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160+ Ways to Describe Weather

I keep a collection of descriptions that have pulled me into the books I read. I’m fascinated how authors can–in just a few words–put me in the middle of their story and make me want to stay there. This one’s 160+ Ways to Describe Weather.

A note: These are for inspiration only . They can’t be copied because they’ve been pulled directly from an author’s copyrighted manuscript (intellectual property is immediately copyrighted when published).

Evening shadows deepened into blue and purple.
The shadows retreated.
Sun was sinking toward the horizon, the pitiless white ball now an angry orange.
Fading afternoon in early June
Evening sky had turned to molten brass.
Sun still cast a faint yellow light through Slowly gathering evening.
Daylight had begun to drain away.
one-quarter of a moonlit night
silver-white moon hung
A half-moon rests in the fronds over our heads.
watching the horizon drain of color
The shadows slipped up the rocks as though the world were drowning in darkness.
deepening shadows made it a city of ghosts
barely visible in the fading light
the high heavens
Darkness settled around him.
The shadows slipped up the rocks.
Evening was crisp already, the last of sunset just a fading pale stripe in the western sky.
darkening river
the moon golden at dawn, turn purple just before sunset in the rainy season, sometimes has white and black stripes created by volcanic ash, calm and clear sometimes attended by only a single cloud
humpback shapes of conical hills
The last rays of sun skimmed the surface.
late afternoon sun
velvety darkness
night shattered like a mirror
the Southern Cross lying on its side, the green meadow bathed in the humid light of the sinking sun
The corners have just about disappeared into the shadows.
black branches that traced the blue-black heavens overhead
far away down the night sky
full moon a pale blue-white disk
night sky dull black
Stars were remote pinpricks.
a half-moon rests in the fronds over our heads
inky blackness
Thick clouds blotted out the stars.
A thin layer of clouds masked the full moon, filling the room with blue light.
Sun cast a luminescent glow.
The day was out of sync with his mood.
beautiful, 82 degrees, mild breeze, cloudless sunshine, a day for looking at a ball game
The air was cool but the sun was out.
The wind blew itself out overnight.
a web of clouds, back-lit by the failing sun, mist billowed through the trees and over the fields and hung low in the air, masking the camp in a ghostly gray
towering thunder clouds
Clouds threatening, but no rain predicted the 45-mile per hour gusts of drizzly wind.
brown cloud that passes for air
a wedge of sunlight bursting past the narrow window
The wind was icy and withering.
Heads bowed against the gusting wind.
Grit grated in his teeth. Dust was everywhere, blowing on the wind, leaving its scent in his nostrils.
as dust motes drifted
thirty miles over the horizon
razor edge of the horizon
cinder dust and gloom
The haze floated over the crowd like smoke from a doused fire.
Sun hanging in a pink haze of clouds and smog.
Fog yellowed by agricultural burning.
Fog began to billow across the road in a great grey mass like the effluent of a thousand smokestacks. The building was only a shadowy form, almost entirely lost to view.
Headlamps of cars did little to pierce the gloom.
The mist floated like smoke out of the cypress in the swamp.
dark clouds drifting over the hills
night was pitch
slice of sky
thick clouds blotted out the stars
a thin layer of clouds masked the full moon, filling the room with blue light
cool restful shady world with light filtering lazily through the treetops that meet high overhead and shut out the direct sunlight
saw the anvil of cloud coming in. “A thunderstorm.”
Cumulus clouds falling down to the…
A light breeze whispered through the trees.
cloud shadows
first cumulus clouds darkening into thunderheads
hold humidity like a sponge holds water
thick heat of the growing morning
fierce humidity
windless heat
It was surprisingly hot. He could feel the sweat roll down his sides and the dampness of the box up against his chest.
Even with the breeze, the air remained thick and hot, and it stills tank of petroleum.
sky as gray-white and sunless
against the fading layers of orange, yellow
shoulders hunched against the early morning damp and cool
fused warm light of dawn now creeping down the summit
bathed in sunlight
gold shadow not three inches from his leg
his breath steaming in the air
Snow pelted his face and he pulled up the collar of his overcoat to further shield him from the bitter weather.
rubbed his arms
A harsh winter wind blew out of a midnight sky. It roared out of the frigid north and thrashed the brooking forest. The force of it bent trees, whipping their bare branches like angry lashes. Shrieking across the river.
Cold was like that, seeping through her seven layers of clothing, attacking seams and zipper tracks and spots of thin insulation. The exposed skin on her face felt as if it had been touched with lit cigarettes.
frigid Friday morning
swirling snow
winter’s naked branches created a black tracework
The sun was climbing out of the deep well of winter, but it was still brutally cold.
winter colors daubed the land in colors of brown and gray
sunny, crisp and cool
The crisp air and clear sky energized his thoughts.

Rainy weather

grey wet morning
rain-swept and unpleasantly chilly
A flurry of rain stung my face.
Cold rain was beating down on my windshield.
The sky was leaden.
Downpour started in the early evening and continued on through the night, a heavy pelting of water that thundered against rooftops and drowned out the sound of all else. By morning, city streets were shallow rivers rushing toward the ocean.
Rain ran down the window, the streets gleamed.
damp paving stones
By the time it reaches the ground, it has spent its energy.
windshield wipers barely keeping up with the cold, hard rain
The rain came steady and cold against the windshield and rattled on the roof of the car.
turned her head away and looked out my window, where it had gotten dark and shiny with the lights glistening off the rain.
The maple trees were black and slick in the rain, their bare branches shiny. The flower bed was a soggy matting of dead stems.
The sky was low and gray.
Air was swollen.
the rain was steady and warm and vertical
drizzly rain
The sleety rain drizzled down, not very hard and not very fast, but steady.
Rain came down so hard it almost hurt, stinging the skin and blowing into the eyes and nose and mouth, but in the forest its fall is broken by the trees.
saw a distant flash of lightning, counted the seconds, and then said, “six miles, more or less.”

People in hot weather:

Heat wave hit, temperatures went soaring.
The heat hit them like a hand in the face.
strode into the dusk, into the stifling heat
The heat smacked the grin off his face.
Burst back into the blistering hot sun. Sweat immediately beaded across her brow. She could feel her T-shirt glue itself stickily to her skin.
I could feel the sweat form along my backbone and trickle down.
She slogged forward, feeling blotches of dark gray sweat bloom across the front of her T-shirt, while more trailed down the small of her back.
slogging across pavement as hot as ash in August.
white dress shirt, sharply pressed this morning, was now plastered against his chest
already short of breath, his lungs laboring as they headed down the path
still wrung out from working in the heat
Take your shirt off. Pop your underwear in the freezer. Dump a tray of ice cubes on your bed. Throw back some chilled vodka shots before you go to sleep.
The semi-drought slowly draining the life out of the grass and trees.
Only 7 in the morning, and already stocky hot. *** had a sheen across his forehead.
Sweat tricked from his forehead which he wiped with the back of his knotted, callused hand.
hundred degree heat, burning sun and parching salt
ninety-five outside, probably a hundred in the car. Not great weather for polyester suits
a fresh drop of sweat teared up on her brow and made a slow, wet path down the plane of her cheek
walking through a hair dryer
The heat slammed her like a blow.
*** cranked the air-conditioning. She stripped off her sweat-soaked clothes, climbed into the shower and scrubbed.
answered the phone while used the other hand to wipe the sweat from the back of her neck. God this heat was unbearable. The humidity level had picked up on Sunday and hadn’t done a thing to improve since.
*** thin green sundress was already plastered to her body while she could feel fresh dewdrops of moisture trickle stickily down between her breast.
Cradled the phone closer to her damp ear
Her face shiny with sweat.
Summer sun remained a brilliant, blinding white. No shade existed for miles and the heat rising up from the baked earth was brutal.
The summer heat came off the tarmac in waves.

Hot Weather

While the mercury climbed to a hundred degrees. Efforts started strong, then petered out. People got hot, got tired, got busy with other things—inside things.
Seemed to be bracing himself for leaving the cool comfort of air-conditioning behind and bursting once more into the heat
The heat settled in on them, rolling in like a heavy blanket and pressing them deep into their chairs while their clothing glued to their skin.
Even my teeth are sweating
The sun beat down relentlessly; even with the AC cranked up, she could feel the heat.
She could already feel sweat trickle down her back.
The sun burned white-hot overhead.
glass exploding from the heat of the sun
vanish in the dry season’s brown leaves

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Jacqui Murray is the author of the popular Man vs. Nature saga, the Rowe-Delamagente thrillers , and the acclaimed Building a Midshipman , the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy . She is also the author/editor of over a hundred books on integrating tech into education, adjunct professor of technology in education, blog webmaster, an Amazon Vine Voice , and a freelance journalist on tech ed topics. Look for her next prehistoric fiction, Savage Land Winter 2024

126 thoughts on “ 160+ Ways to Describe Weather ”

Nature and weather books often feature interactive elements such as questions, quizzes, or activities that encourage children to think critically and apply what they’ve learned.

It is really helpful

Thank you so much 🙏🙏🙏

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My pleasure, Luisa. Thank you for stopping by.

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Weaving words so perfectly – Thanks for sharing. And overnight, a transformation. Summer at last.,, .

These really inspire me. I often read through my collections when I’m stuck.

helped my writing

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Nice collection! A lot of poetic and inventive phrasing there.

✨🙏🕉🌱🌿🌳🌻💚🕊☯🐉✨

Weather is so many different things to different people. Not surprising I found 160 descriptions of it.

Ha! yes – that got me thinking about the old “Number of words for snow” question, and I found this . As a Scot myself though I have to say I am very, very skeptical of the final claim in that article!

I’ve heard of that, too. Luckily, my folks don’t have that problem but it is truly an issue if you’re writing about present-day groups in snowy lands.

Appreciate your list of ways to describe the weather. Timeless too. Here I am 2 years since your post and inspired by your creativity. Take care, Steve

It is timeless, isn’t it! When I put this list together, it helped me to better appreciate weather.

Impressive list. (Mine, now!) I’m compiling one for similes. Raymond Chandler makes me smile with his off the wall analogies. I recently added a Writing Terms Checklist on my free checklists page. It was too long for a post. Thanks for all you do!

I like checklists. I’ll check yours out!

Hi Jacqui, Thanks for reading my modest post. What an accomplished woman you are! What would we do without words, eh! Cheers. Joy x

Thanks, Joy. I enjoyed your thoughts. It’s amazing what inspired such accomplished writers as the Brontes.

Excellent list, Jacqui. I even get lots of ideas for titles, something I’m always struggling with entering competitions.

I grab these from books I read. You can probably tell I favor thrillers, action. I like ‘weather’ and ‘setting’ to be a character as much as the others.

That’s an amazing compilation. Thanks for sharing!!

Thanks! These sorts of lists inspire me.

An awesome post, Jacqui. Thank you. Weather intrigues. It is joy-filled and sometimes furious. God is bowling upstairs during a thunderstorm. Be well and enjoy the week. ox

Thanks–weather is fascinating. I like when I can feel it through an author’s words.

Indeed and thank you, Jacqui. Word play is an enjoyable activity. We have about seven months of winter, two days of spring and then summer at our end of the pond in Upstate New York. I love my four seasons. Be well.

7 months of winter. I didn’t know NY was that cold! Good to know so I never move there!

Jacqui, I laughed at your comment. We live near Lake Ontario and Oneida Lake and get frequent lake effect snow storms in winter. When I first moved to this area, I learned about lake effect snowstorms. We have excellent snow removal though so come on over sometime. Colorful in Autumn too.

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These are great, Jacqui! And yes, inspirational. It’s good to see how other authors describe things; it gives ideas on alternates.

It is. There are some very clever minds out there.

What an epic list 😀 Reminds me of a ‘music’ video we were recommended to watch for university called ’50 words for snow.’ It’s fun to think of different ways to describe things!

That must be put out by Eskimos. They know more about snow than anyone I’ve seen.

That’s a long list, Jacqui. So many ways to tell the day. Thanks for sharing this!

It’s one of my longest! Who knew?

That’s a lot of ideas for talking about the weather 🙂

Dinner party chat.

Quite eloquent 🙂

These lists are so inspirational! Thank you for posting this.

It is pretty interesting to view weather through so many literary eyes, innit?

Yes, indeed. I learn so much. 🙂

great list Jacqui. i use the weather regularly in my stories to create a specific mood. thanks for the info.

A bit of unexpected inspiration. Who knew weather was so interesting?

exactly, Jacqui. i also post weather images regularly on instagram. especially the colours of sunrises and sunsets in clouds during different seasons and different weather conditions.

Interesting post, Jacqui. Thanks.

I highlight memorable phrases in the Kindle books I read. Although I no longer transcribe them into a file on my computer (too time-consuming), the mere act of highlighting imprints the phrases in my mind. If an author particularly impresses me, I can scroll through the highlights and reread the highlights for inspiration.

That’s how I do it, too. I like it so well, I’ve migrated from being a print book reader to a Kindle reader.

It’s nice to see the wide variety of language. Not that it is needy. I can describe the weather currently in my area in one word — sucky! 😀

Ah South Korea. It rained most of the time on my one visit there. And no one but me seemed to care!

We’re having a monsoon right now. Don’t remember having a good one of these for a while.

I remember my son telling me July was the typhoon season, which is why we visited in May. Stay safe!

Nothing that crazy. We had a tropical depression pass through, but that’s it. It’s just wet.

I love the idea of keeping a notebook with descriptions that catch your attention. I’m going to start doing this.

Mine is so long,d I added a table of contents with links to the sections! I’m a bit nuts about it.

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I love the way you compile and share these lists with us, Jacqui. They are amazing and so helpful. Can I confess something? I share some of them with my creative writing students, and then give them prompts where they have to include 3 or more things from your lists. Will be interesting to see how I do that with weather. 🙂

This one got a little long. Who knew there were so many clever ways to describe weather?

I am flattered you share them! I would say weather could surprise them.

This one IS long – but weather gives us a lot to talk about and a lot to experience. I love the list. I will say, the prompt my students seem to love the best is. (are you sitting down?) “It was a dark and stormy night…” 🙂

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Thanks for sharing, Marina!

The English should love this…

I would say India not so much. Do you-all get anything other than hot and humid or too-darn-windy?

What a helpful post, Jacqui! It reminds me of how we can put effort into our descriptions.

BTW, you won a book on my blog. Please confirm there.

Ooh, sorry I missed that. I just went over and replied and then emailed my info to you. How exciting!

Reblogged this on quirkywritingcorner and commented: I love her lists of descriptions. I hope you find them as helpful as I do.

Thanks for sharing this! It puts to bed any thought that weather is boring, doesn’t it?

That’s quite a collection, Jacqui. Isn’t it amazing that each of us can conjure something unique?

It is! Next time you don’t know what to say to someone, you can eruditely talk about the weather!

That’s so funny. Weather ‘small’ talk. Who would’ve thought. 😂

Great post. That’s a wonderful collection

Thank you so much, Luisa. It’s hard to make weather interesting but some very clever authors have done just that.

Jacqui, I love this post. The more I have been reading, the more I recognize how important it is for authors to paint a picture in your mind. To be able to put you right in the middle of the books setting. Sometimes when my mind has trailed off the story, it is descriptions like these that put my mind right back in.

That’s true, innit. A little inspiration to start your day.

I love your descriptions of weather and the times of day. Such descriptions can help add a sense of time in a story (just as the phases of the moon or the stars can create time (crescent moon in evening is aa new waxing moon, crescent moon in morning before sunrise is a waxing moon just before the “dark of the moon” which are the three days the moon is in the shadow of the earth. As for stars: Orion in winter, Scorpus in summer, etc). The dog star in Canis Major, Sirius, the brightest star in the sky, rising in late summer (as it rises just before daylight) is linked to “dog days” of summer…

I also like the old graveside prayer that describes the end of life: “until the shadows lengthen and the busy world is hushed, and the fever of life is over, then in thy mercy grant us a safe lodging and a holy rest and peace at last.”

What a wonderful poem. I’ve copied it. It captures so much of the fear and hope.

Thanks for these awesome examples, Jacqui! Saving and sharing…

It’s always fun to talk about the weather, innit?

New Jersey weather: moist ‘n’ icky.

Good description, especially the ‘icky’.

I calls ‘em like I sees ‘em.

Oh my, Jacqui. I love your lists and that’s a good long one. Great thought starters. Thanks for sharing your collection!

Since we-all know we must cover weather, I thought these were clever asnd interesting ways to do that!

Ha ha ha. I love weather. 😀

Right now there is only one way to describe the weather here in my city: hot

Here, too, though I have an excellent fan in my home office.

Some great phrases here, Jacqui. I am reading The Long Walk by Bachman/King at the moment and that has some very descriptive phrases in it.

Oooh, I’ll have to look at him. I love nature writers.

It’s not a nature book, it is a dark psychological horror.

Woah! OK, that’s different!

Darn! All the things I was about to write! 😀

Hehee. These are beyond most of what I write but I’ve seen what you turn out. Excellent.

Wonderful post!

Thanks, Ed. Food for thought…

A lot, just wonderful and so helpful.

My goodness …. can I just say ‘HOT’ … luckily today it’s cooler with a sea breeze … I need to read them all – clever and thank you! Cheers Hilary

Hot works. Absolutely.

Hahaha can I just say HOT, or the weather outside is weather yeah?

What a wonderful list, Jacqui! These are descriptions that always make me pause and reread them to fully enjoy them. They do draw the reader deep the story. I enjoyed reading these, thanks:)

Thanks! They do that for me, too, and that’s why I couldn’t just read and move on. I had to note them!

Some of these are quite lovely. Thanks for sharing.

If you recognized them from your outdoors scenes, feel free to add a note!

I actually didn’t recognize any of them. 🤔

OMG, Jacqui. What an amazing list Thanks for sharing.

It’s really nice for those whose plots take place outdoors a lot!

BTW, finished your book. Couldn’t stop reading. Wonderful.

Thank you, Jacqui. You put a smile on my face:)

Wow, great post. Bookmarking.

Amazing how much there is to say about the weather, innit?

I love weather, the seasons, earth and sky. There were some lovely gems in this collection. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks, Mae. I didn’t used to think much about the weather until I had to write about it, and make it interesting! These really struck me.

A terrific resource Jacqui. Thank you.

Thanks so much, Brigid. I couldn’t believe how many weather descriptors I had!

Nice information thanks

Thanks! Everyone writes about weather, right?

Great list, Jacqui. Thanks so much for sharing.

Thanks, Jill. Who says weather isn’t interesting? Hmm??

I think I’d like to be a meteorologist in my next life. 🙂

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Thanks for sharing!

Wow this is very educative

I love how some writers weave their words so perfectly.

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How to Describe Weather in Writing (200+ Examples & Guide)

Weather can set the mood, reveal character, and foreshadow events. Whether you’re writing a novel, a short story, or an essay, effectively describing weather can immerse your readers in your world.

Here is a quick answer for how to describe weather in writing:

Describe weather in writing by focusing on key traits like temperature, intensity, duration, and season. Use vivid language to capture the essence of the weather, enhancing the mood and setting. Include specific details and sensory descriptions to make the scene come alive.

In this guide, you’ll learn everything you need to know about how to describe weather in writing.

Types of Weather to Include in Writing

Man writing on a typewriter in a storm -- How to Describe Weather in Writing

Table of Contents

Weather comes in different types, so let’s quickly look at some of the most common weather you’ll write about in your articles, essays, and stories.

Sunny : Bright, clear skies with lots of sunshine.
Rainy : Steady rain, drizzle, or thunderstorms.
Cloudy : Overcast skies, ranging from light to dense cloud cover.
Snowy : Snowfall, blizzards, or a light dusting of snow.
Windy : Breezy to strong winds that affect the surroundings.
Stormy : Thunderstorms, hurricanes, or other severe weather.
Foggy : Thick mist that reduces visibility.
Humid : Moist, heavy air that feels sticky.
Dry : Lack of moisture in the air, often leading to parched conditions.
Cold : Chilly temperatures that might include frost or ice.
Hot : High temperatures that can cause discomfort.
Misty : Light fog that creates a hazy effect.
Hazy : Dust or smoke in the air that obscures the view.

13 Traits of Weather to Describe in Writing

When it comes to learning how to describe weather in writing, you need to know these 13 traits.

1. Temperature

Temperature sets the scene’s physical context and can deeply influence characters’ clothing, behavior, and mood.

It’s more than just a number on a thermometer; it’s about how that number affects the characters and their environment.

High temperatures might cause sweat to bead on foreheads and tempers to flare, while low temperatures could lead to shivering bodies and hurried movements to find warmth.

Example 1 : The scorching heat made the pavement shimmer, and every breath felt like inhaling fire.
Example 2 : The biting cold numbed her fingers, turning her breath into tiny clouds of mist.
Example 3 : The mild temperature was perfect for an afternoon stroll, neither too hot nor too cold.

2. Intensity

The intensity of weather can create varying levels of tension or calmness in a scene.

Describing the strength of the weather can add depth and realism, making readers feel the weight of a torrential downpour or the lightness of a gentle breeze. Intense weather can heighten drama, indicating impending danger or climax, while mild weather can suggest tranquility or everyday normality.

Example 1 : The rain fell in a gentle drizzle, barely wetting the ground.
Example 2 : A fierce storm raged outside, with winds howling and lightning splitting the sky.
Example 3 : The sun beat down relentlessly, making every step a struggle.

3. Duration

The duration of weather events can significantly affect the plot and pacing of your story.

Short, sudden bursts of weather can add surprise and urgency, while prolonged conditions can establish a setting or mood that influences the characters’ long-term actions and emotions.

Depending on how it is portrayed, duration can also symbolize stability or change.

Example 1 : A sudden downpour soaked them within minutes.
Example 2 : Weeks of unbroken sunshine had turned the fields to dust.
Example 3 : The fog lingered for days, casting a gloomy pall over the town.

4. Time of Day

Weather changes throughout the day and these shifts can set different moods in your writing.

Morning weather can signify new beginnings, afternoon weather can illustrate the peak of activity, and evening weather can evoke a sense of closure or calm.

The interplay between the time of day and weather can add layers to your scenes, affecting how events are perceived.

Example 1 : The morning dew glistened on the grass as the sun began to rise.
Example 2 : By midday, the sun was high and unyielding, casting harsh shadows.
Example 3 : The cool evening breeze was a welcome relief after the day’s heat.

Each season brings distinct weather patterns, which can symbolize different themes or emotions in your story.

Spring often represents renewal and growth, summer can signify peak vitality and sometimes oppressive heat, autumn may symbolize change and decay, and winter can embody death, dormancy, or a stark beauty.

These seasonal weather conditions can help anchor your story in time and add symbolic depth.

Example 1 : Spring brought a fresh, floral scent to the air, promising new beginnings.
Example 2 : The summer heatwave left everyone seeking shade and cool drinks.
Example 3 : Autumn’s crisp air and falling leaves hinted at change and decay.

6. Precipitation

Precipitation, whether it’s rain, snow, or hail, can add layers of meaning and atmosphere to your writing.

It can symbolize cleansing, danger, or transition. Rain might create a romantic or melancholic mood, snow can suggest purity or isolation, and hail can indicate a fierce, chaotic environment.

Example 1 : The soft patter of rain on the roof was a soothing lullaby.
Example 2 : Snowflakes drifted lazily down, blanketing the world in silence.
Example 3 : Hailstones hammered the ground, causing everyone to seek shelter.

Wind creates movement and sound, adding dynamic elements to a scene.

It can convey mood and foreshadow events, from a gentle breeze that calms the characters to a howling gale that brings unease or signals a coming storm. Wind can also physically affect the environment, making leaves rustle, doors slam, or waves crash.

Example 1 : A gentle breeze rustled the leaves, carrying the scent of flowers.
Example 2 : The howling wind whipped through the streets, making doors slam.
Example 3 : A stiff breeze filled the sails, propelling the boat forward.

8. Humidity

Humidity affects how the weather feels and can influence characters’ comfort and actions.

High humidity can make the air feel heavy and sticky, causing discomfort and lethargy, while low humidity can make the air dry and crisp. Describing humidity helps convey the sensory experience of the environment.

Example 1 : The humid air clung to her skin, making every movement a chore.
Example 2 : Dry heat sucked the moisture from his mouth, leaving him parched.
Example 3 : The tropical humidity was oppressive, wrapping around him like a blanket.

9. Visibility

Visibility is often affected by fog, mist, or haze, which can add mystery or danger to scenes.

Limited visibility can enhance suspense, create a sense of isolation, or signal impending danger. It also affects how characters navigate their environment and interact with each other.

Example 1 : The fog was so thick that she could barely see a few feet ahead.
Example 2 : Mist swirled around their ankles, making the forest feel otherworldly.
Example 3 : Haze from distant wildfires blurred the horizon.

Weather creates sounds that can enhance a scene’s mood and realism.

The rumble of thunder, the steady drip of rain, or the whisper of wind through leaves can evoke specific emotions and add depth to your setting. Sound descriptions make your scenes more immersive and vivid.

Example 1 : Thunder rumbled in the distance, a warning of the storm to come.
Example 2 : The steady drip of rain on the window was hypnotic.
Example 3 : Wind chimes clinked softly in the breeze, a delicate melody.

Different weather conditions have distinct smells that can evoke strong memories and emotions.

Describing these scents adds another sensory layer to your writing, making scenes more relatable and engaging. The smell of rain, salt, or fresh snow can transport readers into the environment you’re creating.

Example 1 : The fresh scent of rain on dry earth was intoxicating.
Example 2 : The sharp tang of salt filled the air as the storm approached.
Example 3 : Snow carried a clean, crisp smell that invigorated her senses.

Describing how the weather feels can create a visceral connection for readers.

It encompasses the physical sensations of weather conditions, like the prick of cold rain, the warmth of the sun, or the chill of a breeze.

These tactile details make your descriptions more immersive and realistic.

Example 1 : The icy wind cut through his jacket, chilling him to the bone.
Example 2 : Warm sun on her face felt like a gentle caress.
Example 3 : The rain was cold and stinging, soaking her to the skin.

The quality of light changes with the weather and can set the tone for your scenes.

Different types of light, from the golden glow of sunrise to the harsh glare of midday sun or the eerie flashes of lightning, can create various atmospheres and highlight specific aspects of your scene.

Example 1 : Golden sunlight filtered through the leaves, casting dappled shadows.
Example 2 : Lightning illuminated the night in brief, blinding flashes.
Example 3 : The overcast sky muted the colors of the landscape, making everything look dull.

These detailed descriptions help create a vivid and immersive experience for readers, enhancing your storytelling by bringing the weather to life in your writing.

Here is a good video about how to describe weather in writing:

Best Words for Describing Weather in Writing

Use these words when describing the weather in your articles, essays, and stories.

Tempestuous
Frostbitten
Hail-filled
Sun-drenched
Snow-kissed

Best Phrases for Describing Weather in Writing

Now let’s look at some of the best phrases to use when describing weather in your writing.

The sun blazed down mercilessly.
A gentle breeze whispered through the trees.
Rain fell in a relentless downpour.
Snowflakes drifted like feathers.
The wind howled through the canyons.
Clouds gathered ominously on the horizon.
The air was thick with humidity.
A fog rolled in, shrouding everything in mystery.
The heat was oppressive, stifling every breath.
Lightning split the sky.
The morning dew sparkled on the grass.
A chill ran through the air.
Thunder rumbled in the distance.
The sky was a flawless blue.
Raindrops pattered on the roof.
The storm raged all night.
A crisp wind nipped at their noses.
The sun dipped below the horizon.
The day dawned bright and clear.
Frost covered the ground.
A hazy sun filtered through the clouds.
Snow blanketed the landscape.
The air was filled with the scent of rain.
Waves crashed against the shore.
A light drizzle began to fall.
The sky darkened with the approaching storm.
The sun was a blinding white disc.
A warm breeze caressed her face.
The cold was biting and unrelenting.
The rain turned to sleet.
The wind carried a salty tang.
A rainbow arched across the sky.
The air was crisp and invigorating.
The storm clouds loomed large.
The night was still and quiet.
The sun peeked through the clouds.
The ground was slick with rain.
A veil of mist obscured the path.
The heat shimmered off the pavement.
A gale-force wind swept through the valley.
The sun’s rays were weak and pale.
The air was fresh and clean.
The sky was streaked with pink and gold.
The storm broke with a fury.
The rain was a steady, soothing patter.
The sky cleared, revealing a starry night.
The day was gray and dreary.
A heavy fog settled over the town.
The sun shone with an almost blinding intensity.
The wind whipped around them, cold and fierce.
The air crackled with static.
Snowflakes danced in the air.
A veil of rain descended.
The sun’s rays pierced through the clouds.
The sky was a blanket of stars.
Frost etched patterns on the window.
The wind carried whispers of autumn.
Rain drummed a steady rhythm on the roof.
The sky wept in torrents.
The horizon was a blur of heatwaves.
Snow crunched underfoot.
The night was awash with moonlight.
Fog hugged the ground like a ghost.
The storm churned with fury.
A gentle drizzle kissed the earth.
The sun dipped into the horizon.
The sky was painted with twilight hues.
The wind whispered secrets through the trees.
Thunder rolled like distant drums.
The air was thick with anticipation.
The storm unleashed its wrath.
A breeze caressed the meadow.
The clouds hung low, brooding.
Sunlight filtered through the canopy.
The cold seeped into their bones.
The air was fragrant with rain.
Lightning split the night sky.
The air shimmered with heat.
The sun peeked over the horizon.
The storm clouds gathered ominously.
The wind howled through the alleyways.
The morning was crisp and clear.
Rain tapped a lullaby on the window.
The sun blazed with intensity.
The air was sharp with cold.
The storm was a maelstrom of fury.
The sky was a canvas of pastels.
Snow blanketed the world in white.
The night was calm and still.
The wind tugged at their clothes.
The air buzzed with humidity.
The sky glowed with dawn’s light.
Rain shimmered on the pavement.
The evening was awash with color.
The sun’s warmth enveloped them.
The clouds parted to reveal the moon.
The fog was a shroud of mystery.
The storm’s roar was deafening.
The air was cool and refreshing.

Examples of How to Describe Weather in Writing

I love examples so I wanted to share different full examples of how to describe weather in writing (in different genres).

Example 1: Fantasy

In the heart of the enchanted forest, the weather was as fickle as the magic that coursed through its ancient trees. A mist hung low, swirling around their feet like ghostly tendrils. The air was cool, with a crispness that hinted at the coming winter. As they ventured deeper, the light began to fade, and a chill breeze whispered through the branches, carrying the scent of pine and damp earth. Suddenly, the sky darkened, and a storm broke with a furious roar, lightning illuminating the forest in stark, brilliant flashes.

Example 2: Romance

The summer evening was perfect, with the sun setting in a blaze of orange and pink. A warm breeze rustled the leaves, carrying the sweet scent of blooming jasmine. As they walked along the beach, the sand still held the day’s heat, and the waves lapped gently at their feet. The air was soft and balmy, wrapping around them like a comforting embrace. The sky darkened to a deep indigo, and stars began to twinkle, casting a magical glow over the water.

Example 3: Thriller

The city was a labyrinth of shadows and secrets, and the weather mirrored its dark mood. A thick fog had settled in, muffling the sounds of the night. The air was heavy and damp, with a chill that seeped into his bones. As he made his way down the deserted street, the mist clung to him, reducing visibility to mere feet. Thunder rumbled ominously in the distance, and the occasional flash of lightning revealed fleeting glimpses of abandoned buildings and empty alleys. The rain began to fall in earnest, a steady, relentless downpour that turned the streets into rivers.

Example 4: Nonfiction

In the summer months, temperatures often soar to over 90 degrees Fahrenheit, creating a scorching environment that can be both a blessing and a curse for local farmers. While the heat helps to ripen crops quickly, it also necessitates increased irrigation to prevent soil from drying out and plants from wilting. The relentless sun beats down on the fields, making the air shimmer with heat and pushing both people and animals to seek shade during the hottest parts of the day. Farmers have had to adapt by adjusting their watering schedules and employing shade nets to protect sensitive crops from sunburn.

Final Thoughts: How to Describe Weather in Writing

Once you master weather descriptions, you’ll still need to know how to describe other things in writing.

Things like the wind, clouds, snow, and much more.

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Master List for Describing Weather

A lot of writers struggle with describing settings. I’ve written before about how to describe settings and why it matters , but a few people have told me they’d like me to do some of my master lists for writers to help them out!

I have a weird love for creating lists like this, so I’m happy to do it. “How to describe weather” seemed like a good place to start. This way, you won’t get stuck trying to figure out how to describe nice weather, or thinking up ways to describe rain. Hopefully, this will make your writing go faster.

I always include simple as well as more creative ways to describe or write about weather. Sometimes, the simple word is the one you want! I included dryness and humidity in a few of the categories because it felt weird for them to get their own.

As always, this is not a comprehensive list, and I might add to it. My list will probably make you think of other possibilities, too. Bookmark or pin it for future writing reference!

HOT WEATHER

blazing sunshine

glaring sun

baking in the sun

sun-drenched

scorching heat

extravagant heat

relentless sun

like a suana

dense tropical heat

radiating heat

blistering heat

oppressive heat

insufferable heat

suffocating heat

heat pressing down

searing sun

shimmering heat

like an oven

like a furnace

WARM / PLEASANT WEATHER

(“Pleasant” is a matter of opinion, of course.)

a beautiful day

a clear day

a temperate day

a golden day

a glorious day

heavenly weather

bright and sunny

a gorgeous spring day

a dazzling summer day

a brilliant autumn day

a vivid blue sky

a cloudless sky

fluffy white clouds

gentle sunshine

lazy sunshine

kind sunshine

filtered sunlight

dappled sunlight

welcome warmth

one of those rare, perfect days

the kind of day that made people forget to worry

the kind of day that lifted people’s moods

COOL WEATHER

refreshing air

stimulating cool air

invigorating cool air

bracing cool air

a nip in the air

a brisk day

a chilly day

weak sunshine

GRAY / OVERCAST WEATHER

(Most people don’t like gray days, so most of these descriptions are negative. I love them, so I had to add a few positive descriptions.)

colorless sky

a soft gray sky

a dove-gray sky

a gray day made for books and tea

steel-gray sky

granite sky

cement-gray sky

threatening clouds

foreboding clouds

COLD WEATHER

glacial air

bitter cold

brutal cold

bone-chilling cold

penetrating cold

devastating cold

numbing cold

punishing cold

dangerous cold

unforgiving cold

too cold to talk

so cold it burned one’s lungs

so cold it took one’s breath away

like a blast from a hair dryer

a gust of wind

insistent winds

heavy winds

strong winds

cutting wind

whipping winds

biting wind

wintry squall

violent gale

howling wind

shifting winds

restless wind

fresh breeze

soft breeze

balmy breeze

perfumed breeze

slight breeze

hint of a breeze

stirring breeze

wind rustling through the trees

fine drizzle

gray drizzle

pebbles of falling rain

spitting rain

stinging rain

steady rain

rain falling in torrents

cascades of rain

rain beating down

shower of rain

sheets of rain

hard-driving rain

pelting rain

lashing rain

slashing rain

THUNDER AND LIGHTNING

rumbling in the distance

a roll of distant thunder

crash of thunder

crackle of thunder

crack of thunder

clap of thunder

bang of thunder

booming thunder

rattled with thunder

earth-shaking thunder

tempestuous

a furious storm

flash of lightning

streaks of lightning

SNOW AND ICE

flurries of snow

dancing flakes

snowflakes floating down

snowflakes wafting down

swirling snow

falling thick and fast

big flakes falling like petals

blinding snowstorm

raging blizzard

sparkling expanses

blankets of white

caked with snow

boulders of snow

branches coated in ice

glittering ice

crystallized by frost

silvered with frost

clouds of mist

swirling mist

billowing fog

cloaked in mist

cocooned in fog

shrouded in fog

enveloped by fog

smothered by fog

made mysterious by fog

the fog rolled in

the fog was burning off

the fog was lifting

the fog was clearing

the fog was dissipating

I have many lists like this in my book Master Lists for Writers: Thesauruses, Plots, Character Traits, Names, and More . Check it out!

Master Lists for Writers by Bryn Donovan

Do you describe weather conditions in your writing? Do you have a favorite example of a weather description? Let me know in the comments! Thanks for reading, and happy writing!

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26 Metaphors for Weather: Exploring the Vivid Language of Nature

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Weather has always fascinated us, inspiring poets, writers, and everyday conversations. It’s amazing how the elements can be described in countless ways, each metaphor painting a unique picture of nature’s moods. In this article, we delve into the world of weather metaphors, exploring 26 captivating expressions that bring the elements to life.

26 Metaphors for Weather

The Sky’s Tears – Describing rain as “the sky’s tears” conveys a sense of sadness or melancholy.
A Blanket of Snow – Snowfall can be compared to a cozy blanket covering the ground.
The Roar of Thunder – Thunderstorms are nature’s orchestra, with thunder as its powerful percussion.
The Whispering Wind – Gentle breezes are like whispers from the wind, carrying secrets and stories from afar.
The Sun’s Embrace – Sunshine can be described as the warm and comforting embrace of the sun.
Mist’s Mysteries – Fog and mist can shroud the world in mystery, concealing what lies beyond.
The Icy Grip of Winter – Winter’s chill can be compared to an icy grip, as it freezes everything in its path.
Dancing Raindrops – When raindrops fall , they dance on surfaces, creating a rhythmic and soothing melody.
The Breath of Autumn – The cool, crisp air of autumn is like a refreshing breath of nature.
The Fiery Sunset – A sunset can be likened to a fire in the sky, painting the horizon with vibrant colors.
The Hush of Snowfall – As snow falls gently to the ground, it creates a hushed atmosphere.
The Wrath of the Storm – Storms can be described as nature’s fury, unleashing its anger upon the world.
The Gentle Caress of Spring – Spring’s arrival is like a gentle caress, awakening the world from its slumber.
The Ocean’s Sigh – Waves crashing on the shore can be compared to the deep sighs of the ocean.
The Whispers of the Leaves – Rustling leaves in the wind are like whispers from the trees, sharing their secrets with the world.
The Velvet Night – A clear, starry night can be described as velvety, soft, and full of dreams .
The Embrace of the Tides – High tides can be likened to the sea’s loving embrace, reaching out to touch the shore.
The Song of the Birds – Birdsong in the morning is like nature’s symphony, announcing the arrival of a new day.
The Scent of Rain – The earthy smell that follows rain can be compared to nature’s perfume.
The Breath of Summer – Summer’s warmth is like a gentle breath, wrapping us in its comforting embrace.
The Laughter of Sunshine – Sunshine can be described as nature’s laughter, bringing joy and brightness.
The Cradle of Clouds – Clouds can be seen as a cradle, rocking the sky to sleep with their gentle movements.
The Velvet Touch of Dusk – Dusk, with its soft, fading light, is like a velvet touch, signaling the end of the day.
The Symphony of Rainbows – Rainbows are nature’s symphony of colors, a beautiful and harmonious display.
The Whispers of the Stars – The night sky, adorned with stars, seems to whisper the secrets of the universe.
The Fury of a Hurricane – Hurricanes can be likened to nature’s fury, a powerful and destructive force.

These metaphors add vividness and depth to descriptions of weather, allowing readers to visualize and connect with nature in a unique way.

1. The Sky’s Tears

Alternative Words/Phrases:

Heavenly Weeping
Celestial Crying
Atmospheric Sorrow

Explanation: “The Sky’s Tears” is a metaphor that poetically describes rain as if the sky is shedding tears. It conveys a sense of sadness or sorrow associated with rainy weather.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a formal email discussing a weather-related event or news, you can use this metaphor to add a touch of literary flair. For example, “Dear colleagues, due to the recent inclement weather, the sky’s tears have been relentless, causing flooding in several areas.”

Informal Context: When chatting with friends about a rainy day, you might say, “I love how the sky’s tears make everything feel fresh and clean.”

Example Sentence: “The sky’s tears fell gently upon the garden, nurturing the flowers and bringing life to the earth .”

2. A Blanket of Snow

White Comfort
Winter’s Cover
Frosty Blanket

Explanation: “A Blanket of Snow” compares snowfall to a cozy covering that blankets the ground, creating a serene and peaceful landscape.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a formal report about winter weather conditions, you can use this metaphor to describe the extent of snowfall. For instance, “The region experienced a substantial blanket of snow, resulting in travel disruptions.”

Informal Context: When sharing your excitement about the first snowfall with friends, you might say, “Waking up to a world covered in a blanket of snow is pure magic!”

Example Sentence: “The town was enveloped in a pristine blanket of snow, muffling the sounds of the bustling city.”

3. The Roar of Thunder

Thunder’s Symphony
Sky’s Drumroll
Nature’s Percussion

Explanation: “The Roar of Thunder” likens thunderstorms to a powerful orchestra, with thunder serving as its percussion instrument. It conveys the intensity and dramatic nature of thunderstorms.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a scientific paper discussing atmospheric phenomena, you can use this metaphor to describe thunder’s role. For example, “Thunder, often referred to as the roar of thunder, is a result of rapid air expansion during lightning strikes.”

Informal Context: When chatting with friends during a thunderstorm, you might say, “Did you hear that incredible roar of thunder? It felt like the sky’s drumroll!”

Example Sentence: “The roar of thunder echoed through the valley, shaking the ground with its sheer power .”

4. The Whispering Wind

Breezy Whispers
Zephyr’s Secrets
Gentle Murmurs

Explanation: “The Whispering Wind” compares gentle breezes to whispers from the wind, suggesting a sense of mystery and tranquility in the air.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a travel brochure describing a serene destination, you can use this metaphor to evoke a sense of calm. For instance, “Visit our resort and experience the soothing embrace of the whispering wind.”

Informal Context: When enjoying a peaceful evening with friends outdoors, you might say, “I love how the whispering wind rustles through the trees, it’s so relaxing.”

Example Sentence: “As the sun set, the whispering wind carried the scent of blooming flowers, creating a serene atmosphere.”

5. The Sun’s Embrace

Sunshine’s Warmth
Radiant Embrace

Explanation: “The Sun’s Embrace” portrays sunshine as a warm and comforting embrace from the sun. It conveys the idea of light, happiness, and positivity.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a motivational speech, you can use this metaphor to inspire optimism. For example, “Just as the sun’s embrace brightens our day, let positivity embrace your life.”

Informal Context: When complimenting a friend’s cheerful demeanor, you might say, “Your smile feels like a ray of the sun’s embrace!”

Example Sentence: “As I stepped into the sunlight, I felt the sun’s embrace warming my skin and lifting my spirits.”

6. Mist’s Mysteries

Enigmatic Fog
Fog’s Secrets
Veil of Mystery

Explanation: “Mist’s Mysteries” describes fog and mist as shrouding the world in mystery, concealing what lies beyond. It suggests an element of intrigue and uncertainty.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a mystery novel’s atmospheric description, you can use this metaphor to set the mood. For instance, “The mist’s mysteries enveloped the ancient castle, hiding its secrets.”

Informal Context: When describing a foggy morning walk, you might say, “Walking through the mist’s mysteries felt like exploring a hidden world.”

Example Sentence: “The mist’s mysteries veiled the forest, creating an eerie and enchanting ambiance.”

7. The Icy Grip of Winter

Winter’s Chill
Frosty Embrace
Freezing Grasp

Explanation: “The Icy Grip of Winter” characterizes winter’s cold as an icy grip, emphasizing its ability to freeze everything in its path.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a safety advisory about winter weather, you can use this metaphor to highlight the dangers of extreme cold. For example, “Beware of the icy grip of winter, which can pose severe health risks.”

Informal Context: When describing a particularly cold day, you might say, “I could feel the icy grip of winter as I stepped outside.”

Example Sentence: “The icy grip of winter turned the lake into a crystal-clear wonderland, with its surface frozen in time.”

8. Dancing Raindrops

Rain’s Ballet
Precipitation’s Waltz
Liquid Choreography

Explanation: “Dancing Raindrops” portrays raindrops as gracefully dancing when they fall, creating a rhythmic and soothing melody.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a weather documentary, you can use this metaphor to describe rain’s beauty. For instance, “Watch as the dancing raindrops create a mesmerizing display in the heart of the storm.”

Informal Context: When reminiscing about a rainy day with a friend, you might say, “I sat by the window, listening to the soothing music of the dancing raindrops.”

Example Sentence: “The dancing raindrops on the rooftop provided a tranquil background score to the evening.”

9. The Breath of Autumn

Fall’s Exhale
Autumn’s Sigh
Seasonal Breeze

Explanation: “The Breath of Autumn” likens the cool, crisp air of autumn to a refreshing breath of nature, symbolizing the changing of seasons.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a travel brochure promoting autumn getaways, you can use this metaphor to emphasize the rejuvenating aspects of the season. For example, “Experience the invigorating breath of autumn at our scenic retreat.”

Informal Context: When discussing your favorite season with friends, you might say, “There’s something magical about the breath of autumn, with its cool, crisp air.”

Example Sentence: “As I walked through the forest, I could feel the breath of autumn on my skin, a reminder of the changing seasons.”

10. The Fiery Sunset

Sunset’s Blaze
Dusk’s Inferno
Evening’s Fireworks

Explanation: “The Fiery Sunset” describes a sunset as resembling a fire in the sky, with vibrant colors painting the horizon.

Scenario: Formal Context: In an art critique, you can use this metaphor to analyze a painting of a sunset. For instance, “The artist captured the intensity of the fiery sunset with bold strokes of color.”

Informal Context: When sharing your admiration for a stunning sunset with a friend, you might say, “Tonight’s fiery sunset was like nature’s own fireworks display!”

Example Sentence: “The fiery sunset bathed the landscape in hues of orange, red, and gold, creating a breathtaking spectacle.”

11. The Hush of Snowfall

Snow’s Silence
Silent Blizzard
Winter’s Quiet

Explanation: “The Hush of Snowfall” characterizes the falling snow as creating a hushed atmosphere, suggesting a peaceful and serene ambiance.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a winter safety guide, you can use this metaphor to emphasize the need for caution during heavy snowfall. For example, “During the hush of snowfall, it’s crucial to stay prepared for adverse weather conditions.”

Informal Context: When reminiscing about a snow day with friends, you might say, “There’s something magical about the hush of snowfall, everything feels so calm.”

Example Sentence: “As the snowflakes descended, the hush of snowfall blanketed the city in tranquil stillness.”

12. The Wrath of the Storm

Storm’s Fury
Tempest’s Rage
Nature’s Fury

Explanation: “The Wrath of the Storm” depicts storms as nature’s fury, highlighting their power, intensity, and potential for destruction.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a news report covering a severe storm, you can use this metaphor to convey the seriousness of the situation. For instance, “The wrath of the storm left a trail of devastation in its wake.”

Informal Context: When discussing stormy weather with friends, you might say, “I’ve never seen the ocean so turbulent, it’s like witnessing the wrath of the storm.”

Example Sentence: “The wrath of the storm unleashed torrential rain and fierce winds, causing widespread damage.”

13. The Gentle Caress of Spring

Spring’s Tender Touch
Season’s Embrace
Nature’s Affection

Explanation: “The Gentle Caress of Spring” describes the arrival of spring as a gentle and tender touch from the season, awakening the world from its slumber.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a botanical magazine highlighting the beauty of spring blooms, you can use this metaphor to convey the nurturing aspect of spring. For example, “Experience the gentle caress of spring as blossoms grace our gardens.”

Informal Context: When expressing your love for spring to a friend, you might say, “I adore the gentle caress of spring; it’s like nature’s way of saying ‘hello.'”

Example Sentence: “As the days grew longer, the gentle caress of spring brought forth vibrant flowers and lush greenery.”

14. The Ocean’s Sigh

Seaside Murmur
Coastal Whispers
Waves’ Exhale

Explanation: “The Ocean’s Sigh” likens the sound of waves crashing on the shore to the deep, soothing sighs of the ocean, creating a sense of tranquility.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a relaxation guide promoting coastal getaways, you can use this metaphor to evoke a sense of calm and peace. For instance, “Find solace in the ocean’s sigh during your seaside retreat.”

Informal Context: When describing a recent beach vacation to friends, you might say, “Listening to the ocean’s sigh every morning was the best part of our trip.”

Example Sentence: “The ocean’s sigh, a symphony of waves, lulled me into a state of complete relaxation.”

15. The Whispers of the Leaves

Foliage’s Secrets
Trees’ Murmurs
Rustling Conversations

Explanation: “The Whispers of the Leaves” portrays the rustling of leaves in the wind as akin to whispers from the trees, suggesting a connection between nature and its observers.

Scenario: Formal Context: In an environmental awareness campaign, you can use this metaphor to emphasize the importance of preserving natural spaces. For example, “Protecting our forests ensures the continued whispers of the leaves for generations to come.”

Informal Context: When sharing your love for the outdoors with friends, you might say, “There’s something magical about the whispers of the leaves in the forest—it’s like nature’s own conversation.”

Example Sentence: “As I walked through the woods, the whispers of the leaves created a serene and enchanting atmosphere.”

16. The Velvet Night

Night’s Softness
Evening’s Elegance
Starry Velvet

Explanation: “The Velvet Night” describes a clear, starry night as soft and elegant, full of dreams and tranquility.

Scenario: Formal Context: In a stargazing event announcement, you can use this metaphor to set the mood for an evening of celestial observation. For instance, “Join us for an enchanting night under the velvet night sky, where stars twinkle like diamonds.”

Informal Context: When expressing your fascination with the night sky to friends, you might say, “There’s something truly magical about the velvet night—it feels like the universe is wrapped in beauty.”

Example Sentence: “As I gazed at the starry, velvet night, I couldn’t help but feel a sense of wonder and awe.”

Frequently Asked Questions

Q: Are these metaphors commonly used in literature?

Yes, many of these metaphors are frequently used in literature, poetry, and everyday language to vividly describe weather phenomena.

Q: Can I create my own weather metaphors?

Absolutely! Creating your own weather metaphors can be a fun and creative way to express yourself and describe the world around you.

Q: Do weather metaphors vary by culture?

Yes, different cultures may have their own unique weather metaphors and expressions based on their climate and experiences.

Q: Are weather metaphors only used in English?

No, weather metaphors are used in many languages to convey the beauty and moods of the elements.

Q: Do these metaphors have deeper meanings?

Some weather metaphors may carry deeper symbolic meanings, while others are more straightforward descriptions of weather phenomena.

Q: Can I use these metaphors in my writing?

Absolutely! These metaphors can add depth and vividness to your writing, making it more engaging and descriptive.

Exploring the world of weather metaphors is like embarking on a poetic journey through the elements. Each metaphor paints a unique and vivid picture of nature’s moods, from the gentle caress of spring to the fury of a hurricane.

By incorporating these metaphors into your writing, you can add depth and beauty to your descriptions of the world around you.

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Describe The Weather In Writing With Better Vocabulary

When you describe the weather in writing, you set the scene for your story or a part of your story.

It’s an opportunity to show readers the setting rather than tell them about the weather using a couple of quick adjectives.

Using highly descriptive or figurative language and a variety of grammar structures helps you paint the picture vividly in a reader’s mind.

In almost every story, both fiction and nonfiction, there is usually at least one reference to the weather.

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How to describe the weather in writing

We all know this famous opening line from Edward Bulwer-Lytton’s 1830 novel, Paul Clifford.

It was a dark and stormy night.

Many have criticized the phrase, and Writer’s Digest went as far as to call it the literary poster child for bad story starters.

The main issue is that it uses two very weak adjectives: dark and stormy. Neither of them is usefully descriptive.

The second problem with the phrase is that it starts with a grammatical expletive .

When writing about the weather, using it was, or there was is a common writing fault. It’s because we so often refer to the weather as it.

But few people take into account what follows Bulwer-Lytton’s famous clause. It’s a pity because the complete sentence is a wonderful example of how to describe the weather in writing.

It was a dark and stormy night ; the rain fell in torrents—except at occasional intervals, when it was checked by a violent gust of wind which swept up the streets (for it is in London that our scene lies), rattling along the housetops, and fiercely agitating the scanty flame of the lamps that struggled against the darkness.

He uses descriptive noun phrases , strong verbs, and powerful adjectives.

The combination of these three elements paints a vivid picture for readers.

Choosing your vocabulary

You can find many lists of common and unusual words to describe the weather, so you have plenty of choices.

But you should avoid words that are too simplistic. It was hot, cold, windy, or rainy are all very weak expressions.

But if you describe the heat, the cold, the wind, or the rain with noun phrases, you can improve these easily.

The sun started baking early across the plains, delivering a scorching promise for the day ahead.

The cruel icy wind cut like a knife across her cheeks.

Rain, as always, arrived too little, too late to save the crops.

Words that are not widely understood are also worth avoiding. While it’s interesting to find new words, not all of them are useful.

A good example is petrichor. It is the smell or scent of rain arriving after a period of dry weather.

But it is difficult to use, and it might send readers hunting for a dictionary.

The petrichor gave a hint of hope to the farmers.

It would be better to use a descriptive phrase.

The sweet far off scent of rain on dying grass gave hope to the farmers.

Brontide is another, meaning the sound of distant thunder or rumblings of an earth tremor. Again, it’s a great word to know, but with very limited use in writing.

Try this simple formula

Anytime you need to write about the weather, keep this little trick in mind.

Start with a noun phrase, use a strong verb , then add a descriptive clause .

You also need to describe the noun and verb with adjectives and adverbs.

Here’s a quick example.

The heavy dark clouds rolled slowly and low across the parched pastures, but they were heartbreakers, as not a drop of rain fell before the cruel wind carried them away.

It’s an easy way to make sure you avoid the grammatical expletive and weak adjectives.

You can also experiment with similes or metaphors . For example, raining cats and dogs.

Use verbs that sound like the weather

Onomatopoeic verbs and words are perfect for describing the weather because they make a sound.

Here are a few examples to illustrate sound words.

The pitter-patter of raindrops.

Thunder rumbled overhead.

Light hail pinged on the window pane.

With each step, the fresh snow crunched underfoot.

A bolt of lightning cracked across the night sky.

A cold north wind hissed through the trees.

A sudden boom of thunder forewarned us of the approaching storm.

Verbs and words like these are extremely useful because they are action words and highly descriptive.

This article is not a lesson or lecture on how to describe the weather in writing.

It’s purely a reminder that you can always improve.

I have listed a few ideas above, but there are many more ways you can make the weather more interesting.

All it takes is to remember that the setting for a scene or a story needs careful thought and imagination.

But if there are two key takeaways from my article, they are these.

1. Avoid using the grammatical expletive when referencing the weather.

2. Use noun phrases and strong verbs.

If you do those two things, the rest of your weather scene setting will come very easily.

Related reading: Words To Avoid In Writing That Say Nothing

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Let it snow: 6 of the best descriptions of winter weather in literature.

Oh, the weather outside is frightful! But the reading is so delightful… Weather (sorry) or not you love the snow—blanketing your driveway, stalling your subway lines—it’s hard to deny that there have been some pretty darn good descriptions of it in literature, the kind that make you want to curl up by the fire (or, in my case, the space heater). Personally, I think I like winter weather best when it’s on the page and not the thing standing between me and the closest bar or the corner bodega when I’m out of popcorn. In an attempt to reframe the cold months ahead for myself, I have assembled some of the most beautiful/relatable descriptions of snow I could find in fiction. Perhaps now I will think of it as one of these instead of being irrationally irritated by Mother Nature’s cruel attempts to curb my snacking and my social life. So, here we go: let it snow! Sit down with these delightfully icy passages, and keep the hot cocoa coming.

From Leo Tolstoy’s Anna Karenina :

At first she was unable to read. To begin with she was bothered by the bustle and movement; then, when the train started moving, she could not help listening to the noises; then the snow that beat against the left-hand window and stuck to the glass, and the sight of the conductor passing by, all bundled up and covered with snow on one side, and the talk about the terrible blizzard outside, distracted her attention. Further on it was all the same; the same jolting and knocking, the same snow on the window, the same quick transitions from steaming heat to cold and back to heat, the same flashing of the same faces in the semi-darkness, and the same voices, and Anna began to read and understand what she was reading.

From Italo Calvino’s If on a winter’s night a traveler :

So here I am walking along this empty surface that is the world. There is a wind grazing the ground, dragging with flurries of fine snow the last residue of the vanished world: a bunch of ripe grapes which seems just picked from the vine, an infant’s woolen bootee, a well-oiled hinge, a page that seems torn from a novel written in Spanish, with a woman’s name: Amaranta. Was it a few seconds ago that everything ceased to exist, or many centuries? I’ve already lost any sense of time.

From Ali Smith’s Winter :

And here instead’s another version of what was happening that morning, as if from a novel in which Sophia is the kind of character she’d choose to be, prefer to be, a character in a much more classic sort of story, perfectly honed and comforting, about how sombre yet bright the major-symphony of winter is and how beautiful everything looks under a high frost, how every grassblade is enhanced and silvered into individual beauty by it, how even the dull tarmac of the roads, the paving under our feet, shines when the weather’s been cold enough and how something at the heart of us, at the heart of all our cold and frozen states, melts when we encounter a time of peace on earth, goodwill to all men; a story in which there is no room for severed heads; a work in which Sophia’s perfectly honed minor-symphony modesty and narrative decorum complement the story she’s in with the right kind of quiet wisdom-from-experience ageing-female status, making it a story that’s thoughtful, dignified, conventional in structure thank God, the kind of quality literary fiction where the slow drift of snow across the landscape is merciful, has a perfect muffling decorum of its own, snow falling to whiten, soften, blur and prettify even further a landscape where there are no heads divided from bodies hanging around in the air or anywhere, either new ones, from new atrocities or murders or terrorisms, or old ones, left over from old historic atrocities and murders and terrorisms and bequeathed to the future as if in old French Revolution baskets, their wickerwork brown with the old dried blood, placed on the doorsteps of the neat and central-heating-interactive houses of now with notes tied to the handles saying please look after this head thank you […]

From Donna Tartt’s The Secret History :

The snow in the mountains was melting and Bunny had been dead for several weeks before we came to understand the gravity of our situation.

From Kelly Link’s Stranger Things Happen :

The next day it was snowing and he went out for a pack of cigarettes and never came back. You sat on the patio drinking something warm and alcoholic, with nutmeg in it, and the snow fell on your shoulders. You were wearing a short-sleeved T-shirt; you were pretending that you weren’t cold, and that your lover would be back soon. You put your finger on the ground and then stuck it in your mouth. The snow looked like sugar, but it tasted like nothing at all.

From Charles Dickens’ A Christmas Carol :

Holly, mistletoe, red berries, ivy, turkeys, geese, game, poultry, brawn, meat, pigs, sausages, oysters, pies, puddings, fruit, and punch, all vanished instantly. So did the room, the fire, the ruddy glow, the hour of night, and they stood in the city streets on Christmas morning where (for the weather was severe) the people made a rough, but brisk and not unpleasant kind of music, in scraping the snow from the pavement in front of their dwellings, and from the tops of their houses, whence it was mad delight to the boys to see it come plumping down into the road below, and splitting into artificial little snow-storms.

The house fronts looked black enough, and the windows blacker, contrasting with the smooth white sheet of snow upon the roofs, and with the dirtier snow upon the ground; which last deposit had been ploughed up in deep furrows by the heavy wheels of carts and wagons; furrows that crossed and re-crossed each other hundreds of times where the great streets branched off; and made intricate channels, hard to trace, in the thick yellow mud and icy water. The sky was gloomy, and the shortest streets were choked up with a dingy mist, half thawed, half frozen, whose heavier particles descended in a shower of sooty atoms, as if all the chimneys in Great Britain had, by one consent, caught fire, and were blazing way to their dear hearts’ content. There was nothing very cheerful in the climate of the town, and yet was there an air of cheerfulness abroad that the clearest summer air and brightest summer sun might have endeavoured to diffuse in vain.

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Power Your Fiction: Using Weather To Create Mood, Not Clichés

Angela Ackerman

Are you afraid of using the weather in your writing? If so, you're not alone. After all, if not careful, weather description can be a minefield of clichés. The sunny, cloudless afternoon at the beach. The gloomy rainstorm at a funeral. Overdone setting and weather pairings can lie flat on the page.

Then there's the danger that comes with using weather to mirror a character’s inner emotional landscape. Mishandling this technique can quickly create melodrama. We've all read a battle scene where lightning crackles as our protagonist leaps forward to hack down his foe in desperation. And how about that turbulent teen breakup where the character's tears mix with falling rain? Unfortunately these have been used so much that most readers tilt their head and think, Really? when they read a description like this.

Wow, weather sounds like a recipe for disaster, doesn't it? It’s no wonder that some writers are so nervous about using it they cut it from their manuscript. But here’s the thing… avoiding weather in fiction can be a fatal mistake.

Make Weather Your Friend

Weather is rich. Powerful. It is infused with symbolism and meaning. And most of all, weather is important to us as people. We interact with it each day. It affects us in many subtle ways. In fact, let’s test this by walking in a character’s shoes.

Think about walking down a street. It’s late afternoon, crystal bright, and a hot breeze blows against you. School’s out and kids run willy-nilly down the sidewalk, laughter ringing the air as they race to the corner store for a grape slush. Your sandals click against the pavement as you turn down between two brick buildings. The side door to an Italian restaurant is just past a rusty dumpster, and your fiancée’s shift is about to end. You smile, feeling light. You can’t wait to see him.

Now, let’s change the scene.

It’s sunset, and the weather has soured. Dark clouds pack the sky, creating a churning knot of cement above you. The sidewalk is deserted, and the wind is edged in cold, slapping your dress against your legs as you walk. You wish you’d worn pants, wish you’d brought a sweater. In the alley, garbage scrapes against the greasy pavement and the restaurant’s dumpster has been swallowed by thick shadow. The side door is only a few steps away. You can’t quite see it, and while all you have to do is cross the distance and knock, you hesitate, eyeing the darkness.

The same setting, the same event. Yet, the mood and tone shifted, all because of the weather I included in the backdrop. What was safe and bright and clean became dark and alien. This the power of weather--changing how people feel about their surroundings.

Steering Your Reader's Emotions

Readers bring the real world with them when they enter a story. Avoiding weather description will be noticed as it's such a natural part of the everyday, and it becomes a missed opportunity to steer how our readers feel.

Weather is a tool to evoke mood, guiding the character toward the emotions we want them to feel, and by extension, the reader as well. By tuning into specific weather conditions, a character may feel safe, or off balance. Weather can work for or against the character, creating conflict, tension, and be used to foreshadow, hinting that something is about to happen.

Because we have all experienced different types of weather ourselves, when we read about it within a scene, it reminds us of our own past, and the emotions we felt at the time. So, not only does weather add a large element of mood to the setting, it also encourages readers to identify with the character’s experience on a personal level.

So how do we write weather in a clear way, and stay away from the pitfalls?

Use Fresh, Sensory Images. In each passage, I utilized several senses to describe the effects of the weather. A hot breeze. Garbage scraping against the greasy pavement. A wind edged in cold, slapping against the legs. By describing weather by sound, touch and sight, I was able to make the scene feel real.

Avoid Direct Emotion-to-Weather Clichés. There are some pairings we should avoid as I mentioned above, and with so many different types of weather elements we really need to think past the usual ones. Avoid mirroring and instead show the character’s reaction to the weather. This is a stronger way to indicate their emotions without being too direct.

Choose Each Setting With Care. Setting and Weather should work together, either through contrast or comparison. In the first scene, we have beautiful weather and an alley as a final destination. These two are contrasts—one desirable, one not, but I chose to show enthusiasm and anticipation for the meeting to win out. In the second, the weather becomes a storm. Now we have two undesirable elements, and as such, they work together to build unease.

Weather can have a positive or negative effect on setting and change the character’s reaction to it, so don’t be afraid to use it! Just remember that with something this powerful, a light touch is all that is needed.

Fog Image: Pixabay

Do you use weather in your stories? How do you go about it?

15 comments on “Power Your Fiction: Using Weather To Create Mood, Not Clichés”

I love your books! Wonderful post- thank you for sharing!

Thank you Alan--you made my day! Season's Greetings!

Thank you so much for the post! I have all 3 of your books and love them. I'm working on a novella that involves weather, Snowbound with the Stork, but I'm using a little twist. I'm using the "snow" event that crippled Atlanta and several other cities in the South with 1 to 1.5 inches of snow.

Carrie, so very glad our books are helping you as you write. And that sounds great! It is funny--I live in Canada, and well, we get SNOW if you know what I mean. I knew someone who lives in Vegas and a few years back they got an inch of snow and it completely paralyzed the city. Schools were closed, the whole deal. Haha, an inch of snow! But, when you are expecting it and don't know how to deal with it as a city, I can imagine it would cause havoc!

Great post, Angela! My WIP is a quest story, so weather (and nature in general) was something I tried to keep in mind when I was writing the first draft. Not only can it enhance or (literally) dampen the mood, but it can be an obstacle to the character's physical journey. At one point I wondered, "Why don't many quest stories have a scene where it rains?" So, I picked a scene where rain would be appropriate, and wrote it that way.

Yes, weather is great at creating conflict, so glad to hear you're bringing it into your story for that reason. Weather is unpredictable, and because we humans like to be in control, it is the perfect way to remind our protagonist that he is not. There are so many deep ways weather can bring more texture to any scene, so i love reading stories where it is used well. 🙂

Hello Angela. Fellow writer, Cathy Orzech, wrote to me saying, "Thought you'd be interested in this take on "Using weather to create mood…." I enjoyed your use and detail of weather in Amanda's Room." Cathy was right. I enjoyed your article very much and, with your permission, would like to reprint it on my blog, "Something Significant." In "Amanda's Room," I wanted to use the weather in a unique way, so I went beyond using it as a backdrop and instead turned it into a central character in the book. Following Ken Follett's example in "Code to Zero," I also led each chapter with factual quotes about the weather which later became linked to what was happening in the story and the lives of the characters. If you are interested, let me know and I would be happy to send you a complimentary copy of the ebook. In the meantime, warmest wishes for a wonderful holiday season. Warmest Regards, Chuck Miceli

So glad you found this article helpful. It sounds like you really have a good handle on how to use weather, so good on you! Feel free to reprint, and if you could just link to this one here, people can follow it back to the original should they wish to (and discover a great blog while they are at it!).

Happy writing!

I do include weather. It's such an every day part of life, how can you not? But I try to remember that how I describe the weather needs to be through the prism of how my characters are feeling - a kid waking up on the first day of summer holidays is going to feel differently about a beautiful day than a kid being made to run laps in phys ed. The weather might be exactly the same but in one situation the sunshine is an invitation, in the other it's a merciless torturer.

This was a great post. Thanks for sharing it.

Yes, absolutely. All description should come through that emotional filter as it brings readers deeper into the mind and heart of the POV character. Glad you enjoyed the post!

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Warmer weather and bright sunshine foreshadow the action in my YA winter adventure short story in this month's Cricket Magazine. Thank you for your insight on how to make weather integral to the plot and characterization.

Very happy to help, Victoria!

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Beginning A Composition With Weather Descriptions

Sunday, Sep 9th, 2018
By: BIG IDEAZ
Composition Framework
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Estimated reading time: 5 minutes

Weather description is one of the easiest ways for young writers (6 to 8 years old) to begin their compositions. This is also usually the first story starter that they are being taught in school.

For children who are weak in the language, writing a good weather description can be an easy and effective way to get them started in their composition.

However, most teachers do not encourage flowery weather descriptions such as these:

“White fluffy clouds dotted the azure blue sky as the sun beamed beatifically, casting a golden glow upon the earth.”

“The sky was an expanse of sapphire blue, dotted with feathery white clouds as the radiant rays of the sun shone brightly in the azure blue sky.”

You get the picture.

Proper Use of Weather Descriptions in English Compositions

Weather descriptions is an easy way for young writers to begin their stories. Primary 1 and 2 students can start their compositions with weather descriptions, if weather plays a part in the plot.

There is no need to memorise a hugh chunk of bombastic weather descriptions.

Simple words can sometimes be more effective than bombastic ones.

These are some of the weather descriptions written by our P1 and P2 students:

“It was a cool and breezy evening. A strong gust of wind blew against my face.”

“It was a bright and sunny morning. White, fluffy clouds drifted across the sky.”

“Lightning flashed across the sky. A storm was coming.”

Short. Simple. Readable.

The kids came up with these weather descriptions themselves, without memorising any bombastic phrases.

Most importantly, they are natural, something which children can understand, remember and apply in their writing.

Get this set of PSLE Model Compositions with writing techniques highlighted.

So, how can children be taught to write weather descriptions?

For children who are really weak in the language, even writing a simple sentence to describe a sunny day can be difficult. These children often resort to starting their compositions with “One day, we went…” or “One fine day, Peter was …” or “Last Sunday, my family and I …”.

Such story beginnings can be boring and not captivating.

Students can learn to write effective weather descriptions. In our classes, we get our students to do brainstorming.

1. Brainstorm and make a list of all kinds of weather that you can think of.

cold and rainy
cool and breezy
bright and sunny
scorching hot

2. For each weather type, imagine how the sky, sun, clouds and other weather elements look like.

Describe each element in simple, readable English .

Weather Type: BRIGHT AND SUNNY

Describe the sun: – shines brilliantly – bright – like a fire ball

Describe the sky: – clear, blue sky

Describe the clouds: – white, fluffy clouds – sunlit clouds

3. Form sentences using some of these descriptions.

It was a bright and sunny day. The sun shone brilliantly in the clear, blue sky .

It was a bright and sunny day. White, fluffy clouds drifted across the clear, blue sky .

The above 3 steps are effective in teaching young children (Primary 1 to 3) to come up with weather descriptions that sound natural. Most children are able to come up with beautiful weather descriptions without resorting to the method of memorising huge chunks of unreadable flowery language.

Download the FREE Brainstorming Sheet for Weather Description

Use Weather Descriptions Appropriately

Some students have the habit of starting every composition with weather descriptions, regardless of topic or setting. Remember to use weather descriptions only if weather plays a part in your story. For example, if a rainy weather contributes to the plot of the story, it is a good idea to describe the weather, especially the rain and the coldness. If a story is set outdoors, it is fine to describe the weather too.

However, many students fell into the trap of starting their compositions with describing the sun, the clouds and the sky when their story is set indoors! This is a huge mistake, which should be stopped.

Other Types of Story Beginnings

For stories which are not set outdoors or not affected by the weather, there are other types of story beginnings that can be used.

Students can begin their compositions with speech , which is also a common way of beginning a primary school composition.

Another effective way is to begin with a captivating statement or an intriguing question. Such a beginning hooks readers immediately to read on. When used correctly, it piques a reader’s curiosity and make them want to continue reading to find out what happens next.

Upper primary students can begin their stories with character descriptions . This is useful to show a change in the character at the end of the story. For example, a timid person who became courageous, or a bully regretting his actions and turning over a new leaf.

Beginning with an action is great if you want to move the story along quickly. Students can use suitable vivid verbs to clearly describe a character’s actions at the beginning of the story.

Get our FREE pack of 300 vocabulary cards that your child can use in his or her compositions.

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Enrol in our highly popular Writing Academy or Junior Writing Academy , our online courses that support primary school students in developing their English composition writing skills.

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To the blackness came an electric flock, bolting from graphite-cloud to wind-whipped loch. Within that cradle of mountains, in that valley snug, we could only but imagine the force upon each jagged peak. For the lake splashed as if it were gravel that, from the heavens, fell. So heavy were those drops that on winter's hand befell.

The rage of tempest skies bore down, smashing windows into blizzards of slicing confetti. Trees of aeons tumbled as the devil’s dominoes. Cars moved as if the tarmac were ice, any way but forward. Neither man nor beast could stand in the path of the storm, yet hunker down and pray that it was evil’s last. Their prayers became married to the music of that onward scream, in this ever spun pollution that is the darkest of dreams. Not a thing remained whole, unwarped nor pristine. For this is the way of storms, is it not?

The storms took Earth into an onward night, regardless of neither time nor sun, yet came the booming exclamations of heaven and lightning to restart her heart.

The storm came with a sepia hint to the silver-black sky, as if it already knew the winds and rain it wrought would echo for eternity.

Lightning cracked the sky sending heaven's light through the storms.

The storms grew vast, surging as the spring melt river, the air in tight eddies, its playful vortices unaware of their own strength.

The storm was a twirl of perfect black ballet dancers, each dressed in windswept grey. They danced to the roar of heaven's drum. They called lightning to their stage. For they were honour bound to come when the compass needed the music of the wind to send its needle full round.

As with storms in nature, where the eye is a place of stillness, when you can see your own storms in good perspective, you will find yourself safe and better able to navigate.

The storms separates the hiders from the heroes and villains, washing the stage clean for the last battle.

In these storms I cannot fight the wind, nor keep the rain from filling rivers fast, yet I can move one and all to higher ground. I can keep as many safe as I can.

She took to the storms as the wind were rocket fuel and the rain her beloved companion. For some are born to shelter, or to shelter others, she was born to tame what others never could.

The storm came as the opera of the skies, the instruments determined to sing out, the trees and grasses as their percussion. Even the rain came in orchestrated rhythm, appearing the as the master of the scene yet arriving on unheard cue. From within our home it gave a surging rise to our hearts, calling out that childish sense of adventurous joy.

The lightning and the sun upon the cloud tops was the only brightness that day. The wind ran as if it has been restrained for time out of mind and it was determined to outrun any chaser. The sound of it was a strange song, as if howling yearned for a melody, and we watched the trees join in the unfolding scene, as if the change, though abrupt and startling, was as welcome as a surprise knock on the door.

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7 Ways To Write About The Weather

Writing about the weather is boring? No way! We all check up on the weather several times each day. It decides so much of our lives. It should be part of your writing, too. This article offers you seven ways to write about the weather.

I love talking about the weather. It decides what I wear, how I travel (if I travel at all), my health, and even my mood . That’s not counting ‘bad hair days.’

Weather forecasts are important for farmers, for utility companies, and they help protect our lives and property. If you could control the weather, you’d get to decide who goes hungry in this world and who doesn’t. That’s how important the weather is. So, where’s the weather in your writing?

Many writers tend to make weather take the backseat. They don’t realise what the weather can do for them. So, let’s find out!

How to Use The Weather In Stories

Here are 7 ways to use the weather in your stories. We’ll start with the most common ones (also the most boring) and work our way up to the exciting stuff.

1. Weather As A Conversation Starter

‘What’s the weather like?’ is the world’s number one question. Whatever you say or ask about the weather can be used as a conversation starter. It’s that universal. That’s also where the danger lies. Talking about the weather is a cliché .

So, use these classic phrases sparingly (or not at all). If you absolutely need to, then make your characters aware of their need to use a cliché. Here’s an example:

Example: He just had to speak to the girl at the bus stop. But how could he make her talk? His brain was a blank. He knew he resorted to a cliché when he blurted out: ‘Nice weather, eh?’

Here, using the cliché is needed to show how desperate the character is to start a conversation.

2. Weather As A Backdrop

The most common use of the weather in fiction is as an inconspicuous element of the setting in sentences like this one:

Example: On a sunny day, Jane went to the public library.

Not exciting, right? That’s because the weather doesn’t do anything. It’s stated as a fact, obvious and boring. It’s telling. How about showing it instead?

Example: ‘A T-shirt is enough,’ Jane thought, glad to put her cardigan aside, as she left the house to go to the public library. Who needed extra baggage on a day like this?

In this example, the character experiences the weather. We even learn how that affects Jane’s mood. Much better, isn’t it?

3. Weather As A Sensual Experience

Let’s see if we can provide even more showing (check out these ‘ 101 Words To Describe the Weather ’). Weather is how we experience the force of the elements. That makes it intensely sensual: rain feels wet and cold, and it makes us depressed. Sunshine is the opposite.

There’s more. Humidity causes hair to get frizzy, and hairdos to collapse (‘bad hair days’). Many people get migraines under certain weather conditions. Air pressure in combination with temperature changes people’s blood pressure. Mental health can also be affected by the weather . Talk about feeling ‘under the weather!’

So, how about describing how the weather feels on your characters’ skin? How does it affect their mood?

4. Weather As Foreshadowing

As authors, we’re in control of the story, we steer our readers’ attention. Most readers appreciate it when we do this in a subtle way. That’s called foreshadowing . Authors hint at future events by creating an atmosphere (pun intended). Let’s look at our example from above and include the weather. Watch what happens at the end.

Example : ‘A T-shirt is enough,’ Jane thought, glad to put her cardigan aside, as she left the house to go to the public library. Who needed extra baggage on a day like this? She skipped down the street. At a traffic light, she looked up at the sky. ‘Funny,’ she thought, ‘that cloud wasn’t there when I left home.’

As readers, we expect that little cloud to grow to grow into a storm. This storm can happen literally (as setting), or emotionally. That little cloud could easily foreshadow difficult emotions.

Just by describing this change of weather, you plant a little seed for the reader to expect a future event. This, of course, also works in the other direction. Just think of the Bible when Noah saw the sky clearing up. He knew that God’s anger was lessening as well.

5. Weather As A Source Of Conflict

Braving the weather means we withstand the elements. This can create situations where a cast of characters needs to show their true colours.

Imagine people on a deserted island in the Caribbean. Everybody gets along well when the sun is shining, and fish are plenty. Now introduce a thunderstorm. You will have people fighting for shelter and the only remaining fish.

6. Weather As A Motif

In the Hollywood movie L.A. Story ’ (1991), actor Steve Martin plays a TV weatherman. He prerecords his forecasts because the weather in L.A. is always the same. His usual comment ‘Sunny and 72’ becomes a funny catchphrase in the story.

That way, the weather is introduced as the main character’s occupation and is used as a motif throughout the movie. It starts as a cliché, which becomes the source of ridicule (the temperature in his forecasts doesn’t even change one degree). In the end, the weather finally acts almost like a character (please read on).

7. Weather As An Acting Force

This is where the weather becomes most interesting! Let’s go back to the movie ‘L.A. Story.’ The TV weatherman falls in love with Sara, who at some point wants to leave the city by plane. But the story has shown us so far that these two are meant to be together. How can this be resolved?

The weather makes it possible. A rainstorm prevents the plane from taking off, and Sara is reunited with her weatherman. The weather needed to take action, or the narrative would not have reached a happy ending.

This is not the only story in which the weather took centre stage. Look at the classics! Many ancient gods had attributes connected to the weather: Zeus had bolts of lightning, and Tempestas was the Roman goddess of storms and sudden weather (guess where the word ‘tempest’ comes from!). The Egyptians had four gods for wind (one for each direction). In Russian folklore, Santa Claus is known as Father Frost. These classic characters act through the weather!

The weather is ultimately the way humans experience the force of the elements. We can all choose to ignore the weather, but we can’t escape it.

The Last Word

Make the weather work for your stories. Don’t just mention it; let it give an extra layer to your setting, increase the showing, add conflict, and even function as if it were a character . I hope I have been able to show just how exciting the weather can be.

There’s one more thing: the weather can take over your language. There are so many idioms and phrases connected to the weather! If you’d like to know more, then please watch out for my next post. It’ll include a cheat sheet with ’ 80 Weather Expressions.’

By Susanne Bennett.

Susanne is a German-American writer who is a journalist by trade and a writer by heart. After years of working at German public radio and an online news portal, she has decided to accept challenges by Deadlines for Writers . Currently she is writing her first novel with them. She is known for overweight purses and carrying a novel everywhere. Follow her on Facebook .

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1000+ Ways to Describe Snow Part 1: A Word List for Writers

Snow: Supernatural?

“The first fall of snow is not only an event, it is a magical event. You go to bed in one kind of a world and wake up in another quite different, and if this is not enchantment then where is it to be found?” ~ J. B. Priestly

Where is enchantment to be found? In stories, and some of those stories may become even more enchanting with the inclusion of snow.

Today’s post is the first of two that offer ways to incorporate snow in creative writing.

See also 1000+ Ways to Describe Snow Part 2 .

Adjectives to Describe Snow

Adjectives are often the first resource exploited by writers. As you experiment with words in this section, heed opinion adjectives and stacked modifiers .

A abominable, abundant, accumulated, advancing, ageless, airborne, alpine, ankle-deep, appalling, approaching, arctic, artificial, autumnal

B bad, barren, beautiful , belated, belly-deep, billowed, billowing, biting, blasted, bleak, blinding, bloodstained, bonnie, bottomless, bright, brittle, bumpy, bygone

C changeless, chaotic, cheerless, chest-deep, chilling, choppy, clammy, clean, cloud-soft, cohesive, cold, compacted, compressed, concealing, congealed, constant, continuous, cottony, crisp, cruel, crumbly, crunchy, crusted, crusty, crystalline, cushiony

D and E damp, dazzling, deathly, deep, dense, desolate, dingy, dirty, distant, domed, downy, dreaded, dreary, drifting, dry, dusty, dwindling, early, elusive, encircling, encrusted, endless, enveloping, ephemeral, eternal, evanescent, everlasting, evil, extraordinary

F fake, fallen, falling, faux, feathery, featureless, fierce, filmy, filthy, fine, firm, flaky, fleecy, flinty, flocculent, floury, fluffy, flying, foamy, foggy, forbidding, forecasted, formidable, frequent, fresh, friable, frigid, frothy, fun, furious, furrowed

G gentle, ghostly, glacial, glaring, glassy, glazed, gleaming, glinting, glistening, glistering, glittering, gorgeous, gory, grainy, granular, granulated, gravely, grimy, gritty, groomed, grubby, gummy, gusting

H and I half-melted, hard, hardened, hated, heavy, high, hip-high, honeycombed, icy, immaculate, immeasurable, impassable, impending, implacable, incessant, indefatigable, inevitable, infernal, inhospitable, interminable, intermittent, inviting, iridescent

J to L jewel studded, knee -deep, lacy, lasting, late, layered, leaden, leftover, light, limitless, liquefied, looming, loose, lovely, low-lying, luminous, lumpy, lustrous

M to O magnificent, majestic, matted, mealy, measurable, melted, melting, merciless, miserable, moderate, moist, moonlit, muddied, muddy, mushy, nasty, nearby, neck-deep, never-ending, new, numbing, occasional, old, omnipresent, oncoming, orographic, overlying, overnight

P to R packed, patchy, pathless, pelting, penetrating, perennial, permanent, perpetual, persistent, phosphorescent, pillow-soft, pillowy, pitiless, plastic, plentiful, plowed, polluted, porous, powdered, powdery, pretty, pristine, prolonged, puffy, punctual, pure, raging, rain-saturated, receding, reflecting, refreshing, relentless, reliable, remaining, ridged, rimed, rippled, ruthless, rutted

Sa to Sm salty, sandy, savage, scant, scattered, sculpted, seamless, seasonal, seeping, semipermanent, serene, shadowy, shallow, sheeted, shifting, shiny, silent, silken, simulated, skiable, sleety, slick, slimy, slippery, sloshy, sludgy, smooth, smothering

So to Su soaked, sodden, soft, softening, soggy, soiled, solidified, soppy, sparkling, sparkly, sparse, spectral, spongy, spotless, spotty, spring, squeaky, star-studded, starlit, sticky, stifling, stinging, streaming, strong, sudden, sugary, summer, sun-kissed, sunless, sunlit, superincumbent, surrounding

T tempestuous, terrible, terrific, textured , thawing, thick, thin, threatening, toxic, track-filled, trackless, trampled, treacherous, twilit

U ubiquitous, unblemished, unbroken, uncleared, undisturbed, unending, uneven, unexpected, ungroomed, uninterrupted, uninviting, unmarked, unmarred, unpacked, unplowed, unpolluted, unpredictable, unpredicted, unrelenting, unseasonal, unspoiled, unstable, unstained, unsullied, unswept, untimely, untouched, untracked, unwelcome, unyielding

V to Y velvety, vengeful, violent, virgin, waterlogged, watery, waxy, well-trampled, wet, whispering, wild, windblown, wind-driven, windswept, winter, wispy, wondrous, wooly, year-round, yielding

Snow Similes and Metaphors

Sometimes a figure of speech adds the perfect touch. Be careful not to overdo, though. Provide enough imagery to stimulate the imagination, but not so much that you slow action or bore readers.

Watch everything and everyone around you. Pay attention to visual media, and note phrasing in books. Your scrutiny will inspire new ideas.

Here are a few phrases to stimulate your creativity.

a blanket of melancholy
a carpet of cotton batting
a colorless shroud
a crispy meringue tipped with brown
a fluffy featherbed
a garden of ice
a lacy tablecloth with flowers and grass peeping through
a landscape frosted with sweet whiteness
a serial killer, silent, stalking, waiting to thrust its cold knife into the countryside
a wooly white duvet
an avalanche of icy death
an onslaught of white, blinding and freezing
as cold as someone’s icy heart
as inevitable as polar nights
as quiet and soft as an angel’s wings
as rare as ice cubes in Hell
as sparse as the hair on someone’s balding skull
as welcome as rain at a summer barbeque
as white as someone’s lies
cookie-sized confetti
dirty lather soaping the city
disappearing as quickly as dew in the desert
feathers of white creating a downy nest in every hollow
fluttering white moths kissing noses and chins
muddy and slushy snow-gravy
powdered gems sparkling in the sun
soft as a lover’s kiss
sparkling gems floating onto flower and face
stardust sprinkling over a Milky Way of upturned faces
white concrete
white waves rippling over the fields

The Colors of Snow

Snow is often multicolored. Shadows, foreign substances, variable lighting, and other conditions change its tint. It might be shadow-dappled, blue-spattered, mud-stained, or smoke-streaked, for example.

Consider the following ten phrases as a foundation for creating multicolored descriptions of snow.

[insert color or colorful object]-dappled
[insert color or colorful object]-dotted
[insert color or colorful object]-flecked
[insert color or colorful object]-pocked
[insert color or colorful object]-spattered
[insert color or colorful object]-splattered
[insert color or colorful object]-spotted
[insert color or colorful object]-stained
[insert color or colorful object]-stippled
[insert color or colorful object]-streaked

If you need a single color, try one of the following.

A to M ashen, black, bloody, blue green, bluish, brown, brownish, candy-colored [due to algae growth], cement grey, crimson, down grey, empurpled, filthy grey, glare white, golden, green, grey, greyish, gritty grey, hoary (greyish white), mauve

O to Y off color, orange, pallid, pearlescent, pearly, pink, purple, red [from iron oxide], red with blood, roseate, rosy, ruddy, sidewalk grey, silver, silvery, sooty, watermelon pink [due to algae growth], white, yellow, yellowish

See also 1000+ Ways to Describe Colors .

Snow Scents

Although snow is frozen water and shouldn’t have an inherent smell, most people and animals can detect a snowstorm before it hits. Their noses respond to a number of factors, including the increase in humidity.

Characters will experience different olfactory stimuli depending on location and time period. A visitor to Disneyland could smell cinnamon from churros (What? Snow in Disneyland? Story fodder.) But a resident of the 1800s might smell coal fires.

If someone claims that snow smells like apple pie, they’re likely standing next to a bakery or Grandma’s cooling shelf.

The colder the temperature, the more subdued the scent of air. But snow still absorbs scents from the environment, especially when partially melted.

I have seen adjectives like the following used by writers when describing the scent of snow: fresh, fragrant, humid, odorous, perfumed, and stagnant.

However, English provides a myriad of words to choose from. Snow might smell like, reek of, or be redolent with the scent of:

A to D algae, almonds (cyanide), apple pie, bacon, a bakery, a barbeque, a barn, blood, booze, burning [leaves, plastic, rubber], brushfires, a busy highway, campfires, Christmas, cinnamon, clean laundry, coal fires, coffee, compost, decaying [fill in the blank], diesel, dirt, dog poop

E to M exhaust fumes, fire, fir trees, a forest, fresh laundry, gasoline, ghetto, gingerbread, Grandma’s kitchen, gunpowder, horse manure, incense, iron, jasmine, kitty litter, landfill, the mountains, mud, musk ox, musty leaves

O to W an oil refinery, an outhouse, ozone, peppermint, pig manure, pine trees, a polecat, pollution, a pulp mill, roasting [chicken, pork, turkey], rotten cabbage, sewer, skunk, smog, spruce trees, sulfur, Thanksgiving, vomit, warming cars, wastewater treatment plant, wet grass, woodsmoke, wolf, wolverine

Snow: So Much More Than Freezing Water

“We love the sight of the brown and ruddy earth; it is the color of life, while a snow-covered plain is the face of death. Yet snow is but the mask of the life-giving rain; it, too, is the friend of man, the tender, sculpturesque, immaculate, warming, fertilizing snow.” ~ John Burroughs

Does Your WIP Include Snow?

If your story unfolds in a desert, you could generate intrigue with the addition of wintry precipitation. What would cause snowflakes in the middle of the Sahara? Why would an SUV have ice encrusted on its undercarriage?

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I am writing a book based on a cold forest and I was really in search of some good metaphors and vocab which could elevate that particular part of the book and I think this page has really helped me a lot. Thank you so much, the selection of words and phrases is quiet unique here.

I’m so glad this post was helpful for you, Biren, and good luck with your book!

This is wonderful. Thanks so much.

Thanks for stopping by, Lori. Good luck with your writing!

Hello. I am writing a murder mystery that takes place in the Rocky Mountains. I live in ice and snow during the winter, and so appreciate this list of snow metaphors and descriptors!

My pleasure, Donna. Good luck with your murder mystery. Now is the perfect time of year to see, feel, hear, taste, and smell snow and ice — especially in the Rocky Mountains.

Kathy—This is just wonderful! You’ve demonstrated—with examples—the richness of associations a gifted writer can bring to her work.

Your post brings to mind Smilla’s Sense of Snow by Danish author, Peter Høeg. Have you read it? The flinty, intelligent heroine is from Greenland and part Eskimo. She is a deeply knowledgable about the properties of snow and uses that knowledge to solve a murder and ultimately expose a conspiracy to steal Greenland’s vast mineral riches. One of the first Scandi noir novels, it was also made into quite a good movie starring Julia Ormond and Gabriel Byrne.

https://www.amazon.com/dp/0385315147/

Thanks, Ruth. I hadn’t heard about the book until now. Sounds intriguing. The link you gave went to a page that shows it as unavailable for purchase, so I tracked it down and took the liberty of modifying the URL. Smilla’s Sense of Snow is now on my Amazon wish list.

I appreciate the heads-up!

Kathy – I always look forward to these wonderful descriptions for just about everything! When I get the emails that say “100 Ways to Describe…”, I always leap on top of it and open the web page up and save it to my bookmarks!!! I’m currently writing a book and your works help me in so many ways and you, as an Author, have inspired me to keep writing! Thank you for all that you do! You are AMAZING!

Thank you, and Have a wonderful Holiday! Rebecca Kroll

PS: I have both of your Lexicon books! I wish there were more!

Thanks, Rebecca. What a wonderful way to start my day — even better than coffee. Good luck with your writing, and you have a wonderful holiday too!

P.S. I’m working on The Writer’s Body Lexicon . It’ll be out early next year.

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Describing the rain. I hope to give you all the information you need to write a descriptive scene using the rain.My new book ‘Writing with Stardust’, is now available on Amazon. It is the ultimate descriptive guide for students and teachers. Just click on any of the book images below.

The FULL post with 5 levels can be viewed in PDF by clicking here:

DESCRIBING THE RAIN

LEVEL 1 I looked out the window. The sky was tar-black and the large clouds were moving towards me. I heard a tapping on the window and then it became a pitter-patter. People ran for cover outside and umbrellas were opened as the clouds spat out their beads of water. Puddles began plinking as the rainfall became heavier. The roofs of the cars danced with spray and I could hear the murmuring of the rain through the window. It sounded like the buzzing of angry bees.

For a Level 2 assignment, more detail should be added. Imagine the effect of the rain on the trees and include more detail on the sky and clouds. At the end of the paragraph, try to write something about the sun coming out. This will vary your writing style.

LEVEL 2 I quickened my pace as the clouds began to gather in the sky. Up to now, the sky had been postcard-perfect, but it was changing. The beautiful cocktail-blue shade was beginning to darken into gravel-grey. Large pillows of cloud were forming, blotting out the old-gold colour of the sun. I got the first splatter of rain when I was halfway across the meadow. I took shelter under an old oak, hoping that I could see out the shower. Droplets of moisture began to drip from the leaves. They were sprinkling onto the grass like a gardener’s hose. Then the rainfall became more intense. A wall of rain moved over the oak and the drops were drumming against the canopy. So much rain was falling that the sound blurred into one long, whirring noise. It reminded me of the rotor blades on a helicopter. Eventually, the noise lessened and the drops faded into a musical chime. The sun came out again, casting slanted beams of light across the meadow. Steam rose slowly from the grass. It rose up eerily and drifted mist-like towards the molten-gold sun. The image was so vivid that it stayed with me all the way home.

Level 3 should conjure up a scene where the rain’s effect can be explored in more detail. The words should get more complex also. An idea might be to visualise a forest scene in autumn, for example. Transport yourself there and describe the colours, the sensations and the sounds of the rain.

LEVEL 3 It began as a whispering in the air. The day had been beautiful and the sky was like a dome of plasma-blue. The clouds had looked like airy anvils drifting under the gleaming disc of sun. We had put our tent up just before the Reaper’s moon of autumn appeared over the trees. The moon seemed to turn the leaves into a flaming patchwork of colours: scorching-yellows, lava-reds and burnished-browns. It added an alien glamour to a perfect scene. We heard a greedy thrush, snail a-tapping on rock; he finished his supper before fluttering into the owl-light of the forest. The mournful cry of a lonely fox echoed through the vault-still silence of the trees. A huffing wind rose up then, stirring the flaps of our tent. A tinkling sound came to our ears as the first pearls of rain dropped onto the leaves. The sound was like the glassy clinking of a champagne flute, lilting and clear. A sheet of rain passed over us and the sound intensified. The noise on the tent was like the phut-phut-phut that ripened nuts make when they hit the ground. It wasn’t the soft, sodden, swollen drops of spring we were hearing; it was like ball-bearings were hitting the canvas roof with force. We could also hear an occasional ker-plunking sound. It was caused by the rainwater gathered on the tent falling to the ground in a great swash of release. The thermometer plunged as we huddled together and shivered in the tent. For a brief moment, we thought that we might be doomed adventurers, destined to get swept away in a mighty flood. We needn’t have worried. The curtain of rain passed over by the time dawn arrived. An explosion of birdsong erupted from the dripping trees and it was if the rain had never been.

A Level 4 assignment might involve a degree of philosophy. You can discuss how the rain is both life giving and life threatening. The metaphors should be more creative and the turn of phrase made more enriching.

LEVEL 4 ‘The sun enables life. The rain grants it safe passage’. The winter sky is a widow’s sky, bedarkened and weeping. The clouds are churlish and kraken-cruel. They cough out great gouts of water and thunking balloons of sopping moisture. It teems down in a biblical deluge, flooding the rivers, drowning the fields and overflowing the dams. It is a Noah’s-Ark cataclysm of rain, an unending cataract of water sluicing from the sky. Trees are uprooted, cars go bobbing by and entire villages disappear under a frothy lather of suds. Cities are overwhelmed and electricity blackouts have people living in fear of the unknown. The rain is incessant. It snaps and crackles like bracken pods in a bush fire. The flood-gates in the sky have been opened and no-one is there to close them back up, it seems. Is this the scene from a sci-fi movie? Is it a terrifying vision of a future world? Indeed it is not. It is the new reality for people from Missouri to Manchester, from Mumbai to Melbourne. The rain is man’s new enemy, according to news reports. It is public enemy number one. It has betrayed man and is now the most destructive arrow in nature’s quiver. The rain has a bad ‘rep’ at the moment. Is this how it should be viewed? Maybe we are forgetting the gifts it bestows upon us. The spring sky is a fragile, pellucid-blue. The clouds are frail and angel-white. They are carried on a light, ruffling breeze. The soil of Mother Earth is titanium hard and in need of nourishment. A misty rain falls down. It is as frail as a Scottish smirr and its misty dew feels like warm butter melting on a face. As it falls, it unlocks the glassy fingers of winter’s frosty fist, one by one. Flowers slowly unfurl in the meadows and ripple like coral arms at low tide. The rivers exhale with a murmurous purr of satisfaction. The spring rains are here and they are as sinless and glistening as an angel’s tears. The summer sky is neon-blue and vibrant. The sun-crisped flowers of the meadow are wilting. They gape at the tufty clouds and beg for their parched petals to be given one more shot of insulin. The clouds oblige and rain descends in little gleam-drops of silver. If you were to stand in the meadow, the drops would feel as sparkly and effervescent as champagne bubbles hitting your skin. The sound of the rain is a harmonic thrumming, nature’s white noise. Silver trickles of water seep into the soil, renewing the life-roots of the plants beneath. A homely, baked-earth smell rises from the land as it is washed and cleansed by the dewy tears of summer rain. Petrichor, the smell of the first rains after a dry spell, rises like a miasma. It is a jasmine-and-gingerbread fragrance, warm and fresh, and it laves the land with sweetness. The farmer is happy. The rain has giveth what the sun would taketh away. The autumn sky is dark and vengeful. Steaming shrouds of cloud coil and writhe. Then an unearthly caterwauling sound fills the air. The wind whips up into frenzy. It is a shrieking, keening omen of the carnage to follow. The clouds race across the sky, thrumming with the charged energy they are desperate to release. It starts with big, sopping drops of moisture. They are wild and indiscriminate, plump missiles of mass destruction that splatter onto the soft soil. The topsoil turns into slushy goo, but it doesn’t matter. The harvest has been taken in and the farmer stokes the glowing coals with a poker and a sigh of contentment. The rain is sissing and hissing off the roof, teeming onto the spongy earth. The farmer thinks about how most gifts come with a cost. He shudders at the thought of another winter, but counts his blessings that the rain has once again ensured his livelihood. To him, the rain is the nectar of the gods and the serum of the sky. He is neither philosopher nor ancient mariner, neither writer nor jungle adventurer, yet he understands the importance of nature’s bounty. If beauty is God’s signature, then rain is his final flourish.

Level 5 is available to read on my new book called ‘Writing with Stardust’ which is on Amazon. It also gives the sounds of rain in more detail. Everything on my blog posts AND MUCH, MUCH MORE are included in this book. There are 20 chapters jam-packed with colours, sounds, scents, beautiful phrases and practical tips. It also comes with a fill-in-the-blanks workbook. Hopefully, this post will help those who need guidance on describing the rain. God bless and good luck with your writing!

For much more of the above, please check out my book Writing with Stardust by clicking on the book images..

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