also room for disagreement between rational individuals. Some citizens might think focusing on recycling programs rather than private automobiles is the most effective strategy.

The thesis needs to be narrow

Although the scope of your paper might seem overwhelming at the start, generally the narrower the thesis the more effective your argument will be. Your thesis or claim must be supported by evidence. The broader your claim is, the more evidence you will need to convince readers that your position is right.

Example of a thesis that is too broad:

There are several reasons this statement is too broad to argue. First, what is included in the category "drugs"? Is the author talking about illegal drug use, recreational drug use (which might include alcohol and cigarettes), or all uses of medication in general? Second, in what ways are drugs detrimental? Is drug use causing deaths (and is the author equating deaths from overdoses and deaths from drug related violence)? Is drug use changing the moral climate or causing the economy to decline? Finally, what does the author mean by "society"? Is the author referring only to America or to the global population? Does the author make any distinction between the effects on children and adults? There are just too many questions that the claim leaves open. The author could not cover all of the topics listed above, yet the generality of the claim leaves all of these possibilities open to debate.

Example of a narrow or focused thesis:

In this example the topic of drugs has been narrowed down to illegal drugs and the detriment has been narrowed down to gang violence. This is a much more manageable topic.

We could narrow each debatable thesis from the previous examples in the following way:

Narrowed debatable thesis 1:

This thesis narrows the scope of the argument by specifying not just the amount of money used but also how the money could actually help to control pollution.

Narrowed debatable thesis 2:

This thesis narrows the scope of the argument by specifying not just what the focus of a national anti-pollution campaign should be but also why this is the appropriate focus.

Qualifiers such as " typically ," " generally ," " usually ," or " on average " also help to limit the scope of your claim by allowing for the almost inevitable exception to the rule.

Types of claims

Claims typically fall into one of four categories. Thinking about how you want to approach your topic, or, in other words, what type of claim you want to make, is one way to focus your thesis on one particular aspect of your broader topic.

Claims of fact or definition: These claims argue about what the definition of something is or whether something is a settled fact. Example:

Claims of cause and effect: These claims argue that one person, thing, or event caused another thing or event to occur. Example:

Claims about value: These are claims made of what something is worth, whether we value it or not, how we would rate or categorize something. Example:

Claims about solutions or policies: These are claims that argue for or against a certain solution or policy approach to a problem. Example:

Which type of claim is right for your argument? Which type of thesis or claim you use for your argument will depend on your position and knowledge of the topic, your audience, and the context of your paper. You might want to think about where you imagine your audience to be on this topic and pinpoint where you think the biggest difference in viewpoints might be. Even if you start with one type of claim you probably will be using several within the paper. Regardless of the type of claim you choose to utilize it is key to identify the controversy or debate you are addressing and to define your position early on in the paper.

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Acquisition of Implicit Knowledge of Second Language Syntax: The Effects of Input Modality and Working Memory

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25 Thesis Statement Examples

thesis statement examples and definition, explained below

A thesis statement is needed in an essay or dissertation . There are multiple types of thesis statements – but generally we can divide them into expository and argumentative. An expository statement is a statement of fact (common in expository essays and process essays) while an argumentative statement is a statement of opinion (common in argumentative essays and dissertations). Below are examples of each.

Strong Thesis Statement Examples

school uniforms and dress codes, explained below

1. School Uniforms

“Mandatory school uniforms should be implemented in educational institutions as they promote a sense of equality, reduce distractions, and foster a focused and professional learning environment.”

Best For: Argumentative Essay or Debate

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2. Nature vs Nurture

“This essay will explore how both genetic inheritance and environmental factors equally contribute to shaping human behavior and personality.”

Best For: Compare and Contrast Essay

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3. American Dream

“The American Dream, a symbol of opportunity and success, is increasingly elusive in today’s socio-economic landscape, revealing deeper inequalities in society.”

Best For: Persuasive Essay

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social media pros and cons

4. Social Media

“Social media has revolutionized communication and societal interactions, but it also presents significant challenges related to privacy, mental health, and misinformation.”

Best For: Expository Essay

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5. Globalization

“Globalization has created a world more interconnected than ever before, yet it also amplifies economic disparities and cultural homogenization.”

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6. Urbanization

“Urbanization drives economic growth and social development, but it also poses unique challenges in sustainability and quality of life.”

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7. Immigration

“Immigration enriches receiving countries culturally and economically, outweighing any perceived social or economic burdens.”

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8. Cultural Identity

“In a globalized world, maintaining distinct cultural identities is crucial for preserving cultural diversity and fostering global understanding, despite the challenges of assimilation and homogenization.”

Best For: Argumentative Essay

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9. Technology

“Medical technologies in care institutions in Toronto has increased subjcetive outcomes for patients with chronic pain.”

Best For: Research Paper

capitalism examples and definition

10. Capitalism vs Socialism

“The debate between capitalism and socialism centers on balancing economic freedom and inequality, each presenting distinct approaches to resource distribution and social welfare.”

cultural heritage examples and definition

11. Cultural Heritage

“The preservation of cultural heritage is essential, not only for cultural identity but also for educating future generations, outweighing the arguments for modernization and commercialization.”

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12. Pseudoscience

“Pseudoscience, characterized by a lack of empirical support, continues to influence public perception and decision-making, often at the expense of scientific credibility.”

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13. Free Will

“The concept of free will is largely an illusion, with human behavior and decisions predominantly determined by biological and environmental factors.”

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14. Gender Roles

“Traditional gender roles are outdated and harmful, restricting individual freedoms and perpetuating gender inequalities in modern society.”

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15. Work-Life Ballance

“The trend to online and distance work in the 2020s led to improved subjective feelings of work-life balance but simultaneously increased self-reported loneliness.”

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universal healthcare pros and cons

16. Universal Healthcare

“Universal healthcare is a fundamental human right and the most effective system for ensuring health equity and societal well-being, outweighing concerns about government involvement and costs.”

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raising minimum wage pros and cons

17. Minimum Wage

“The implementation of a fair minimum wage is vital for reducing economic inequality, yet it is often contentious due to its potential impact on businesses and employment rates.”

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18. Homework

“The homework provided throughout this semester has enabled me to achieve greater self-reflection, identify gaps in my knowledge, and reinforce those gaps through spaced repetition.”

Best For: Reflective Essay

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charter schools vs public schools, explained below

19. Charter Schools

“Charter schools offer alternatives to traditional public education, promising innovation and choice but also raising questions about accountability and educational equity.”

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internet pros and cons

20. Effects of the Internet

“The Internet has drastically reshaped human communication, access to information, and societal dynamics, generally with a net positive effect on society.”

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affirmative action example and definition, explained below

21. Affirmative Action

“Affirmative action is essential for rectifying historical injustices and achieving true meritocracy in education and employment, contrary to claims of reverse discrimination.”

Best For: Essay

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soft skills examples and definition, explained below

22. Soft Skills

“Soft skills, such as communication and empathy, are increasingly recognized as essential for success in the modern workforce, and therefore should be a strong focus at school and university level.”

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23. Moral Panic

“Moral panic, often fueled by media and cultural anxieties, can lead to exaggerated societal responses that sometimes overlook rational analysis and evidence.”

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24. Freedom of the Press

“Freedom of the press is critical for democracy and informed citizenship, yet it faces challenges from censorship, media bias, and the proliferation of misinformation.”

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25. Mass Media

“Mass media shapes public opinion and cultural norms, but its concentration of ownership and commercial interests raise concerns about bias and the quality of information.”

Best For: Critical Analysis

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Checklist: How to use your Thesis Statement

✅ Position: If your statement is for an argumentative or persuasive essay, or a dissertation, ensure it takes a clear stance on the topic. ✅ Specificity: It addresses a specific aspect of the topic, providing focus for the essay. ✅ Conciseness: Typically, a thesis statement is one to two sentences long. It should be concise, clear, and easily identifiable. ✅ Direction: The thesis statement guides the direction of the essay, providing a roadmap for the argument, narrative, or explanation. ✅ Evidence-based: While the thesis statement itself doesn’t include evidence, it sets up an argument that can be supported with evidence in the body of the essay. ✅ Placement: Generally, the thesis statement is placed at the end of the introduction of an essay.

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💡 AI PROMPT FOR ARGUMENTATIVE THESIS STATEMENT I am writing an essay on [TOPIC] and these are the instructions my teacher gave me: [INSTRUCTIONS]. I want you to create an argumentative thesis statement that clearly takes a position on this issue.

💡 AI PROMPT FOR COMPARE AND CONTRAST THESIS STATEMENT I am writing a compare and contrast essay that compares [Concept 1] and [Concept2]. Give me 5 potential single-sentence thesis statements that remain objective.

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Harnessing Renewable Energies for Seawater Lithium Extraction Based on Photoelectrochemical and Triboelectric Nanogenerators Approaches

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Student thesis : Doctoral Thesis

Empirical Investigation of Strategic Responses to Crisis

Supervisor: DONG, C. M. (Supervisor), LI, Y. D. (Supervisor), TAN, Y. C. (Co-supervisor) & YU, J. J. (Co-supervisor)

The Dilemma of Single-Player Games in China - The Profound Influence of the State on Foreign-Made Single-Player Games in the Chinese Video Game Market

Supervisor: KOW, Y. M. (Supervisor) & LEINO, O. T. (Supervisor)

Contactless Side Channels in Mobile Charging Systems: Attacks and Defenses

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Examining and Nurturing Future-ready Supply Chain Management Practitioner in a Dynamic Business Environment in Hong Kong

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Construction of Doctors' Professional Identities in Medical Consultations: An Exploratory Study of Doctor-Patient Communication in Mainland China

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ABO Blood Donation Deviation Associated with Human Migration

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Applications of Resonantly Enhanced Optical Fields and Forces

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Coding for Security and Communication in Distributed Computing Systems

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Photofunctional Rhenium(I), Ruthenium(II), and Iridium(III) Polypyridine Complexes for Therapeutic and Concerted Bioorthogonal Applications

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Supervisor: LING, H. (External person) (External Supervisor) & XU, J. D. (Supervisor)

Efficient Scheduling of Distributed Deep Neural Network Workloads

Supervisor: WANG, C. (Supervisor) & XU, H. (External person) (External Co-Supervisor)

Multinational Oil Companies (MNOCs) in the Niger Delta: Responsibility for Attributable Environmental Impacts on Human Rights, ESG Reporting and Eco-Restorative Adaptation

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Exploiting Graph Convolutional Networks for Light Field Image Compression

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Artificial Intelligence, Web Content Personalisation and Big Tech in Sub-Saharan Africa: A Human Rights-Based Approach to Development

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Geometry-Aware Deep Modeling of Dynamic 3D Point Cloud Sequences

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`drink responsibly´ communication campaigns: a perfect cocktail of brand promotion and social responsibility.

Simone Massaro

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Mads Bibow Busborg Nielsen, Kai Rövenich

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#AUTHENTICITY: A Case Study on how Influencers can Appear Authentic on Instagram

Ida Stockfleth Jensen

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#Fitstagram: The Role of Strategic Liking on Instagram in the Context of the Fitness Culture

Laura S. Andersen, Louise Kristiansen

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#PaidPartnerships: The Drivers of Consumer Perceived Brand Authenticity of Social Media Influencers and the Role of a Sponsorship Disclosure

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Tina Esmarch Viuf

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Frederik Wolf Windum

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Martha Rehnberg

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3D-printing Could Change the World: An Analysisin Law and Economics of the InfoSoc-directive’s Efficiency

Alexander Kroer Dal, Alexander Lerche

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50 years of Sustainability in the UN: A Genealogy

Kristoffer Østergaard Bruun Kristensen, Milad Azim

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Annemette Færch

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Maibritt Nybro Jensen

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A basic income for Central America: Towards the eradication of extreme poverty in the region

Alice Krozer

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Viktoria Feldstedt, Christian Helvad

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Steffen Boel Kristensen, Morten Redder Madsen

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Abnormal Returns on Employee Stock Option Grants: An Event Study on Stockholm Stock Exchange

Ermin Keric, Mia Vale Sæter

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Anne Katrine Hansen

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A Brave New Symbiotic World: An Emerging Ecological Order of Worth

Nicholas Haagensen

MSc in International Business and Politics, (Graduate Programme) Final Thesis, 2016

A breakthrough approach for the study of innovations that combines Actor Network Theory and Tribal Consumption: The case of the 3D printer and the Third Industrial Revolution

Barbara Jiménez Fuentes, Virginia Cimino

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Sebastian Schröder

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Julie Blom Engelsholm

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2024 Product Design Showcase

We are thrilled to extend to you a special invitation to Montclair State University’s highly anticipated Product Design Thesis Showcase! This event promises to be an inspiring celebration of creativity, innovation, and the culmination of months of hard work by our talented product design students. Whether you’re an industry professional seeking fresh talent, a design enthusiast looking for inspiration, or simply curious about the future of product design, this event is sure to captivate and inspire you featuring groundbreaking concepts, captivating presentations, and an engaging interactive Q&A session.

For nearly two decades, our renowned Product Design program has been dedicated to shaping the next generation of industry leaders. We take immense pride in our graduates’ achievements, with many securing coveted positions at over 80 major companies across the US and abroad, including prestigious names like Movado Group, Under Armour, Nike, and more.

Our program’s success is rooted in a robust curriculum that emphasizes Design Thinking and User-centered Design. We’ve forged valuable partnerships with leading industry organizations such as IDSA and esteemed companies like Revo, Helen of Troy, and Movado Group, offering our students unparalleled opportunities to engage with professionals in real-world settings. However, our students’ accomplishments extend far beyond the classroom. They’ve demonstrated their prowess by clinching top honors in national competitions, including 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place in the National Traffic Safety Design Competition and 2nd place in the Under Armour design competition. Moreover, their commitment to community projects is commendable, having contributed their talents to initiatives like designing habitat rooms for the Montclair Animal Shelter and building a playground for the Montclair YMCA.

We cordially invite you to witness firsthand the remarkable talent and dedication of our senior Product Design students. Your presence will undoubtedly enhance this celebration of creativity and innovation.

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Trust the Process: The 2024 UMA Senior Thesis Exhibition

Charles danforth gallery jewett hall, university of maine at augusta may 4 – may 23, 2024.

Opening Reception and Artist Talk in the Danforth Gallery ,

Immediately following Commencement on May 4, 2024, at Noon

The graduating Art students of the University of Maine at Augusta will exhibit their senior thesis artwork in the Charles Danforth Gallery on UMA’s Augusta campus in an exhibition entitled Trust the Process . The exhibition includes the work of seven artists and will open at noon with a public reception immediately after Commencement on Saturday, May 4.

Trust the Process reflects the evolution of each artist’s concepts and work over the past semester, using the tools of self- and faculty-critiques. Exhibiting artists include Emily Allen, Julia Dry, Des Dumais, Bruce Forbes, Donald L. Patten, Sophia Reyes, and Jared Winslow.

Trust the Process is on view from May 4 – May 23, 2024, and the public is welcome to visit the gallery in Jewett Hall, which is open on Mondays through Fridays from 9:00 am to 4:00 pm. The UMA community and the general public are invited to the opening reception and artist talk on May 4 at noon.

Follow the Danforth Gallery on Instagram and Facebook , and on their website: danforth.uma.edu .

Bruce Forbes, "Coal" Digital photography, 2024

Artist Biographies

Emily Allen (Gardiner, Maine) : Emily Allen is an aspiring illustrator who works primarily in 2-dimensions with media ranging from graphite and paint to digital drawings. Over the past three years, Emily developed a story that she is translating into a graphic novel. Several completed pages for this novel, along with a myriad of her preparatory sketches for this work are on view in the exhibition. After graduation, Emily will pursue a master’s degree in illustration, eventually publishing her complete graphic novel.

Julia Dry (Hallowell, Maine) : Julia Dry is a mixed media artist who primarily works with sterling silver, enamel, and copper to create sculptures and jewelry pieces. While the subject of her work is often changing, her love for color has stayed consistent. Julia’s process centers experimentation and research to better understand her chosen materials. She hopes to pursue a master’s degree after graduation.

Des Dumais (Fort Kent, Maine) : Des Dumais is a tattoo artist. She moved from Fort Kent to Augusta to pursue her dream of being a tattoo artist. Her fine arts education has given Des the tools and knowledge to excel in her career. Des creates tattoos that not only adorn the skin, but also resonate with the spirit within. Each session is an opportunity to forge a connection, leaving a mark that transcends the physical and becomes a part of the wearer’s identity.

Bruce Forbes (Philipsburg, Pennsylvania) : Bruce Forbes is a photographer who moved to Augusta long ago for work reasons. He focuses on portraiture, but also engages in landscape photography, especially scenes from the Kennebec River and the city of Augusta. Bruce also pursues street photography during warmer weather. He brings his training in composition and color to his photographic work. In addition to his portraiture and landscape work, he hopes to photograph a series centered upon truck stops this summer.

Donald L. Patten (Belfast, Maine) : Donald is a draftsman, oil painter, and ceramicist. In the past, old master painters would depict historically significant disasters that happened to them to cope. A student of the old masters, Donald has made a series of drawings that represent his pandemic experiences by referencing past masterpieces that depict the embodied experience of trauma. After graduating, he will display oil paintings and ceramic artworks at several art markets around Maine before pursuing an MFA degree.

Sophia Reyes (Houston, Texas) : Sophia is an interdisciplinary artist residing in Maine. The Houston, Texas native primarily works with photography, digital art, and printmaking. With photography being her first love, she centers her printmaking practice on captured memories using the aid of digital tools and traditional printmaking techniques to bring these images to life. Her work explores the themes of home and identity through the navigation and reflection of personal narratives and experiences of a first generation Mexican American.

Jared Winslow (New Sharon, Maine) : Jared is a mixed media artist who works primarily with inks, gouache and watercolor to create fine drawings and illustrations. Jared’s works feature a wide range of subjects, but one consistent theme is his passion for nature and plant life. His artistic process involves finding inspiration by immersing himself in natural environments, sketching intricate details, and then experimenting with compositions. His approach allows him to layer materials. After graduation, he hopes to pursue his master’s degree.

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Donald L. Patten, “Mask Gleaners,” Charcoal on canvas, 2024. Submitted photo

AUGUSTA — The graduating art students of the University of Maine at Augusta will exhibit their senior thesis artwork in the Charles Danforth Gallery on UMA’s Augusta campus in an exhibition titled Trust the Process.

The exhibition, which includes the work of seven artists, is set to open at noon Saturday, May 4, with a public reception immediately after commencement.

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Emily Allen, “The Origins of a Villain: The Beginning,” Page 1 Submitted photo

Trust the Process reflects the evolution of each artist’s concepts and work over the past semester, using the tools of self- and faculty-critiques. Exhibiting artists include Emily Allen, Julia Dry, Des Dumais, Bruce Forbes, Donald L. Patten, Sophia Reyes and Jared Winslow.

Trust the Process is on view from May 4-23, and the public is welcome to visit the gallery in Jewett Hall, which is open Mondays through Fridays from 9 a.m. to 4 p.m. The UMA community and public are invited to the opening reception and artist talk on May 4.

Follow the Danforth Gallery on Instagram and Facebook @UMADanforth and at danforth.uma.edu .

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Senior Watkins Artists Illuminate Ideas of Identity, Absence, Community

what is, as is on display

April 24, 2024 | by Haley Charlton

  • BFA Thesis Presentations 2024

The Leu Center for the Visual Art s is awash in color, light and emotion as senior  fine arts  students have their thesis projects on exhibition. For Zoe Nichols, Raymarah Watson- Cunningham and Leslie Lyons, these works dive into their personal explorations of identity, connection and the human experience.  

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Raymarah's striking portrait series "what is, as is" commands the central gallery wall. "This body of work celebrates the sublime beauty, resilience and interconnectedness inherent within the Black experience," she explained.   

Her inspiration stems from a reflective poem that delves into acceptance of circumstances beyond one's control. "What inspired me to choose this theme of Blackness in the sublime is the existence of Black people and the beauty found in the Black human experience and identity," she said.  

Employing a layered technique of watercolor, pastels and pencil, Raymarah’s subjects radiate strength and grace through sketches with a thin layer of watercolor paint over top. She then used oil pastels and colored pencils to enhance certain details within the figures’ faces, accessories and clothing — using this specific layering technique to support the significance of what details like jewelry, box braid, waves and afro hairstyles mean to the Black community.  

"I simply want to provide a lens into what it means when Black lives and experiences are truly seen and acknowledged. I create to narrate and leave an open invitation to whoever is willing to listen."    

Raymarah reflected on the lessons learned through developing her thesis, noting she will never feel satisfied while making work about the Black, human experience, “simply because it is one that will never be satisfied within itself.”  

However, this body of work has given her more confidence in her work, helped her better understand her creative phases and taught her to give herself grace in developing her ideas.  

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Still Life with Pear  

Nearby, Zoe's ephemeral installation “Still Life with Pear” casts an ethereal glow. Each of the pieces in the ensemble are meant to echo to the next, recording her attention to light in the gallery space.  

Using materials like plaster, pear seeds, silk screen, wood photography, projected and natural light, Zoe created the installations to be site-specific. “I like the ephemerality of this kind of work because the light will change in a week or so,” she explained. “The absence of that initial position of light speaks to themes of transience and memory in my work.”  

Zoe reflects on her father’s job as a photographer — giving him a specific eye for how objects catch the light. “There is a language of light that my grandfather passed to my dad, who passed it on to me,” she explained. “Attention to light has become an abiding practice for me.”  

After her father’s cancer diagnosis four years ago, she says her eyes now watch for absence of light, too. Her gossamer mixed-media pieces invite viewers on that very journey of noticing absence and light. "We can notice the presence bound to absence if we pay attention," she invited.  

This is Zoe’s first synthesis of her philosophical and artistic interests. She says the longer she has studied the two, the more each influences the other. She credits lessons learned to her Watkins classes and professors, saying her Philosophy of the Arts class with Dr. Andrew Davis “cracked everything open,” and Advanced Studio: Exhibition with Kristi Hargrove gave her conceptual projects that challenged her understanding of what art should or could be. Finally, her sculpture professor Thomas Sturgill has been an immense support and catalyst in her critical thinking and creative decision making.  

“This project is just one step in a lifetime of creating. I think I get caught up trying to say everything at once,” Zoe reflected. “I did a solo show last spring at the Watkins Art Gallery, and it’s cool to see how some of those concepts have lingered or changed completely... some materials have stayed the same. This thesis felt informed by last year's work, so it builds on itself in really cool ways, and it’s nice to remember I don’t have to have it all figured out.”  

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Still Life with Pear in the gallery

Gallery View

Of Lungs installation

This image is part of a larger installation that stretches from the window to the opposite wall. The window is lined with a painted silkscreen. Light can only pour through the unpainted section of the screen. At 7:24, the direct morning light eclipses just the photograph before sliding onto the wall and floor.

Of Lungs installation

Zoe marked the wall and floor with black seeds where the light stretches past the suspended image.

Of Lungs installation zoomed in

She titled this installation piece, Of Lungs, in the hopes that an absence of the word “pair” might tie this piece into the title of the show.

Negative Pear

The pieces "Negative Pear" and "9:38 am Shadow" directly echo one another. Both utilize the absent form of a pear. In Negative Pear the plaster impression and light both act as negatives of a pear and its shadow. This is an important piece because it speaks to index, but it also exists actively in the way that a static photograph does not. Viewers can move their hands to interrupt the projected light.

9:38 am Shadow

9:38 am Shadow represents the empty space between a pear and its shadow in the gallery’s morning light. This solid shadow piece counters the active quality of the other piece and is positioned after the path of seeds to further imply the trajectory of morning light.

Core (a pair of pear lungs)

The piece, Core (a pair of pear lungs), was intentionally made to form a connection between the use of pears and the suspended photograph. There is a linguistic connection: “pair” of lungs and the “pear” fruit, which might be found in a still life. There is also a visual connection: the suspended seeds mirror the shape of the negative light in the photograph.

Step Back

The final piece is a small wooden panel stretched with silkscreen. A mirror sits behind a rectangular cutout and the gallery lights reflect the window shape onto the floor. The reflection is only visible from certain locations. This piece echoes the photograph of reflected light.

FUTURE BRINGERS

In another gallery section are Leslie's vibrant paintings and monumental steel sculpture, which form a joyful celebration of identity, resolve and community. Based on the idea that “we're stronger together," Leslie explained that she wanted to create an optimistic, playful perspective with bright colors in her installation of FUTURE BRINGERS to convey a message of self-love and compassion for others.  

As a future art educator, Leslie believes in the power of education and community and believes that the art educator’s role is founded in activism and progress. She said, “I wanted my work to stress the importance of acceptance and understanding each other as a way to contextualize social progress in America.”  

Using materials commonly found in K-12 art classrooms like acrylic paint, oil pastel and colored pencil for the paintings, she also ventured into steel welding for the first time for her sculpture, wanting to use steel to represent the strength and permanence of the LGBTQ+ community.  

Leslie said she is proud of herself for pushing herself to use a new material, as she typically works in 2D, and is thankful for professors like Sturgill for giving her the confidence that she could do it when she expressed nerves and hesitation about working with new tools.   

“Forgiveness and patience with myself influenced the work greatly,” she concluded. “Being kind to yourself when working can sometimes feel like you’re sacrificing good work, but in the end, I feel way better about what I accomplished.”  

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FUTURE BRINGERS sculpture

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(left to right) “New Love,” “New Machine” and “New Religion”

As these three artists prepare to chart their creative paths beyond Watkins, their thesis exhibitions stand as powerful beacons illuminating the depth of their journeys. Through their blend of passion, vulnerability and unwavering vision, Raymarah , Zoe and Leslie have crafted works that transcend the personal to become profound meditations on identity, ephemerality and the resolute human spirit.  

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    Prize-Winning Thesis and Dissertation Examples. Published on September 9, 2022 by Tegan George.Revised on July 18, 2023. It can be difficult to know where to start when writing your thesis or dissertation.One way to come up with some ideas or maybe even combat writer's block is to check out previous work done by other students on a similar thesis or dissertation topic to yours.

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    Tips for Writing Your Thesis Statement. 1. Determine what kind of paper you are writing: An analytical paper breaks down an issue or an idea into its component parts, evaluates the issue or idea, and presents this breakdown and evaluation to the audience.; An expository (explanatory) paper explains something to the audience.; An argumentative paper makes a claim about a topic and justifies ...

  8. How to Write a Thesis: A Guide for Master's Students

    Tip #2: Begin Work on the Thesis Statement and Break Up the Thesis into Manageable Sections. After selecting an appropriate topic and developing a central research question for the thesis statement, it is then necessary to apply the research and writing skills you have learned throughout your degree program.

  9. Guide to Writing Your Thesis/Dissertation : Graduate School

    Definition of Dissertation and Thesis. The dissertation or thesis is a scholarly treatise that substantiates a specific point of view as a result of original research that is conducted by students during their graduate study. At Cornell, the thesis is a requirement for the receipt of the M.A. and M.S. degrees and some professional master's ...

  10. Sample Essays

    Sample Essays. The breadth of Georgetown's core curriculum means that students are required to write for a wide variety of academic disciplines. Below, we provide some student samples that exhibit the key features the most popular genres. When reading through these essays, we recommend paying attention to their . 1.

  11. Harvard University Theses, Dissertations, and Prize Papers

    The Harvard University Archives' collection of theses, dissertations, and prize papers document the wide range of academic research undertaken by Harvard students over the course of the University's history.. Beyond their value as pieces of original research, these collections document the history of American higher education, chronicling both the growth of Harvard as a major research ...

  12. How to Write a Thesis Statement

    How to Tell a Strong Thesis Statement from a Weak One 1. A strong thesis statement takes some sort of stand. Remember that your thesis needs to show your conclusions about a subject. For example, if you are writing a paper for a class on fitness, you might be asked to choose a popular weight-loss product to evaluate. Here are two thesis statements:

  13. Find Student theses

    Student thesis: Doctoral Thesis › Doctor of Philosophy. File. Picture this: an investigation of the neural and behavioural correlates of mental imagery in childhood and adulthood with implications for children with ADHD. Author: Bates, K., 28 Oct 2024. Supervisor: Farran, E. (External person) (Supervisor) & Smith, M. (External person ...

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    This thesis statement is not debatable. First, the word pollution implies that something is bad or negative in some way. Furthermore, all studies agree that pollution is a problem; they simply disagree on the impact it will have or the scope of the problem. No one could reasonably argue that pollution is unambiguously good.

  15. Find Student theses

    Student thesis: Master's Thesis › Master of Science by Research (MScR) File. A Comparison of Eulemur Social Systems and Vocal Communication During the Mating Season: Implications for the Speciation and Conservation of Blue-Eyed Black Lemurs and Black Lemurs Author: Eschmann, C., 26 Jun 2019.

  16. Thesis

    HON 4V87, Honors Thesis, is usually taken during the final two semesters. As a variable hour class, student must register for the class and total number of credit hours, usually two hours each term. In HON 4V87, students are expected to draft substantial sections of the thesis essay, often around half the thesis during each semester.

  17. 25 Thesis Statement Examples (2024)

    Strong Thesis Statement Examples. 1. School Uniforms. "Mandatory school uniforms should be implemented in educational institutions as they promote a sense of equality, reduce distractions, and foster a focused and professional learning environment.". Best For: Argumentative Essay or Debate. Read More: School Uniforms Pros and Cons.

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    Student thesis: Doctoral Thesis. Geometry-Aware Deep Modeling of Dynamic 3D Point Cloud Sequences Author: ZENG, Y., 20 Feb 2024. Supervisor: HOU, J. (Supervisor) Student thesis: Doctoral Thesis. Neutronic-coupled Thermal Hydraulic Analysis of Two-phase Cooled Flow Blockage Condition in LFR

  19. The Beginner's Guide to Writing an Essay

    Come up with a thesis: The thesis is the central point or argument that you want to make. A clear thesis is essential for a focused essay—you should keep referring back to it as you write. Create an outline: Map out the rough structure of your essay in an outline. This makes it easier to start writing and keeps you on track as you go.

  20. Thesis and Dissertation

    All students completing a thesis or dissertation must complete a prospectus that is approved by the Research Committee and the Dean of the Graduate School prior to beginning research. Deadline: Graduate School approval must be obtained no later than the semester prior to the semester in which a student intends to graduate. A student cannot ...

  21. Student theses

    A breakthrough approach for the study of innovations that combines Actor Network Theory and Tribal Consumption: The case of the 3D printer and the Third Industrial Revolution. Barbara Jiménez Fuentes, Virginia Cimino. MSc in Brand and Communications Management, (Graduate Programme) Final Thesis, 2013. Student thesis: Master thesis.

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  23. Biology Grad Student's Thesis Explores Game Day Readiness in Female

    Having successfully defended his thesis this past winter titled, A Comparison of Different Modes of Morning Priming Exercise on Evening Jump, Lower Body Strength, and On-Ice Sprint Performance in Sub-Elite Female Hockey Players, Westcott is now implementing his research into his daily job as the Manager, Performance and Sport Science for Carleton University varsity athletes.

  24. DOC Thesis Progress Review memo

    32 months after initial registration (June) - third-year students. 44 months after initial registration (June) - fourth-year students. Re: Thesis Progress Review. As you will know, all research students are required to submit regular progress reports as stated in Prodecures and regulations (available at

  25. MS Thesis Defense

    MS Thesis Department of Environmental Science and Policy College of Science George Mason University Candidate: Samantha Cook Defense Date and Time: May 6, 2024 at 3:00pm Defense Location: Virtual Title: The Role of Symbiodiniaceae in Stony Coral Tissue Loss Disease Morbidity and Mortality Thesis Director: Dr. Esther Peters Committee: Dr. Jennifer Salerno, Dr. Andrew Baker

  26. Product Design Thesis Showcase

    We are thrilled to extend to you a special invitation to Montclair State University's highly anticipated Product Design Thesis Showcase! This event promises to be an inspiring celebration of creativity, innovation, and the culmination of months of hard work by our talented product design students. Whether you're an industry professional seeking fresh talent, a design […]

  27. Trust the Process: The 2024 UMA Senior Thesis Exhibition

    The graduating Art students of the University of Maine at Augusta will exhibit their senior thesis artwork in the Charles Danforth Gallery on UMA's Augusta campus in an exhibition entitled Trust the Process.The exhibition includes the work of seven artists and will open at noon with a public reception immediately after Commencement on Saturday, May 4.

  28. 3-Minute Thesis Winner Weber's Journey from Student to CEO

    By Michael Parker. ALBANY, N.Y. (April 25, 2024) —Alexis Weber has earned many titles during her time at UAlbany. The fifth-year PhD student from Jacksonville, Fla., recently added 3-Minute Thesis winner to her list of accolades, which also includes being selected for the 2024 Chancellor's Award for Student Excellence and earning one of the two $25,000 prizes for her presentation at the ...

  29. UMaine Augusta displays senior thesis exhibition

    AUGUSTA — The graduating art students of the University of Maine at Augusta will exhibit their senior thesis artwork in the Charles Danforth Gallery on UMA's Augusta campus in an exhibition ...

  30. BFA Thesis Presentations 2024

    The Leu Art Gallery is awash in color, light and emotion as senior B. F. A. students have their thesis projects on exhibition. For Zoe Nichols, Raymarah Watson-Cunningham and Leslie Lyons, these works dive into their personal explorations of identity, connection and the human experience. w hat is, a s is . Raymarah's striking portrait series "what is, as is" commands the central gallery wall.