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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer Essay: Technology (Real Past Exam/Test)

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Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Real Past IELTS Tests

Many are of the opinion that technology has done more harm than good and we ought to simplify in order to lead more fulfilling lives. I agree that technology has its drawbacks but I think turning away from technology is impractical.

The main reason that technology has complicated life for people today is that it has made people perpetually available. In the past, a worker might work a 9 to 5 then come home to spend time with their family, have dinner and enjoy their private life. That simplicity is largely no longer the case. Once work ends, you can still get email notifications and phone calls from managers or co-workers. The end result is that you can never be fully present in the moment because work always threatens to pull you back.

Although life has become more complicated and this is a negative development, shutting yourself off from technology would only serve to isolate people from the world. If you want to stay in touch with friends and know about events in your area, it is essential to have a phone. You can use Facebook Messenger to cheaply chat with individuals or make group plans. Email is an indispensable element of nearly every job. Without it, you are filtering out quality jobs and predetermining manual work as your vocation.

In conclusion, although technology has hurt people, turning away from it is not feasible today without making drastic sacrifices. Instead, people ought to seek ways to compartmentalise technology in order to live happier, more satisfying lives.

1. Many are of the opinion that technology has done more harm than good and we ought to simplify in order to lead more fulfilling lives. 2. I agree that technology has its drawbacks but I think turning away from technology is impractical.

• Paraphrase the overall topic for the essay.
• Include your opinion – choose a side!

1. The main reason that technology has complicated life for people today is that it has made people perpetually available. 2. In the past, a worker might work a 9 to 5 then come home to spend time with their family, have dinner and enjoy their private life. 3. That simplicity is largely no longer the case. 4. Once work ends, you can still get email notifications and phone calls from managers or co-workers. 5. The end result is that you can never be fully present in the moment because work always threatens to pull you back.

• Write a topic sentence with a main idea at the end – for me it is being perpetually available.
• Begin to develop it. I use a hypothetical example here.
• Vary up your long and short sentences for effect.
• Be specific – meniote the notifications, phone calls, etc.
• State the result to finish the paragraph.

1. Although life has become more complicated and this is a negative development, shutting yourself off from technology would only serve to isolate people from the world. 2. If you want to stay in touch with friends and know about events in your area, it is essential to have a phone. 3. You can use Facebook Messenger to cheaply chat with individuals or make group plans. 4. Email is an indispensable element of nearly every job. 5. Without it, you are filtering out quality jobs and predetermining manual work as your vocation.

• Write another topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
• Develop it with specific detail.
• Make sure that you use really specific examples such as Facebook Messenger.
• Keep developing the same main idea.
• State the result again.

1. In conclusion, although technology has hurt people, turning away from it is not feasible today without making drastic sacrifices. 2. Instead, people ought to seek ways to compartmentalise technology in order to live happier, more satisfying lives.

• Repeat your opinion.
• Include a final thought/extra detail for full points from the IELTS examiner for task achievement.

Many are of the opinion that technology has done more harm than good and we ought to simplify in order to lead more fulfilling lives . I agree that technology has its drawbacks but I think turning away from technology is impractical .

The main reason that technology has complicated life for people today is that it has made people perpetually available . In the past, a worker might work a 9 to 5 then come home to spend time with their family, have dinner and enjoy their private life . That simplicity is largely no longer the case . Once work ends, you can still get email notifications and phone calls from managers or co-workers. The end result is that you can never be fully present in the moment because work always threatens to pull you back .

Although life has become more complicated and this is a negative development, shutting yourself off from technology would only serve to isolate people from the world. If you want to stay in touch with friends and know about events in your area, it is essential to have a phone. You can use Facebook Messenger to cheaply chat with individuals or make group plans. Email is an indispensable element of nearly every job. Without it, you are filtering out quality jobs and predetermining manual work as your vocation .

In conclusion, although technology has hurt people, turning away from it is not feasible today without making drastic sacrifices . Instead, people ought to seek ways to compartmentalise technology in order to live happier, more satisfying lives .

done more harm than good hurt more than helped

lead more fulfilling lives be happier

turning away giving up

impractical not useful/unrealistic

perpetually available can always be contacted

spend time with hang out with

private life personal life

no longer the case not ture anymore

notifications updates

end result final outcome

fully present in the moment mindful, not distracted

threatens risks

pull you back bring you back to

shutting yourself off isolating

only serve to isolate keeps you away from others

stay in touch keep in touch

essential crucial

cheaply chat inexpensively communicate with

indispensable element crucial part

filtering out avoiding

predetermining manual work making it so you can’t do other jobs

vocation job/calling

feasible realistic

drastic sacrifices big cuts, giving up a lot

compartmentalise technology keep your phone in its place

more satisfying lives living happier

Pronunciation

dʌn mɔː hɑːm ðæn gʊd   liːd mɔː fʊlˈfɪlɪŋ lɪvz ˈtɜːnɪŋ əˈweɪ   ɪmˈpræktɪkəl pəˈpɛʧʊəli əˈveɪləbl spɛnd taɪm wɪð   ˈpraɪvɪt laɪf nəʊ ˈlɒŋgə ðə keɪs ˌnəʊtɪfɪˈkeɪʃənz   ɛnd rɪˈzʌlt   ˈfʊli ˈprɛznt ɪn ðə ˈməʊmənt   ˈθrɛtnz   pʊl juː bæk ˈʃʌtɪŋ jɔːˈsɛlf ɒf   ˈəʊnli sɜːv tuː ˈaɪsəleɪt   steɪ ɪn tʌʧ   ɪˈsɛnʃəl   ˈʧiːpli ʧæt   indispensible ˈɛlɪmənt   ˈfɪltərɪŋ aʊt   ˌpriːdɪˈtɜːmɪnɪŋ ˈmænjʊəl wɜːk   vəʊˈkeɪʃən ˈfiːzəbl   ˈdræstɪk ˈsækrɪfaɪsɪz compartmentalize tɛkˈnɒləʤi   mɔː ˈsætɪsfaɪɪŋ lɪvz

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Vocabulary Practice

Remember and fill in the blanks:

Many are of the opinion that technology has d_________________ and we ought to simplify in order to l _________________ . I agree that technology has its drawbacks but I think t_________________ from technology is i_________________ .

The main reason that technology has complicated life for people today is that it has made people p_________________ . In the past, a worker might work a 9 to 5 then come home to s_________________ their family, have dinner and enjoy their p _________________ . That simplicity is largely n_________________ . Once work ends, you can still get email n_________________ and phone calls from managers or co-workers. The e_________________ is that you can never be f_________________ because work always t_________________ to p_________________ .

Although life has become more complicated and this is a negative development, s_________________ from technology would o_________________ people from the world. If you want to s_________________ with friends and know about events in your area, it is e_________________ to have a phone. You can use Facebook Messenger to c_________________ with individuals or make group plans. Email is an i_________________ of nearly every job. Without it, you are f_________________ quality jobs and p_________________ as your v_________________ .

In conclusion, although technology has hurt people, turning away from it is not f_________________ today without making d_________________ . Instead, people ought to seek ways to c_________________ in order to live happier, m_________________ .

Listen and check:

Listening Practice

Watch here about someone who gave up their phone for 30 days:

Reading Practice

Here’s a related article that may also help you think of some ideas:

https://www.npr.org/2011/07/14/137472487/what-it-means-to-be-always-on-a-smartphone

Speaking Practice

Mobile phones and smartphones.

• What are the advantages of smartphones?
• Should children be allowed to own smartphones?
• Do you thinks have a major or minor impact on mental health?
• Where in your country is it not appropriate to use a phone?
• Do you think smartphone usage may decline in the future?

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Write about the following topic then check my sample answer essay below:

Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Real past IELTS Exams/Tests

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer: Social Networking Sites (Real IELTS Test)

IELTS Student Sample Corrections

The success ful in technological development has created a more complicated life for people and in order to solve this issue and it is thought [A1]  to live without the appearance of technology. In my opinion, I hold a balanced view in this issue. [A2]  

Living without technology could be the best solution to solve the complexity of our lives, especially for elderly or technophobes. The main reason is because in the present we are surrounded by technological devices, however, old people and those who do not want to adopt the great development of this will find it really hard to use, resulting in creating harder and more complex life for them. [A3]   It can easily be seen that people aged 60 or above and technophobes will prefer using physical keyboard phones such as Nokia 550 rather than using state-of-the-art and newest smartphones like iPhone X or Note 8. [A4]  

However, without the need of technology, our lives could be quite hard in many situations that required devices. The main reason because by using smart devices, it helps to reduce the number of tasks needed, instead, it now becomes the responsibility of technological devices, these jobs will be done by machines, hence, increasing people’s life quality. In the past, women spent hours for household tasks, such as sweeping the floors and cooking meals for the whole family, now, these tasks are given to floor-sweeping robots and automated cookers, meaning they will have more time for leisure and their beloved. [A5]  

In conclusion, although living a life without technology could be true to solve the complicated lives in today’s world, using automated machines will handle many tasks that in the past humans needed to involve in. [A6]  

  [A1] Many are of the opinion that we should try to…

  [A2] Not a good idea to do this! It asks to the extent you agree/disagree – make it clear that you only partly agree!

  [A3] Way too vague! We already know this – describe how it is harder or more complex!

  [A4] This is confusing because this isn’t an argument about technology v no technology it is old v new technology so it is irrelevant….

  [A5] Good paragraph in general with a clear main idea and enough support. I’m not sure about the example though because people still do household chores and cook meals… Those tasks have become EASIER – that would be a better argument.

  [A6] There is no position in this essay! Just saying ‘I hold a balanced view’ is an automatic 5 for Task Achievement regardless of everything else…

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hi there, I am worried about my writing . i am going take my real test 12th September.its really close to me;I still suffer a number of problem in task 2. specially I can’t organise ideas,while i am writing. would you help me by giving me how can i generate ideas insted of any task .please do something for me i am registered for 12th September

Hi Jayed, you can read here about brainstorming ideas: https://howtodoielts.com/how-to-brainstorm-ideas-10-amazing-ways/

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you have discussed both sides in the sample essay and you partially agree that it is a negative development. Right?

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IELTS Writing Task 2 Samples on Technology: Exam Questions & Answers to Target Minimum Band 8

The IELTS test consists of four parts, reading, speaking, listening and writing. Writing task 2 is a part of the writing section of the IELTS exam. You are given a question and you need to write an argument or essay in the response to that question. The essay you write should follow a formal style and the word count should at least be 250 words. You should try to write the message within 40 minutes.

Students wonder whether they will be able to score good marks on the writing test, but it’s not that difficult. If you practice constantly and put in the right amount of effort, you will realize that the questions asked in the writing test are similar to what you have been practising since high school. Below are some IELTS writing task 2 sample answers on technology.

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer 1

IELTS writing task 2 technology essay topic: Some people think that Ebooks and Modern Technology will replace traditional newspapers and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Technology is prospering significantly and taking us in new directions while keeping ourselves in touch with the most recent news and current affairs. This might be a reason that a considerable number of individuals accept the conventional way of getting our news is slowly disappearing. I on the other hand do not agree with the above-mentioned statement and I still believe that newspapers and magazines are still the best way of receiving the news.

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There are various reasons why the traditional methods of getting news are as yet well known. Above all else, reading paper has become a fervent habit for most individuals. Everybody whether from the rich or working class are seen going through the paper in the morning and along with some tea. Besides, these are the convenient, least expensive, simplest method of getting to know about world news.

It can be carried easily from one spot to another and is accessible at an affordable cost. It is so convenient and you can get to go through the complete news just by skimming and flipping through the pages. Also, there is no need for electricity or different machines. There are also multiple sub-parts belonging to different papers. For example, the Hindustan times have different attachments like ladies’ fashion, career guide, culinary craftsmanship, etc.

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Without a doubt, technology has given the extreme way to deal with understanding news, for instance, recordings give a full and clear view of what happened other than that we can download, share and forward it to our family members and friends. Being technophobic will have no place in this always progressing present-day world.

To conclude, the existence of individuals is influenced by cutting edge forms of technology yet, as I would like to think, it won’t present danger to traditional papers and magazines.

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer 2

IELTS writing task 2 technology essay topic: Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to information. To what extent do you agree with this?  

With the fast development of technology, individuals have limitless access to different information and data without any restrictions. Despite these advantages, a few people accept that it is unsafe and hazardous for our communities. In a limited way, I would concur that it very well may be risky, yet if we have proper authority over technological use, at that point it would be helpful from numerous aspects.

On one hand, the development advancement of current technology has allowed individuals to access such countless sites, data, and information hubs and to exchange them. All governments and organizations are utilizing computers to store and keep up their private information nowadays.

Certain individuals accept that these developments in technological work are hazardous for our social orders as it very well may be used for multiple wrongdoings. For instance, a PC programmer may approach a bank information framework and utilize an individual’s card number. In another situation, the programmer may take highly confidential information from the public authority and offer them to someone unreliable.

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Notwithstanding all the threats, the simple access to information framework has carried endless advantages to mankind. Initially, with the improvement of web technology, researchers could adequately perform their experiments. By accessing such countless sites, it has saved a ton of the researchers’ time when they need to examine things, instead of going to the library and finding books and diaries one can always search on the web.

Furthermore, by simply searching the web, students themselves can learn a lot of new things. Previously, students just got information through books, yet nowadays they can gain it from different sources.

For instance, when they need to learn new things, they can likewise gain from another source, for example, video. There are a large number of free video sites, for example, YouTube and Vimeo, where they can locate some interactive exercises. Having focal data sets of residents is an extraordinary route for the public authority to handle unlawful movement, wrongdoing and social issues.

All in all, I would conclude that complete access to different information and data could be harmful to mankind. In any case, I likewise believe that this improvement additionally carries multiple advantages to society, as researchers have gotten more effective in doing their research. I for one believe that the government ought to have strict guidelines about access and plan a legitimate control system that would forestall the abuse of the information.

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The article provides a detailed overview of writing an IELTS Advantages/Disadvantages essay on 'New Technologies have Changed the Way Children Spend their Free Time'. It includes essay structure, Band 7, 8 & 9 sample essays, and useful vocabulary.

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Achieving proficiency in IELTS Writing Task 2 for questions like, ‘New Technologies have Changed the Way Children Spend their Free Time’ poses a difficulty for numerous test-takers as it assesses the ability to write a well-structured and cohesive essay in response to a given topic. Hence, it is essential to enhance your essay writing abilities before undertaking the IELTS to ensure success.

In this task, you will be presented with an IELTS Advantages/Disadvantages essay prompt, where you are presented with a statement or opinion, and you are asked to either agree or disagree with it. To effectively prepare for the IELTS Writing Task 2, it is highly recommended to practice with a variety of sample essays. IELTSMaterial.com offers a comprehensive collection of IELTS Writing practice tests that can help you hone your essay writing skills and achieve a high score in the exam.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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Band 7 Sample Answer for IELTS Writing Task 2: New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time

Currently, it is true that the way children spend their leisure time has been changed by new technology. While this has several benefits, In my opinion, the the drawbacks far outweigh them.

To begin with, computer games tend to be enjoyable for many kids and can potentially enhance their cognitive abilities. Strategic video games, for instance, compel players to hone their problem-solving aptitude and adapt to unforeseen circumstances. As a result, children who regularly play such games are likely to sharpen their logical reasoning and problem-solving prowess. Furthermore, the vast trove of easily accessible information online can benefit young people through early internet exposure. When children are able to surf the web from a young age, they can embark on the learning process sooner and accelerate their knowledge acquisition as they mature.

However, I would argue that the advantages discussed above are outweighed by the disadvantages. One main drawback is that children who enjoy spending time in front of the computer screen are often reluctant to do exercise. Low physical activity levels are likely to result in children becoming overweight, and in turn, they would end up being obese. In addition, some games tempt people to continue playing for hours, which could lead to gaming addiction. In role-playing games, for instance, people might need to stay in front of the computer for several hours in order to progress to higher levels, and therefore children may spend an excessive amount of time on games.

In conclusion, while there are some advantages to children spending time on advanced technologies, it seems to me that the disadvantages are more significant. Technology has been triumphant over sundry verticals nowadays which has modified the leisure time spent by the children around. (285 words)

Band 7 Vocabulary

Now check out some relevant vocabulary used in the above Band 7 IELTS Writing Task 2 sample essay on advantages and disadvantages of new technology.

• Cognitive :

Meaning : Related to mental processes such as thinking, learning, and remembering.

Example : Engaging in chess or other strategic board games can enhance children’s cognitive development by stimulating critical thinking.

• Strategic :

Meaning : Involving a plan or strategy to achieve a specific goal.

Example : Playing strategic sports, like chess or soccer, encourages children to think strategically and make quick decisions on the field.

• Reluctant :

Meaning : Unwilling or hesitant to do something.

Example : Children who prefer indoor activities may be reluctant to participate in outdoor adventures like hiking or camping.

Meaning : Extremely overweight, often to the point of negatively affecting health.

Example : Unhealthy eating habits, combined with a lack of physical activity, can lead to children becoming obese over time.

• Addiction :

Meaning : A compulsive and harmful dependence on a substance or activity.

Example : Excessive engagement in social media can lead to addiction, where individuals find it challenging to disconnect from online platforms.

• Excessive :

Meaning : Going beyond what is necessary or normal.

Example : Spending an excessive amount of time on video games may result in children neglecting other important aspects of their lives.

• Triumphant :

Meaning : Having achieved victory or success.

Example : The local soccer team was triumphant in the championship, celebrating their hard-earned victory.

Meaning : Various or diverse.

Example : Outdoor activities offer sundry options for children, from hiking and biking to exploring nature and playing team sports.

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Band 8 Sample Answer for IELTS Writing Task 2: New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time

In today’s digital era, children’s leisure activities have undergone a profound transformation due to the pervasive influence of innovative technologies. While concerns about potential drawbacks are valid, I contend that the benefits derived from these technological advancements far outweigh any associated disadvantages for today’s youth.

The ubiquity of screens and digital interfaces has redefined how the younger generation engages with their free time, marking a paradigm shift in childhood experiences. Despite concerns about adverse effects, particularly excessive screen time, a judicious approach to technological integration, coupled with parental guidance, can effectively navigate these challenges. Concerns include potential hazards to physical and mental well-being, with research linking extended screen usage to decreased physical activity and an increased risk of obesity among children. Overexposure to digital interfaces is associated with potential setbacks in cognitive development, academic performance, and social skills. However, responsible technological use can mitigate these risks.

On the positive side, technology significantly benefits child development and learning. Educational applications and interactive games offer captivating alternatives to traditional learning methods, making subjects like math, science, and language more engaging. Video games, when approached responsibly, facilitate the development of problem-solving skills, critical thinking, and hand-eye coordination. Social media platforms and messaging applications serve as invaluable tools for maintaining connections in an interconnected world.

In conclusion, while adopting technology in children’s leisure activities raises concerns, the transformative potential for development and education cannot be overlooked. By carefully navigating risks through parental guidance and responsible usage, we can harness the myriad benefits that technology brings to the lives of today’s tech-savvy youth. (258 words).

Band 8 Vocabulary

Have a look at the IELTS Vocabulary for Band 8 sample answer on 'New Technologies have Changed the Way Children Spend their Free Time'.

Meaning : Having deep significance or impact.

Example : The digital revolution has had a profound effect on how children experience leisure.

• Pervasive :

Meaning : Spread widely and consistently throughout an area or group.

Example : Technology has become pervasive, influencing every aspect of children’s daily lives.

Meaning : The state of being present, appearing, or found everywhere.

Example : The ubiquity of smartphones highlights their integral role in contemporary society.

• Paradigm Shift :

Meaning : A fundamental change in approach or underlying assumptions.

Example : The advent of digital technology represents a paradigm shift in how children engage with entertainment.

• Judicious :

Meaning : Showing wisdom and good judgment in decision-making.

Example : A judicious approach to screen time involves balancing technology use with other activities.

Meaning : Harmful or unfavorable.

Example : Excessive screen time can have adverse effects on a child’s physical and mental well-being.

Meaning : To lessen the severity or impact of something.

Example : Parental guidance can help mitigate the potential risks associated with technology use.

• Interactive :

Meaning : Involving communication or action between people or things.

Example : Educational apps provide an interactive learning experience for children.

• Captivating :

Meaning : Attracting and holding the interest or attention.

Example : Video games with captivating storylines can engage children in constructive ways.

• Invaluable :

Meaning : Extremely useful or indispensable.

Example : Social media has become an invaluable tool for staying connected with friends and family.

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Band 9 Sample Answer for IELTS Writing Task 2: New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time

Technology has been triumphant over sundry verticals nowadays which has modified the leisure time spent by the children around. Although that comes along with the pace digitization has been moving ahead with and could prove advantageous in the same regard, however, it has its major share of drawbacks that supersedes its advantages in the long marathon. In the forthcoming paragraphs, this essay will analyze both sides.

There are a few pros to children putting their hours of free time in learning the advancement of the technologies and the modus operandi of the same as that keeps them moving and aligning with the dynamic world, especially, during current times. It enhances their digital knowledge that somehow has become the need of the hour in every walks of life. Using technology not only improves children’s technical skills, but also keeps them engaged and focused, enhancing their expertise in this area. For example, learning coding, programming, and web development expands their knowledge and prepares them for future job opportunities.

However, there are also significant downsides to children’s technology use. Exposure at a young age can be harmful to children’s development and thinking. Teens are more vulnerable to cybercrimes and phishing. Inappropriate content and sites can also do more harm than good. Heavy technology use has health risks. Violent graphics in games are another major concern. Certain dangerous games like “Bluewhale” have been banned after being linked to youth suicide. Overall, while technology has benefits, uncontrolled use at a young age poses risks of crime, inappropriate content, and physical and mental health issues.

All in all, it could be concluded that although technical expansion is a requirement right now, the pitfalls of children spending their free time on the same often overtakes its advantages and is riskier in the long run. (297 words)

Band 9 Vocabulary

Use the following Band 9 vocabulary while writing your essay on 'New Technologies have Changed the Way Children Spend their Free Time' and improve your IELTS band score .

Example : The team was triumphant in the championship, celebrating their hard-fought victory.

Example : The museum displayed a sundry collection of artifacts from different cultures and time periods.

• Digitization :

Meaning : The process of converting information into digital format.

Example : The rapid digitization of historical documents has made them more accessible to researchers.

• Advantageous :

Meaning : Beneficial or favorable.

Example : Regular exercise is advantageous for maintaining good health and overall well-being.

• Modus Operand i:

Meaning : A particular way of doing something; method or procedure.

Example : Detectives carefully analyzed the criminal’s modus operandi to solve the mysterious case.

• Drawbacks :

Meaning : Disadvantages or negative aspects.

Example : Despite the benefits of remote work, there are drawbacks, such as potential feelings of isolation.

Meaning : Advantages or positive aspects.

Example : Pursuing a higher education degree has numerous pros, including expanded career opportunities.

• Discernment :

Meaning : The ability to judge or understand things clearly.

Example : Developing discernment is crucial when evaluating the reliability of information in the age of misinformation.

Meaning : Skill or expertise in a particular area.

Example : A successful entrepreneur often possesses financial acumen, enabling them to make wise business decisions.

• Proliferation :

Meaning : Rapid and widespread growth.

Example : The proliferation of social media platforms has changed the way people communicate and share information.

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Connectors Used in the Above Sample Answers of IELTS Writing Task 2: New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time

Connectors, also known as connectives or transition words, are words or phrases that link ideas or parts of a sentence or paragraph together. Here are some of the connectors/linking words for writing used in the above sample answers:

• Furthermore
• In addition
• On the flip side
• On the positive side

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IELTS Essays on Technology – Discussion and Opinion Essays

27 August, 2024

The second portion of the writing task is IELTS Writing Task 2, wherein you must present your viewpoint, address any concerns or issues raised by the subject, give your opinion, and compose an essay responding to the assigned topic. The essay needs to be at least 250 words long and written in a formal style. This task must be finished in forty minutes. However, it can be difficult for students to attempt this portion correctly and do well in it.

Hence, this blog comprises samples on one of the most common topics: “IELTS Essays on Technology—Discussion and Opinion.”

IELTS Essays on Technology – Discussion and Opinion: IELTS Writing Task 2- sample 1

Ielts essays on technology – discussion and opinion: ielts writing task 2- sample 2, do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good.

In the 20th century, science and technology advanced significantly, increasing people's standard of living. As it is widely known, technology development has numerous advantages, such as improving human safety and upgrading daily lives by making some complex tasks easy. The rapid development of technology also has numerous disadvantages. This essay provides several arguments and an explanation as well.

People are becoming increasingly concerned about the rapid development of machines owing to their potential adverse effects, which may someday disrupt their way of life. Most importantly, some experts have also revealed that AI will track everything occurring on this earth, which would unavoidably intrude upon people's privacy. In addition, we are witnessing a growing number of phone features that unintentionally record user actions and voices in private chat or on the phone without the users' knowledge or agreement. For instance, regardless of the owner's preferences, Android's phone call feature is built to record every call, both in and out, automatically. Consequently, this incident adds fuel to the ongoing discussion about the boundaries of intelligent technologies and privacy or confidentiality. 

While modern technology has several negative aspects, these must be balanced by its positives. First of all, many individuals don't know that phones and cameras automatically store data which is meant to assist them in a number of scenarios that could potentially harm their lives. The device instantly notifies family members or medical professionals via phone call when an urgent condition, like a slow heartbeat or high blood pressure, is detected. This allows them to start early treatment. 

To conclude, AI can help humans in several ways by providing safety and simplifying their daily work. However, it also has disadvantages. If it tracks every human movement, then humans will not have any privacy.

New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time.

Modern technology has a significant impact on individuals’ lives. For instance, it has affected children's recreational activities and made them more dependent on technology to pass the time. Although this has certain benefits, I think the drawbacks exceed the benefits.

The main advantage of new technology for youth is that it makes communicating with friends easier, as they can connect with each other through gadgets. For example, numerous social networking sites and chat applications, such as Facebook, Instagram, Line, and others, allow kids to interact with each other. It has also made learning more convenient, creative, and easy. Youth can enhance their fluency in the English language by engaging in activities such as crossword puzzles and games on their cell phones.

However, there are clear drawbacks to utilising modern technology excessively and inappropriately, one of which is that youngsters are more likely to develop a condition known as Attention Deficit Disorder (ADD). Children who use smartphones and tablets excessively have trouble focusing for long periods and become hyperactive. It also causes health problems such as shortsightedness and ultimately ruins social relationships by developing isolation tendencies. Youngsters who spend excessive time on their gadgets live in their bubbles and rarely interact with people in the real world.

While it is indisputable that children can benefit from a balanced use of technology, technology has many more negative effects than beneficial ones, and misusing it hampers a child's development. In conclusion, although many advantages exist for kids who use technology for relaxation, the disadvantages outweigh the benefits.

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To sum up, technology is one of the general topics you can encounter in the IELTS exam. We have provided samples for you in this blog so that you can get a clear idea of how to write an essay, and you can consider these samples in your practice sessions during IELTS preparation.

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15 Sample Questions for IELTS Writing Task 2. Topic: Technology .

To what extent do you agree or disagree that the widespread use of social media has had a negative impact on society?

Should governments regulate the content that is available on the internet? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Do the benefits of artificial intelligence outweigh the potential risks?

To what extent do you agree or disagree that technology is creating a gap between the rich and the poor?

Should the development of new technologies prioritize environmental sustainability or economic growth? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Do the advantages of online shopping outweigh the potential negative effects on local businesses?

To what extent do you agree or disagree that the use of surveillance technology in public places is necessary for maintaining public safety?

Should governments invest more in developing renewable energy technologies or in improving existing energy infrastructure? Discuss both options and provide your opinion.

Do the benefits of using technology in education outweigh the potential drawbacks?

To what extent do you agree or disagree that privacy concerns should limit the development and use of technology?

Should governments regulate the amount of screen time children have access to? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Do the advantages of using technology for communication outweigh the potential negative effects on personal relationships?

To what extent do you agree or disagree that technological advancements have led to a decline in traditional forms of employment?

Should companies be held responsible for the negative impacts of their technology on society? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Do the benefits of using technology in the workplace outweigh the potential drawbacks?

How to Distinguish a Real IELTS Question from a Fake One

To identify if it's a typical IELTS essay prompt, consider the following:

• The prompt will be related to a broad, general topic that is relevant and engaging for a wide range of test-takers.
• It will ask you to present an argument or discuss different aspects of a topic, rather than simply recalling facts or describing a situation.
• The prompt will require a formal writing style and be written in clear, concise language.
• It will not require specific, specialized knowledge or expertise in a particular field.