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UIUC Supplemental Essays 2023-24 – Prompts and Advice

September 13, 2023

The University of Illinois — Urbana Champaign is one of the top public universities in the entire United States. Top-ranked computer science, engineering, and business programs, in particular, attract an endless stream of high-caliber applicants from around the globe. Great grades and test scores will put aspiring members of the Fighting Illini on strong footing. However, you are also required to address 2-3 UIUC supplemental essay prompts.

 (Want to learn more about How to Get Into UIUC? Visit our blog entitled:  How to Get Into the University of Illinois Urbana Champaign: Admissions Data and Strategies  for all of the most recent admissions data as well as tips for gaining acceptance.)

Let’s dive right in and begin examining the 2023-24 UIUC supplemental essays. Two important notes:

• You will be addressing 2-3 of these essays, depending on which category you fall into.
• Each response is a max of 150 words.

UIUC Supplemental Essays: If You’re Applying to a Major:

1) explain, in detail, an experience you’ve had in the past 3 to 4 years related to your first-choice major. this can be an experience from an extracurricular activity, in a class you’ve taken, or through something else..

UIUC is not necessarily asking you to write about the in-class or extracurricular experience which led to you earning the most prestigious awards or holding the highest position of leadership. The university is going to see all of your accomplishments in the Honors and Activities sections of the Common App. As such, you want to ask yourself two main questions:

1) Which experience best illustrates my passion and commitment to my first choice major?

2) Which experience is closest to my heart and most representative of my unique passions?

Pick the option that will allow you to deliver additional detail that may be memorable to the admissions reader. Start this process by asking yourself, “What is the most interesting and consequential moment that I have experienced in a classroom setting or in my extracurricular activities?” If you can identify one clear-cut moment, that is likely the activity worth sharing with the UIUC admissions staff.

2) Describe your personal and/or career goals after graduating from UIUC and how your selected first-choice major will help you achieve them.

This prompt shares some of the same elements of a traditional “Why Us?” essay, but UIUC is particularly interested in hearing about why the curriculum in your desired academic department is attractive to you—not so much about your love for the football team or the beautiful campus. Below are some quick tips for writing an essay that will help your admissions cause:

• Cite specific academic programs , professors ,  research opportunities , internship/externship programs ,  study abroad programs ,  student-run organizations , etc.
• State why your chosen program is the perfect fit for you  and why you are the perfect fit for it.
• Offer insight into your future personal/academic/career goals. It’s okay if you’re not 100% sure what you want to do at age 25 (most teens are not). Feel free to speculate based on your current mindset and interests.

In summary, you’ll want to dedicate time to researching more about your prospective college/department and what makes it truly world-class. The more specific you can get here, the better your UIUC essays will be!

UIUC Supplemental Essays: If You’re Applying to Our Undeclared Program in the Division of General Studies:

1) what are your academic interests please include 2-3 majors you’re considering at illinois and why..

Your strengths will likely be evident from other data points (AP scores, classroom grades, SAT/ACT results, etc.). Therefore we recommend focusing the bulk of your response on your specific academic interests that relate to your major of choice.

Whether it’s a general love for math/science or literature or a specific interest in aerospace engineering or 19th century French novels, use this opportunity to share what makes you tick, the ideas that keep you up at night, and what subject inspires you to dream big. What topic makes you read books and online content until your eyes bleed? Share the manner in which you relentlessly pursue knowledge. Whether it’s falling down a Wikipedia rabbit hole about the nature of time or consuming thousands of hours of podcasts on game theory, this is a chance to illustrate the ways in which you are an obsessive learner with an endless thirst for information. The admissions reader should emerge from reading this essay with the sense that you are a sincerely curious young person with a strong intellectual drive.

Finally, be sure to connect these interests to 2-3 majors at Illinois and support your reasoning with school-specific offerings and resources, like academic departments , courses , research initiatives , etc.

2) What are your future career or academic goals? You may include courses you took in high school and how these impacted your goals.

Note that this question is a bit different than the one asked of students with a firm first-choice major. We recommend providing a straightforward answer here. If you are Undeclared, you may not have a firm idea of your academic goals, but you can use your current academic interests (the ones explored in the question above) as well as past academic experiences to guide your answer. Similarly, your career intentions may be relatively unformed. Use this space to share academic/career areas that may be of interest. Don’t sweat it if your plans are still in a nascent stage. This is normal for a 17 or 18-year-old, and UIUC will understand.

UIUC Supplemental Essays: If You’ve Selected a Second-Choice Major (Including Undeclared):

Please explain your interest in your second-choice major or your overall academic or career goals..

See answer #1 for those selecting a major. You are essentially repeating this process for a different field. However, you probably don’t want to have two completely unrelated majors/career goals. For example, if your first choice was business and your second choice was economics, it’s easy to explain the relationship. If the fields are more disparate (e.g. Dance & Chemical Engineering, be sure to provide a thorough explanation.

How important are the essays at the University of Illinois Urbana Champaign?

UIUC only labels two factors as being “very important” to the admissions process. Those factors are: the rigor of your high school coursework and your GPA. The essays are “important” to the application review. In fact, the essays are rated as being of equal importance to test scores, extracurricular activities, and talent/ability.

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How to Write the UIUC Supplemental Essays 2023–2024

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The University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign (UIUC) is known for their diverse and academically rigorous academic programs . Every year, thousands of applicants seek to follow in the footsteps of UIUC alumni, including film critic Roger Ebert, writer Dan Savage, and scientist Temple Grandin. But completing your UIUC supplemental essays is easier said than done. Looking to better understand how to approach the UIUC prompts? Let’s dive in.

University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign’s 2023-2024 Prompts

The University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign asks for applicants to complete two or three essay questions depending on their choice of major (or lack thereof). Below, you can preview the two prompts for students who have selected a major, the two prompts for students entering undeclared, and the one additional prompt for students intending to double major (including with an undeclared second major). Each response should be approximately 150 words.

If You’re Applying to a Major :

• Explain, in detail, an experience you’ve had in the past 3 to 4 years related to your first-choice major. This can be an experience from an extracurricular activity, in a class you’ve taken, or through something else.
• Describe your personal and/or career goals after graduating from UIUC and how your selected first-choice major will help you achieve them.

If You’re Applying to Our Undeclared Program in the Division of General Studies:

• What are your academic interests? Please include 2-3 majors you’re considering at Illinois and why.
• What are your future career or academic goals? You may include courses you took in high school and how these impacted your goals.

If You’ve Selected a Second-Choice Major (Including Undeclared ):

• Please explain your interest in your second-choice major or your overall academic or career goals.

General Tips

Each of these prompts, no matter your choice of major or lack thereof, asks you to explore your academic interests and how those interests relate to your postgraduate goals. Even if you have a specific major or two in mind, your future career goals might be murky. That’s okay!

According to the National Center for Education Studies, about 30% of students change their major in college at least once. Far more students end up pursuing careers, plural, that they didn’t originally plan on. And according to the World Economic Forum, the jobs of future might look completely different than those we have today. To put it another way, your future career might not have been invented yet. For these reasons, you should feel comfortable keeping an open mind about your employment future and indicating that openness in your essay.

This is mind, you may have difficulty approaching these questions about your major and career. So let’s break it down. What are your academic interests , and, given these interests, what jobs would allow you to pursue those interests further? Determining these two simple pieces of information should help guide your essays.

UIUC Short Essay Questions: If You’re Applying to a Major

Explain, in detail, an experience you’ve had in the past 3 to 4 years related to your first-choice major. this can be an experience from an extracurricular activity, in a class you’ve taken, or through something else. (approximately 150 words).

This prompts asks you to provide an example of the impact of your academic interests on your life. This example could be a single occasion when you witnessed the power of medicine and resolved to pursue a degree from UIUC’s College of Applied Health Sciences. If you’re a future English major, maybe there’s a book you want to write about that had a particularly significant impact on your perspective. Or perhaps you pursued your interest in social justice through a summer internship that led you to choose Political Science as your major.

Note a few key quantities in the prompt: you need to explain “ an experience in the past 3 to 4 years.” Based on this information, the admissions officers are likely seeking to hear about a singular high school experience that you have had. Don’t feel pressure to describe a life-changing moment. Keep your response specific and concise, and you’ll be golden.

Describe your personal and/or career goals after graduating from UIUC and how your selected first-choice major will help you achieve them. (approximately 150 words)

This prompt permits a broad response, encompassing personal and/or career goals. That said, you first need to narrow that response to goals related to your first-choice major. Then, you need to narrow those goals down to just your 1-3 most important goals.

In the event that you haven’t decided on a career path, even though you’ve picked your major, a few Google searches can help guide you in the right direction. What careers relate to your first-choice major? If there are many career paths associated with this major, then you may want to list a few options in your response that are most inviting to you. Regardless of what personal or career goals you choose to explore in this short essay, be specific (even if brief) as to why these are your goals and how your major will help you get closer to these goals.

Additional research into the specific opportunities offered by your first-choice major at UIUC can help you flesh out this essay. Perhaps UIUC’s Experimental Music Studios will set you up for your dream career as a film composer. Or perhaps the research division of UIUC’s Program of Actuarial and Risk Management Sciences particularly interests you. A specific response can effectively demonstrate your deep interest in the learning opportunities available to you at UIUC. Moreover, you will show the admissions officers that you are serious about achieving your goals through your UIUC education.

UIUC Short Essay Questions: If You’re Applying Undeclared

What are your academic interests please include 2-3 majors you’re considering at illinois and why. (approximately 150 words).

Even if you’re applying undeclared, you likely have more than one academic interest. Don’t hold back: interdisciplinary interests that don’t necessarily align with a certain major are totally fine to discuss. In fact, discussing the ways your academic interests overlap or have evolved may help your reader better understand why you are choosing to enter undeclared.

Students entering college undeclared tend to start from one of three places. One, they’re deciding between similar majors. Two, they’re deciding between completely unrelated majors. Three, they have zero clue what majors speak to them. Let’s discuss each of these situations briefly.

In situation one, you can just list those similar majors in this essay and discuss the interests that underpin them. Consider the following questions: Why are these your interests? What skills would you like to gain by studying these topics? What specific programs at UIUC will support these interests?

In situation two, you can list your top two or three majors and (concisely and precisely) explain your interest in them. Consider the same questions posed in the last paragraph. However, keep your responses brief so that you have space to address the very different fields that engage you. Alternatively, you can focus on the interdisciplinary overlaps between your diverse interests.

In situation three, you may want to take the time to do a bit more research and soul-searching for tackling this question. Remember, you don’t have to eventually choose the majors you list in this essay! If you get stuck, look up UIUC’s list of majors and start crossing out all of the majors that don’t interest you. Keep narrowing it down as much as you can! Take comfort that you’re not really closing those doors yet.

What are your future career or academic goals? You may include courses you took in high school and how these impacted your goals. (approximately 150 words)

This prompt asks you to explore your goals for the future. If you look at your upcoming college experience, you may have some specific goals already. For instance, maybe you’re set on taking a computer science course, despite hoping to major in the arts. In this essay, you can explore why that is one of your goals. If you wish, you can move on to describing how that goal could impact your future career.

This question doesn’t require you to connect your career goals to your potential choice(s) of major. Therefore, you could describe an academic goal that isn’t related to your course of studies. Maybe it’s important to you to take philosophy courses to learn more about ethical questions and develop your opinions. Explain the motivation behind your academic goal(s) to the reader in this essay, and you’ll have a compelling narrative.

That said, if you choose to focus on career goals, those goals should be at least somewhat connected to whatever you’re considering majoring in. Otherwise, you risk giving the impression that you have not thought deeply about the purpose of your college education and its impact on your life. The connection does not need to be obvious or direct, though. This is especially true if you’re planning to work in an interdisciplinary, dynamic field. As long as you identify that connection in your essay, you’ll be fine.

UIUC Short Essay Questions: If You’ve Selected a Second Major (Including Undeclared)

Please explain your interest in your second-choice major or your overall academic or career goals. (approximately 150 words).

This extra essay response is applicable to applicants who wish to double-major. This is even if you are undecided about your second major. For instance, you might be certain about your intended degree in the Department of Economics , but you’re hoping to simultaneously pursue your passion for the arts while in college. Knowing exactly which arts degree you’d like to pursue isn’t necessary for selecting the second major option on your application. Regardless, just knowing that you would like to pursue two majors isn’t sufficiently detailed. In most cases, students will need to at least gesture toward their area of interest for the second major.

That said, this essay question gives you space to provide the color about that second major, no matter what it is. How does it fit with your first-choice major? Most importantly, how do those majors work in conjunction to bring you closer to your goals? Showing the admissions officers that you have thought deeply about these questions will give them the confidence that you are academically capable of pursuing a double major. So do your best to bring specificity, clarity, and depth to this essay and show UIUC that you’re ready!

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Apply Like a Pro to UIUC: Examples of Major-Specific College Application Questions

If you’ve made it here, chances are you’ve reached one of the more daunting parts of college applications: the written questions.

There are two ways you can apply to UIUC: the Common App and UIUC’s own application, myIllini. In this blog, we’ll instead focus on something they both have in common: the major-specific questions .

As part of your application, you’ll have to respond to two to three major-specific prompts about why you picked your intended major(s) , each with a word limit of 150. Sound difficult? Don’t worry, we’ve got you covered!

Disclaimer: Does something seem funny about the “majors” we’ve chosen to write about? Listening to Music is a great hobby, and while you may learn about DNA Analysis in some of your classes, the majors we’ve written about are imaginary! We did this so we could show you how to best structure your responses and have a little bit of fun. Okay, okay, fun might be somewhat of a subjective term in this case. Hey, at least we’re trying.

Prompt 1: Explain, in detail, an experience you’ve had in the past 3 to 4 years related to your first-choice major. This can be an experience from an extracurricular activity, in a class you’ve taken, or through something else.

Example 1: Music Listening Major

I played the triangle for four years in my high school band, and through that was exposed to genres of music I would’ve otherwise never heard. Playing the triangle was fulfilling, but I wanted to create a space specifically for listening to music. During my sophomore year, I formed a club for music listeners called “Hear There Everywhere” and have served as the president ever since. As president, I organized meetings, held outreach events to engage new members, and implemented a Playlist Friday program, where teachers play personalized playlists created by the club on Friday afternoons. I’ve always had a passion for listening to music and “Hear There Everywhere” has given me a platform to share the benefits with others. From my experiences in high school, I know the Music Listening major at UIUC is the perfect fit for me.

Example 2: DNA Analysis Major

My high school biology teacher taught me the importance of curiosity, creativity, and integrity in scientific endeavors. She inspired me to continue taking science classes throughout high school to learn as much as I could. By the start of senior year, I knew I wanted to work in a science field, but it was a trip to a forensics lab last summer that helped me decide I want to specialize in DNA Analysis. On the trip, the first place we visited was the DNA lab, where I was able to speak to the lab technician about different techniques for analyzing DNA samples. He showed me the equipment and explained how proper analysis is vital in crime investigations. After witnessing biology used in this manner, I am certain I want to pursue a career in forensics, starting with studying DNA Analysis at UIUC.

Prompt 2: Describe your personal and/or career goals after graduating from UIUC and how your selected first-choice major will help you achieve them.

Listening to music has been a passion of mine since I was very young, and I want to share that passion with others. Through the Music Listening major, I hope to build a foundation of knowledge that will support me as I pursue a career as a professional music listener. As a professional listener, I want to become a strong voice within the field that not only pushes the boundaries of what types of music are listened to, but also advocates for the inclusion of listening as an important part of the music industry. Listening is a severely underrepresented piece of the music community, and my main career goal is to bring more recognition to music listeners everywhere. Not many Music Listening programs exist, so by taking part in this major I hope to establish my voice in the movement of change sweeping the music industry.

DNA Analysis is one of the most important branches of forensics science. By choosing this major, I will learn hands-on skills that will help me find a job in a DNA lab. My ultimate career goal is to use the power of biology to help other people, and I want to do that by engaging in research and analysis to improve DNA handling in crime investigations. With this major, not only will I learn the physical techniques being used, I will also gain knowledge of the ethics behind DNA analysis and storage. Learning about the moral debate occurring in the field from professors engaging in everyday research will make me a well-rounded scientist. I want to make forensics a more equitable field, and I believe the combination of hard science and ethics taught through the DNA Analysis major will help me accomplish this goal.

See, that wasn’t so bad! We hope these major-specific college application questions seem a little bit clearer now, and you have a better idea of what to write when you sit down to craft your own responses.

Overall, the key to effective major-specific college application questions is to be clear, be concise, and to always be yourself. Happy writing!

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55 comments

Haha I can’t say I wouldn’t have at least considered ‘Music Listening’ as my major if it wasn’t an imaginary one.

Thanks for the tips and examples. It helped write the first few words of my essay…which is always the most difficult part.

Us too! You’re very welcome, and we’re glad our examples helped. Hope you have a great year, Ashvin!

I think you have a typo lol “My ultimate career goal is to us the power of biology to help other people,” I’m pretty sure “us” should be “use”

I still think this was very helpful though. 🙂

Oops! Great catch, Violet, and thanks for letting us know so we could fix it. We’re glad the information was helpful to you, typo notwithstanding!

Extremely helpful blog, especially provoking more thought into the ‘why’ and ‘so what’ aspects of choosing a particular area of study….thanks for posting these examples.

Thanks, Jahnavi; we’re so glad you found it helpful!

the guides were pretty helpful. Hope to be in UIUC next year 🙂

We’re glad that you found the info helpful, Syed, and we’re excited that you’re interested in UIUC! If you have any questions throughout the application process, don’t hesitate to contact us .

Those examples quite help me a lot. These days, I have been unable to get a handle on the essays of majors when applying for the ea of uiuc. After reading these examples, I feel I have found the inspiration. Thank you very much!

This was helpful! But for me personally, there wasn’t a singular event that led me to choose my major but rather multiple experiences over a long period of time. Is it acceptable to write about multiple experiences instead of just one?

Really appreciate the samples as they provide us with some foundation and expectation as to what information we should include within the short word limit!

That music listening major is reaaaaaaly inspiring, and DNA analysis one is helpful too, lol. Thanks a lot, I was surprised when I saw this, you college instruct us to answer!

We’re glad they helped, Kylin! Any questions as you work on your application, don’t hesitate to reach out .

Hi Allison! No, we don’t want a list of things that led to your interest in the major. Even if you’ve had multiple experiences over a long period of time, we’re looking for a more in-depth, detailed description of one of those experiences that helped draw you to that area of study. We hope this helps! Any other questions, don’t hesitate to reach out to our office .

Thanks Eshwar, we’re glad they help! And if you have any questions as you work on your application, don’t hesitate to reach out to our office .

We’re glad you found the examples helpful, Haoyu, thank you!

HI! Your examples are cool! I just wonder whether two questions shall better be related or not?

Thanks for the examples! I have a question: are you looking for experiences that explain why we decided to choose the area of study and major we chose, or is it more towards an experience that demonstrates the steps we’ve taken in our area of study? Both?

Hi Jeremy, and thanks for reaching out! Your major-specific responses help us understand why you’ve chosen that specific major and also allow us to ensure that the major will be a good foundation to achieving your goals after graduation. We hope this helps! If you have additional questions as you work, don’t hesitate to contact us directly .

Thanks, Haoyu! Your major-specific responses help us understand why you’ve chosen that specific major and also allow us to ensure that the major will be a good foundation to achieving your goals after graduation. We hope this helps! If you have more questions as you work, don’t hesitate to contact us directly .

Great examples!! I finally have an idea of what information to add in such a limited space 🙂

Thank you for the tips and examples.

Thanks, Prithvi! We’re so glad you found them helpful.

Hello, thanks for your nice and clear answers. I am using Common App (not myIllini) and I have 2 questions(I am EA applicant). The prompts #1 and #2 above are not in the Commpn App, and I see there are 2 other questions as shown below instead.

So my questions are: (1) to where and by when do we have to submit the essays for the 2 prompts above? (2) The following 2 questions look like optional but I want to write an essay for #1. I do not think I am relevant to #2 though (I have a good GPA and no drop record) so I am wondering if it is ok to enter briefly like: Not Available (for the #2 below)

2 UIUC Questions on Common App:

#1. Academic Challenges Explain any challenges (outside of COVID-related) you have faced throughout your academic career, including the dates or timeline below.

#2. If you have a low grade or a drop in grades that you have not already explained, do so below.

Thanks for reaching out, Tom! The academic challenges questions are optional. Once you click “Continue” on that page of the application, you’ll move to the academics section, where you’ll select your intended major and possible second choice. After that section, the two major-specific writing prompts will display for you to write your response. We hope this helps! If you have additional questions, don’t hesitate to contact us directly .

Thank you so much for writing this blog. I was stuck on where to begin but these example essays made it very clear how to craft my essays and show my goals.

Hope I can be there at UIUC next year:)

Thank you for this information. I hope I get into UIUC next year!!

Thank you so much for this information! I feel a lot more prepared for writing my supplemental after this!

Thanks for the essay examples, it was extremely helpful. Looking forward to finishing my application 🙂

These examples are super helpful! Thank you so much.

I noticed that both of the academic challenge and grade drop explanation questions are optional. I don’t have a lot to fill out because I already used the Common App additional info sections for that.

If I leave these blank or shallow for UIUC, will it impact my application and admissions consideration at all? Or, is it truly just an area to express extra info if necessary?

Hi Ethan, yes, in not fully answering the major-specific questions, it could negatively impact your consideration. You’re welcome to use the same or similar information that you included in your Common App essay or additional information sections. We hope this helps. If you have any other questions, don’t hesitate to contact us directly .

Thanks for the example!

I think you have a couple of typos in your examples.

“share the benefits with other” I think it should be “others” instead.

“my main career goal is to bring more recognition to musics listeners” I think it should be “music” instead.

Indeed we did, so we’ve made some edits. Thank you for catching them, Pranav!

Thank you so much for the great examples! It really helps provide me with a solid start and understanding of how to approach essays! Much less daunting than expected!

This is really helpful .Thank you!

Thanks so much, Advaith; we’re glad the examples helped!

Thanks, Aayush; we’re so glad you found the examples helpful!

Thank you for these examples! My mind was scrambled while thinking of what to write!

I wanted to say that this blog and the comments are both very helpful. I was going to contact the admissions office regarding these questions (like how specific the responses they need to be, how many things we could talk about, etc.), but this blog cleared most of my doubts. Thank you for posting these examples!!

This was a very great helpful blog. I am a senior in high school and just submitting my apps and this gave me an idea of how to do the essays for UIUC Thanks so much.

Thank you! I have an idea of what it should sound like now. What would you suggest if I’ve already covered the information a question asks for in the personal statement?

Thank you so much for this guide, it made the writing process significantly easier!

Is the second prompt more of a “Why UIUC” prompt? As in, do we write details about why we want to attend UIUC or details about why we want to do CS?

Thanks so much for the examples, super helpful with starting off the supplemental essays!

These are some great examples and they helped me a lot with writing my own which was pretty intimidating at first! Y’all were also funny with the music listening major— I wish!!

HI Arnav! For the second prompt, it’s more about you and less bout UIUC; we’re more interested in what you want to do with a degree in CS. We hope this helps!

Hi Shrujana, we’re glad the examples helped! If you’ve already covered the information a question asks for within your personal statement, some options could be to provide a different experience in your major-specific answer, elaborate more fully in the personal statement, or choose a different question for your personal statement. Whatever makes the most sense to you and will give our admissions counselors the most helpful information!

Hi UIUC Admissions, I am planning on listing “undeclared” on my major because I am interested in a few different areas such as Business and Psychology. Can you provide an example for someone who is not sure what they want to major in?

Thanks for the suggestion, Melissa. Although we won’t be able to do this in time for this year, we’ll see what’s possible for future years!

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Hey UIUC, I am so thankful for this content put out! This got me through my drafting sessions and now I am ready to submit my application. Looking forward to become a fighting Illini next year :))

AHH you do amazing work UIUC admissions blog! Thank you!

Hahahaha. Very creative! I like the example of music learning as a major. This was very helpful and look forward to applying to UIUC🙂👍

Very helpful information thank you

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You'll answer one to two essays as part of your application, depending on whether you're applying to a major or to our undeclared program , and if you've selected a second choice . Essays should be 300 to 400 words each.

If You're Applying to a Major :

Explain your interest in the major you selected. Describe how you have recently developed this interest, inside and/or outside of the classroom, and how this major relates to your professional goals.

If You're Applying to Our Undeclared Program :

Explain your academic interests and strengths or your future career goals. You may include any majors or areas of study you are currently considering.

If You've Selected a Second-Choice Major (Including Undeclared ):

You have selected a second-choice major. Please explain your interest in this major.

Tips for Writing Your Essay

Be memorable..

The essay portion of the application is important because it gives us further insight into who you are and who you want to be. Make us remember you!

Be prepared.

Take time to think about and brainstorm your message. Create an outline, write a good first draft, and edit multiple times.

Be yourself.

We want to know more about you, so be honest and let us into your world. Instead of making broad statements about what you want to do, provide specific examples from your current institution or extracurricular activities. And don’t be afraid to add your personal style and voice to your writing!

You only have a couple of paragraphs to tell us that you’re not only qualified to attend UIUC, but you're also ready for the challenge and will make the most of your experience. Choose your words wisely.

Be focused.

It's not necessary for you to repeat information that’s already elsewhere in your application. Stay focused on explaining how those credentials and qualifications will lead to a successful future here.

Be professional.

Submitting a sloppy-looking essay with spelling errors and glaring mistakes sends us the message that you’re not serious about UIUC. Proofread your essays and ask your counselor, a friend, or a parent to take a second look.

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Tackling the UIUC Supplemental Essays 2023-2024

The University of Illinois Urbana Champaign (UIUC) is a renowned institution known for its rigorous academic environment and vibrant student life. To stand out from the competition and make your way to UIUC, it's crucial to nail your supplemental essays. Let's dig deeper into how to approach these prompts.

University of Illinois Urbana Champaign Supplemental Essay Prompts

Explain your interest in the major you selected and describe how you have recently explored or developed this interest inside and/or outside the classroom. You may also explain how this major relates to your future career goals. (400 words)

If you're applying to the Division of General Studies, explain your academic interests and strengths or your future career goals. You may include any majors or areas of study you're currently considering. (400 words)

Approach to Each Prompt

Explain your interest in the major you selected This prompt is essentially a 'Why This Major' essay. UIUC wants to understand why you have chosen your particular field of study. The admissions committee is looking for a genuine interest and understanding of your chosen major. Discuss specific courses, professors, or research initiatives at UIUC that excite you. Also, try to tie in how this major will help you accomplish your future career goals.

From an early age, I've been fascinated by the harmony in nature's design, the intricate systems that flawlessly work together to sustain life. It's this interest that guided me towards choosing Biological Sciences as my major at the University of Illinois Urbana Champaign (UIUC).

My journey of exploration began in my sophomore year of high school when I joined the biology club. Through activities like studying local biodiversity, attending seminars, and even conducting a mini research project on local bird species, I began to realize the potential of biology as a tool for understanding our world. It was here that I developed a particular interest in ecology and conservation.

To further my understanding, I interned last summer at a local conservation center. Here, I had the opportunity to work alongside researchers studying the impacts of urbanization on local flora and fauna. This experience was both enlightening and inspiring, cementing my resolve to pursue biology.

As for the future, my dream is to become a conservation scientist. I aspire to work on preserving biodiversity and finding sustainable solutions to human-nature conflicts. I believe that a major in Biological Sciences at UIUC, with its focus on experiential learning and research, would be a perfect stepping stone towards achieving this dream.

Courses such as 'Principles of Ecology' and 'Conservation Biology', along with opportunities to engage in research through the School of Integrative Biology, excite me. I am particularly intrigued by the research work of Professor Smith on urban ecology, and I hope to contribute to this work as an undergraduate researcher at UIUC.

Explain your academic interests if applying to the Division of General Studies This essay is for applicants who are undecided about their major. Even if you are undecided, UIUC wants to know about your academic strengths, interests, and potential career goals. The key here is to show flexibility and curiosity.

As a curious and flexible learner, my academic interests are broad and interdisciplinary. Although I am applying to the Division of General Studies at UIUC, my academic strengths lie in the intersection of humanities and social sciences.

Throughout high school, I have been drawn towards history and literature, fascinated by the insights they provide into human behavior, societies, and cultures. Simultaneously, I am intrigued by psychology and its potential for understanding individual behavior.

While I am yet to narrow down on a specific career path, I am considering a future that allows me to leverage these interests, possibly in journalism, social work, or diplomacy. Regardless of the path I choose, I am confident that the comprehensive education provided by the Division of General Studies at UIUC will equip me with the broad-based knowledge and skills needed to excel.

At UIUC, I am excited about courses such as 'Interdisciplinary Perspectives on the Environment' and 'Cultural Differences and Social Change' that reflect my varied interests. Through these courses and more, I look forward to delving deeper into my interests, refining my skills, and charting a career path that aligns with my passions and strengths.

Top Tips for Your Essays

Be Specific : Show that you’ve done your research. What unique opportunities does UIUC offer that align with your interests?

Show Development : You should not only express your interest but also illustrate your understanding and commitment to your chosen major.

Demonstrate Passion : The admissions committee wants to see enthusiasm in your writing. Make sure your passion for your chosen major shines through.

Connect to Future Goals : How will your chosen major or studies at UIUC help you in your future career?

The University of Illinois Urbana Champaign offers a vibrant and supportive community, rigorous academics, and a multitude of resources for its students. By effectively addressing the supplemental essays, you can illustrate your fit for the school and take one step closer to becoming an Illini!

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University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign 2023-24 Application Essay Question Explanations

The Requirements: 2-3 essays of 150 words each

Supplemental Essay Type(s): Why

The admissions committee at the University Illinois Urbana Champaign wants to know about your academic interests and career goals. The prompts change slightly depending on whether you’re hoping to attend with a declared major or not. Regardless, you should be prepared to write concisely and authentically about your plans and goals!

If You’re Applying to a Major:

Explain, in detail, an experience you’ve had in the past 3 to 4 years related to your first-choice major. this can be an experience from an extracurricular activity, in a class you’ve taken, or through something else. (150 words).

For this essay, d escribe an experience you’ve had that relates to your first-choice major. Admissions is literally asking you to speak about this experience in detail, so don’t hold back. Did you work on a science experiment that taught you about the basics of organic chemistry? Maybe you watched those crazy robotics videos online and thought, “Hmm, I should understand how those work so I can protect my future family when A.I. takes over in 2050.” (I mean, honestly, have they not watched Black Mirror ?!) Throughout high school, you’ve been exposed to so many different subjects, and admissions wants to know why this one in particular has caught your eye.

Describe your personal and/or career goals after graduating from UIUC and how your selected first-choice major will help you achieve them. (150 words)

After explaining why your major is the right choice for you, look ahead five or ten years and imagine how it will catapult you into a fulfilling career—one that you may not have access to otherwise. Maybe when you were younger, you fell in love with stargazing and memorizing constellations and knew you wanted to be involved in a space-related field when you grew up—UIUC’s Astronomy program will help you get there! Build a bridge between your past and your future for admissions so they can see your commitment and demonstrated interest in this field.

If You’re Applying to Our Undeclared Program in the Division of General Studies:

What are your academic interests please include 2-3 majors you’re considering at illinois and why. (150 words).

There’s only one trick to generating a straightforward explanation of your academic interests: be honest. Since you probably don’t know what you want to major in or are in the process of paring down your list, don’t waste time trying to think of what admissions “wants” you to say! Choosing anything other than your true interests would be a misrepresentation of who you are and a disservice to you and the admissions office. To narrow your focus, try to tell a story with your choices. How can you use your life experiences to reveal something about what you value and what excites you intellectually? 

Try to illustrate a general inclination (e.g., journalism, English, and media/cinema studies go hand-in-hand). Or if you really feel like you could go any direction, try to show a balance, picking majors across fields that link to each other in a way that makes sense (e.g., mathematics, linguistics, and music composition all use special notations). Do whatever you can do to give admissions the full picture of who you are.

What are your future career or academic goals? You may include courses you took in high school and how these impacted your goals. (150 words)

Even if you’re undecided, it’s important to remember that UIUC seeks to invite movers and shakers to campus, students with big dreams and plans to make them happen. You don’t have to use this prompt to outline your 30-page plan for eliminating world hunger—in fact, with only 150 words to work with, we definitely advise against it! Think about the areas that pique your interest and where your curiosity originated. Was it a philosophy class you took junior year? Or, perhaps what spurred your interest wasn’t a class at all. Maybe you knew you wanted to be at the forefront of the fight against climate change and global warming after watching a poignant documentary with your family that hit close to home. How do you plan to contribute to this effort and how will your time at UIUC set you up for carbon neutral success? (Maybe their Natural Resources and Environmental Sciences major is a good place to start?) Whatever way you decide to answer this prompt, be sure to show admissions that you have an actionable, long-term goal in mind.

If You’ve Selected a Second-Choice Major (Including Undeclared):

You have selected a second-choice major. please explain your interest in that major or your overall academic or career goals. (150 words).

For this essay, admissions understands that you haven’t got it all figured out yet. And that’s okay! A lot of very successful people have leapt in and out of various disciplines or have even found common ground where they overlap (think philosophy and economics or agriculture and business). You’re allowed (encouraged, even!) to have many interests, and admissions wants to know where your strengths lie. 

Why does this secondary area of education appeal to you? What applications can you see blossoming from studying in this field? We recommend doing another dive into UIUC’s course offerings to show that this isn’t just an afterthought; additionally, feel free to share any previous experiences (in or out of the classroom) that have led you to this choice. Once you’ve succinctly demonstrated your interest, look to the future and explain how UIUC’s offerings will help you achieve your end-goals when it comes to your selected second-choice area of study.

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4 Tips for Writing a Great UIUC Essay

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Thinking of attending the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign? Then you've come to the right place. For this highly-ranked public school, you'll need to submit a personal statement with your application. But what should you include in your UIUC essay to make you stand out?

Read on to learn what the current UIUC essay prompt is and how to write a great UIUC essay. We also show you a real UIUC essay example to give you an idea of what a great statement looks like.

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What Is the UIUC Essay?

All applicants must answer two to three UIUC prompts and one Common Application prompt as part of their application for admission.

Your UIUC prompt will change based on whether you 1) are applying to a major, 2) are applying to UIUC's Undeclared Program, or 3) have selected a second-choice major (including Undeclared). Each response should be about 150 words. 

Here are this year's UIUC prompts:

If you're applying to a major:

• Explain, in detail, an experience you've had in the past 3 to 4 years related to your first-choice major. This can be an experience from an extracurricular activity, in a class you’ve taken, or through something else.

Describe your personal and/or career goals after graduating from UIUC and how your selected first-choice major will help you achieve them.

If you're applying to UIUC's Undeclared Program:

• What are your academic interests and strengths? You may also include any majors you are considering.
• What are your future academic or career goals?

If you've selected a second-choice major (including Undeclared): 

• Please explain your interest in your second-choice major or your overall academic or career goals.

Students are also required to select one Common application essay prompt from a range of choices and write a response. 

You can view the full list of Coalition application essay prompts here and all of the Common Application essay prompts here. 

How to Write the UIUC Essay: Topics and Tips

The University of Illinois essay is an important part of your application since it's the only personal essay you'll write for the school. This makes it the only area on the UIUC application in which you can show off your personality, academic passion, and storytelling skills.

The overall point of this statement is for UIUC to learn more about you as a person and what qualities you'll bring to the school if you enroll.

In addition, UIUC has a YouTube series on admissions counseling that includes some useful videos with tips on how you can write an effective UIUC essay:

Now that you have a general sense of what UIUC will be looking for in your application essay, let’s break down each UIUC application essay prompt one by one. 

Myllini Major-Specific Prompt #1

Explain, in detail, an experience you've had in the past 3 to 4 years related to your first-choice major. This can be an experience from an extracurricular activity, in a class you've taken, or through something else.

Here's your chance to show your passion for your first-choice major! You have a lot of leeway here: maybe you took a class that lit a fire inside you, maybe you joined a club related to the subject, or maybe you participated in a related activity. Be careful, though. You only have 150 words, and UIUC is asking for an experience related to your major, not why you selected it in the first place. This is a time for you to show that you're already taking steps toward engaging with your chosen major!

Choose a story that is meaningful to you, and remember to be as detailed as you can within the constraints. Show the UIUC admissions counselors that you care about your chosen major, and you're already engaging with it.

Myllini Major-Specific Prompt #2

Unlike the first essay, which asks you about your past experience, this is where you get to dream big and show UIUC what you want to do with your degree. Remember to write this as if you've already been accepted to UIUC—they want to know how you'll represent them in the world! You only have 150 words, but you can do a lot in that space. If, for example, you want to be an aerospace engineer, you should check out UIUC's Aerospace Engineering website and connect their specific courses, professors, and extracurriculars to your post-degree goals. Maybe you want to work for NASA, and the UIUC robotics team will aid you in successfully applying. Be as specific as you can! And show UIUC that they are the best school for you to achieve your goals.

Myllini Undeclared Prompt #1

What are your academic interests and strengths? You may also include any majors you are considering. Much like the Major-Specific Prompt #1, this prompt asks you to share what you're passionate about, and where you excel academically. Be specific! Rather than saying "I've always been good at English and I like it," go into detail: perhaps you won an essay contest, or your op-ed was featured in the school paper. Maybe writing poetry is the best way you can connect your outer and inner worlds. If you have a few majors in mind, definitely mention them here! It's always good to show that you have a specific plan for your college career , even if you're not 100% sure what you want to major in yet. 

Myllini Undeclared Prompt #2

What are your future academic or career goals? This question mirrors Major-Specific Prompt #2, and asks you to talk about your ideal future. Maybe you know you want to get a graduate degree in sociology, or you're certain that you want to spend a few years with the Peace Corps before working with the U.S. Department of State. The key here is to remember that undeclared doesn't mean unplanned. Many students have specific career goals, but they see multiple paths to achieve them. This is your chance to show the future self you want to be, and how UIUC will get you to your goal.

Myllini Second-Choice Major Prompt #1

Please explain your interest in your second-choice major or your overall academic or career goals. You'll only need to answer this question if you've applied to a second-choice major! This prompt should look pretty familiar: you can choose to answer either the Major-Specific Prompt #1 or the Major-Specific Prompt #2. The trick here is to show that your second-choice major is deliberate and useful for your future goals. You're not just picking a second-choice major because you really, really want to get into UIUC in any way, shape, or form. If you have a secondary interest that's almost as strong as your first-choice major, consider answering the first prompt. If you have a very strong career goal that multiple majors could feed into, consider answering the second.

Whichever choice you make, remember to clearly state why UIUC is the best schoo l for your major or career path!

A Real UIUC Essay Example + Analysis

To help give you a better idea of what your own UIUC essay could look like, here is one real UIUC essay example we found online, written by an admitted student.

Keep in mind that this essay was written for an old prompt that's no longer on the MyIllini application. However, this essay is still a great example of how college counselors want to see students talk about their interests and passions. 

Here is the prompt:

Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more? (250 to 650 words)

And here is the essay:

The chicken, or the egg? The hours I’ve spent pondering this question are countless. People frequently debate the seemingly simple idea of which came first. To me, it is more than just a question, but an example of how human beings think. The question of “Which came first?” captivates me because it is a question without an answer. It has been asked for centuries and no progress has been made, but it still continues to be brought up. I think this is because humans prefer clear-cut answers. Like in any kind of competition, ending with a tie between teams or individuals isn’t a satisfying conclusion. People would rather the competition continue for extra time than admit there’s no real winner, or in this case, no real answer. So even though it’s obvious there will be no agreement, the debate over chickens and eggs continues. When people label something a “chicken-egg” situation, it means there is no way to establish the order of cause and effect, again leaving a feeling of uncertainty. But human nature is to seek an answer. The chicken-egg question shows humanity’s inability to accept unfinished business, and this fascinates me most. People want closure in all aspects of life, and big questions like this are no exception. I think the question “Which came first, the chicken or the egg?” is so interesting because people will always try to answer it knowing they will never find a solution. It shows that humans desire understanding above all else. When I want to learn more about this concept, I turn to my grandfather. He doesn’t have a degree in philosophy or psychology, yet he’s a reliable source on almost any subject given his extensive years spent at the University of Life. With so many experiences under his belt, he understands unanswerable questions much better than I do. “The only truth is uncertainty,” he tells me when I once again dive deep into the possibility of eggs without chickens or chickens without eggs. In his words, the most beautiful parts of life are the questions we can’t answer but spend out whole life trying to. My own desire for answers keeps me thinking about this question for hours on end. I think there’s good points to grandpa’s perspective, but as an eighteen-year-old entering college, I don’t know if I can accept that the only answer is no answer just yet. Until I can, I’ll gather my own evidence and continue to spend my days wondering whether Aristotle was eating chicken and waffles or omelettes for breakfast.

What Makes This UIUC Essay Work?

• It’s got a great hook. The applicant starts the essay with a familiar philosophical question: “The chicken, or the egg?”. This pulls the admissions committee into the essay by making them ponder the question too. The applicant then analyzes the question and provides their own unique interpretation of what it’s really getting at. As the applicant says at the end of the first paragraph, “To me, it’s more than just a question, but an example of how human beings think.” By stating their unique take on the chicken vs egg dilemma, the applicant shows the admissions committee that they can interpret complex ideas and analyze tough questions. These are qualities that UIUC wants their incoming class of students to have!
• It’s clear, focused, and easy to follow: A topic like this one could easily go off the rails, but the applicant keeps the essay focused by responding to exactly what the prompt is asking in the correct order. The first paragraph states the idea that the applicant finds engaging. The next two paragraphs explain why the applicant finds this idea “captivating” and connects their engagement with the idea to deeper meanings about human nature, which also demonstrates why this topic causes the applicant to “lose all track of time.” The fourth paragraph states who the applicant turns to when they want to learn more about this question, and explains what they have gained from exploring this question with their grandpa. The applicant wraps up the essay with a conclusion that describes how their approach to the chicken vs egg question relates to the kind of student they will be at UIUC. The clear structure, clean prose, and adept analysis all make this essay easy to understand and exciting to read

How Could This UIUC Essay Be Even Better?

• It could be more specific about why the idea is captivating: Although this UIUC essay is well written and tightly focused, it isn't super specific about why the applicant personally relates to the question about the chicken and the egg. The applicant does a great job explaining what they feel this debate reveals about human nature, but doesn’t say much about why that debate is meaningful to them.
• It could have a stronger conclusion : Although the applicant makes a great attempt at tying their essay response into why they will be a great fit for UIUC, the conclusion could do a bit more to show how this is the case. Reframing the last paragraph so it explains how the applicant’s approach to uncertainty makes them the perfect UIUC candidate could make this essay even stronger.

3 Essential Tips for Writing a Great UIUC Essay

To wrap up, here are four essential tips to keep in mind as you write your U of I application essay.

#1: Don't Just List Your Accomplishments

At first glance, some of the UIUC essay prompts may seem like an invitation to list all of your amazing accomplishments. But none of these prompts actually want you to do that! Instead, you need to use expertly crafted stories to convey everything you have to offer as an applicant to UIUC.

The point of the UIUC essay is to give the admissions committee more detailed and personal commentary on why you've chosen their school and why you would be a great addition to their student community. Leave the list of accomplishments for your resume. Telling a genuine story is the best way to show how your life experiences have shaped you into the perfect candidate for admission to UIUC.

#2: Highlight Your Passion

While the essay prompts all have a different focus, the main goal of each one is to draw out what you’re passionate about and why. With each prompt, what you're really trying to do is demonstrate your passion to the UIUC admissions committee.

In other words, what motivates you to learn? What drives you more than anything else? And why are you so enthusiastic about bringing your ideas, experiences, and character to UIUC?

By highlighting your passions and interests, you're also showing the UIUC admissions committee who you are and what's important to you, both academically and more broadly.

To really make your passion stand out in your University of Illinois essay, take the following steps:

• Be as specific as possible —give us real names and use visceral descriptions to make us feel as though we're there experiencing and feeling everything with you
• Be honest —the admissions committee wants to get to know the real you, and it can only do this if you're writing in an authentic voice that's true to who you are

#3: Polish and Proofread

My final tip is to give yourself plenty of time to polish and proofread your UIUC essay.

In your rough draft, keep an eye out for obvious typos and technical mistakes, such as errors in punctuation, grammar, and spelling. Also, look for any areas that are awkward, incomplete, out of place, or unclear.

Once you've edited your essay on your own, give it to someone else to read, such as a parent, teacher, or tutor. Ask them to make technical corrections as needed and to offer you advice on what you might be able to improve in terms of story, cogency, and overall effectiveness.

What's Next?

Applying to other colleges in the midwest? Check out our expert guides to how to write the UChicago essays , the Notre Dame essays , and the Michigan State essay .

If you're using the Common App to submit your college applications, you'll need to figure out which essay prompt is the best one for you .

Learn more about how to get into the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign by visiting our UIUC admission requirements page .

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UIUC Supplemental Essays 2023-24

If you’re interested in attending UIUC, writing effective UIUC essays is an important step toward gaining admission. The University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign (UIUC), located in eastern Illinois , stands out as one of the premier public universities in the nation. Consequently, UIUC Admissions assesses thousands of applications and UIUC supplemental essays annually to identify strong candidates.

With UIUC’s acceptance rate hovering around 45%, many students are curious about the key to gaining admission. While a strong academic record is important in any application, the UIUC supplemental essays are crucial to your application journey. Your essays offer admissions officials a glimpse into your academic interests and how they align with UIUC offerings. Therefore, your UIUC essays can be the deciding factor in the success of your application.

Our guide to the UIUC supplemental essays will walk you through strategies to use while writing your UIUC essays. We will explore the UIUC application requirements and analyze UIUC essay prompts, including the UIUC why major essay and why UIUC essay. In each section, you’ll find valuable insights to help you craft outstanding UIUC essays. With this guide, you’ll be ready to craft compelling UIUC essays that are certain to impress University of Illinois Admissions.

First, we’ll go over some UIUC Admissions quick facts. Then, we’ll take a look at the prompts for each of the UIUC supplemental essays and how to answer them. If you’re ready to learn all about the UIUC essays, let’s get started!

UIUC Admissions: Quick Facts

University of illinois at urbana-champaign quick facts.

• UIUC Acceptance Rate: 45% – while UIUC’s acceptance rate is higher than other top universities, U.S. News still considers UIUC moderately selective. 
• UIUC Application Platforms: UIUC accepts the Common Application & myIllni Application
• Students will respond to one essay prompt from the list of 2023-2024 Common Application Essay Prompts . Prompts are the same whether you apply through myIllini or the Common App. 
• Students will respond to specific UIUC essay prompts depending on their choice of major. Your UIUC essays may include a UIUC why major essay and why UIUC essay.
• Early Action: November 1st
• Regular Decision: January 5th 

Please note that essay requirements are subject to change each admissions cycle, and portions of this article may have been written before the final publication of the most recent guidelines. For the most up-to-date information on essay requirements, check the university’s admissions website.

Does University of Illinois Urbana Champaign require an essay?

The University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign (UIUC) requires applicants to submit UIUC supplemental essays as part of the application process. To start, all applicants must complete one personal statement essay, ranging from 250 to 650 words. This University of Illinois essay allows candidates to showcase their unique perspectives, experiences, and aspirations. The good news is that the UIUC essay prompts for this essay mirror the Common Application essay prompts. So, if you are applying to other schools via the Common App, you don’t need to write a new essay for UIUC. 

In addition to your personal statement, applicants must also submit 2 to 3 additional UIUC supplemental essays. The number of essays you write and the UIUC essay prompts you’ll respond to will depend on your chosen major(s). These major-specific UIUC supplemental essays allow applicants to delve deeper into their academic interests. In these essays, students can demonstrate an understanding of their chosen field of study and how their passions align with UIUC.

Ultimately, UIUC supplemental essays play a crucial role in providing the University of Illinois admissions committee with a comprehensive understanding of each applicant. Supplemental essays are UIUC’s main tool for seeing beyond what is reflected in a student’s academic achievements and standardized test scores. Once we go over the UIUC essay prompts, you’ll see just how important and valuable these essays can be to your application.

In the next sections, we will dive deeper into the major specific prompts. We’ll show you how to respond to these UIUC essay prompts to ensure your UIUC essays strengthen your application.

UIUC Major-Specific Prompts

For those applying to a specific major at the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign (UIUC), you can expect two major-specific UIUC essay prompts. These UIUC essays can be thought of as a UIUC why major essay and why UIUC essay. Together, these prompts are designed to gain deeper insights into your academic and personal aspirations. 

Major-specific University of Illinois Essay Prompt #1

Explain, in detail, an experience you’ve had in the past 3 to 4 years related to your first-choice major. this can be an experience from an extracurricular activity, in a class you’ve taken, or through something else. (150 words).

To craft your first UIUC why major essay, you must recount a recent, significant experience related to your first-choice major. Whether it’s an extracurricular activity, a memorable class, or any other relevant context, the connection to your intended major should be clear. Take the opportunity to provide a detailed narrative that showcases your hands-on involvement and its impact on your academic journey.

Major-specific University of Illinois Essay Prompt #2

Describe your personal and/or career goals after graduating from uiuc and how your selected first-choice major will help you achieve them. (150 words).

Your second UIUC why major essay can also be thought of as a why UIUC essay. In your essay, you’ll want to articulate your personal and/or career goals following graduation from UIUC. However, you’ll also need to explain how completing your first-choice major at UIUC aligns with and contributes to these aspirations. This prompt requires thoughtful reflection on your long-term vision, drawing clear connections between your academic pursuits at UIUC and your personal and professional journey. 

Strong college candidates will have clear goals and a track record of commitment to their education. By addressing these UIUC essays with sincerity and depth, you can present a compelling case for your suitability and enthusiasm for your chosen major.

UIUC Undeclared Major Program Essay Prompts

Students applying to the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign (UIUC) as an undeclared major can also anticipate two UIUC essay prompts. These UIUC supplemental essays are specifically tailored for students who are still undecided. These UIUC supplemental essays are similar to the major-specific essays in that you’ll still be discussing your academic interests and future goals.

Undeclared Major University of Illinois Essay Prompt #1

What are your academic interests please include 2-3 majors you’re considering at illinois and why. (150 words).

This essay invites you to share varied academic interests, requesting that you include specific majors you are considering at Illinois. Be sure to select specific major programs, rather than more general areas of study, and elaborate on the reasons behind your choices. This University of Illinois essay lets you showcase your curiosity and thought process in exploring potential academic paths. So, even if you’re undecided, you can still show the admissions committee what topics pique your curiosity.

Undeclared Major University of Illinois Essay Prompt #2

What are your future career or academic goals you may include courses you took in high school and how these impacted your goals. (150 words).

For this essay, you must articulate your future aspirations for college and beyond. You are also encouraged to look back on previous experiences and include details about high school courses that have inspired you. This University of Illinois essay prompt allows you to reflect on not just what you want to accomplish but also why . In your essay, aim to create a narrative that demonstrates the alignment between your educational background and future endeavors. 

Even if you aren’t sure what you want to study, that doesn’t mean you can’t wow admissions with your essays. By responding thoughtfully to these UIUC essays, you can present a well-rounded picture of your academic interests and future ambitions. 

UIUC Second-Choice Major Essay Prompt

For those who have chosen a second-choice major, including undeclared, UIUC provides a specific essay prompt to delve into your motivations and aspirations. Although this University of Illinois essay is technically optional, UIUC strongly recommends students select a second-choice major and complete this essay.

Second-Choice Major University of Illinois Essay Prompt

Please explain your interest in your second-choice major or your overall academic or career goals. (150 words).

This University of Illinois essay allows applicants to convey the reasons behind selecting a secondary major or to elucidate their broader academic and professional objectives. In responding to this UIUC essay prompt, consider sharing the factors that fuel your interest in the chosen second major and how it aligns with your overall academic and career trajectory. Whether you have a clear career path or are exploring various academic avenues, use this essay to showcase your thoughtful consideration of your academic journey and your second-choice major’s role in shaping your educational and professional aspirations. Crafting a compelling response to this prompt will strengthen your application by giving the admissions committee valuable insights into your motivations and future plans at UIUC.

How to write UIUC Essays?

You will notice that UIUC essays are uniquely tailored to outline your personal experiences within your interests. This reflects UIUC’s commitment to truly understanding who you are as a student and how your academic environment can contribute to your desired development.

With limited space, your essays need to be focused and concise, and writing them may require a touch of creativity. Approaching the UIUC essays requires careful consideration and authenticity to effectively communicate how UIUC aligns with your academic interests. Therefore, use the following steps to help craft your UIUC supplemental essays:

Self-reflection is Key

Self-reflection is a crucial first step in preparing your UIUC supplemental essays. Take the time to delve into who you are, what matters to you, and why you are an exceptional fit for UIUC. Focus on your individuality and consider what aspects of your personality and experiences have been vital to your growth. This preliminary exploration is pivotal to choosing strong topics for each of the UIUC essay prompts.

Choose the Common App Prompt That Fits You

While the major-specific UIUC essays will depend on your selected major, you do have the opportunity to choose your personal statement prompt. When deciding between the UIUC essay prompts, choose the one that aligns best with your experiences and interests. For instance, if overcoming a challenge has significantly shaped your perspective, consider the UIUC essay prompts related to resilience. Similarly, if you’ve achieved a noteworthy accomplishment, opt for the UIUC essay prompts inviting reflection on success. Your goal when choosing between the UIUC essay prompts is to pick one that effectively showcases your best qualities. (Especially those that make you a valuable addition to UIUC’s academic community.)

Be Creative, Be Different, Stand Out

Given the intimate nature of UIUC supplemental essays, don’t be afraid to be creative! Craft your narrative with innovation, experimenting with storytelling elements such as chronology and story arcs. Use dialogue and imagery to enhance the personal touch of your UIUC essays, providing admissions with a vivid portrayal of your unique qualities. Instead of merely stating preferences, vividly illustrate your interests. For instance, rather than stating a love for reading, you might vividly depict the hours spent engrossed in books.

By adhering to these steps, you will undoubtedly capture the attention of the admissions team. Remember, there is no singular formula for writing UIUC essays. Infuse your personality and distinctive experiences into your UIUC supplemental essays (and answer the prompts!) and you’ll be on the right track. Beyond these guidelines, you can find more detailed writing advice in this article on “ How to Write Better Essays .” 

Does UIUC care about essays?

Yes, the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign (UIUC) certainly cares about your UIUC supplemental essays. UIUC takes pride in its thorough admissions process . While academic excellence is essential, UIUC recognizes that true potential encompasses more than just grades. This holistic approach is exemplified by the significance attributed to things like your background, interests, and previous accomplishments and challenges. These things are hard to tell from numbers alone, which is what makes your UIUC supplemental essays so important.

The emphasis on UIUC supplemental essays reflects the university’s strategic decision to identify individuals who resonate with its values of academic excellence, innovation, and a commitment to societal impact. The UIUC essays offer applicants a platform to share their personal stories, experiences, and aspirations, enabling the admissions committee to better understand each candidate’s unique qualities and perspectives.

Therefore, crafting impactful UIUC supplemental essays is one of the most important steps in the application process. UIUC essays are not just a showcase of writing skills but a window into your character, revealing your commitment to contributing to UIUC’s academic and innovative community.

What is the UIUC known for?

UIUC is renowned for its exceptional academic programs, cutting-edge research initiatives, and a vibrant campus community. UIUC consistently ranks among the top public universities in the United States and is recognized for its outstanding engineering, computer science, and business programs. So, let’s dive deeper into some of UIUC’s best qualities:

Top-Tier Engineering Programs

UIUC is consistently recognized for its outstanding engineering programs, particularly electrical engineering and computer science. (U.S. News has UIUC ranking #5 in Best Undergraduate Engineering and Computer Science Programs). The Grainger College of Engineering has a distinguished reputation for producing graduates who excel in the technological and industrial sectors.

Cutting-Edge Research Facilities

UIUC is a research -intensive institution with state-of-the-art facilities. For example, the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science and Technology is a hub for interdisciplinary research, fostering collaborations among scientists, engineers, and scholars to address complex global challenges.

Innovation and Entrepreneurship

The university strongly commits to fostering innovation and entrepreneurship. The Research Park at UIUC provides a supportive ecosystem for startups and industry partnerships, allowing students and researchers to translate their ideas into real-world applications.

Academic Excellence in Business

UIUC’s Gies College of Business consistently ranks among the best in the nation. (U.S. News’ UIUC ranking highlights Gies as one of the Top 10 public undergraduate business programs in the country.) The Gies College of Business offers cutting-edge programs, including the highly regarded MBA. It is known for its emphasis on experiential learning and preparing students for leadership roles in the business world.

Diverse and Inclusive Campus

UIUC takes pride in its diverse and inclusive campus community. With students from around the globe and a wide range of cultural organizations within its 800 clubs and student organizations , the university provides a dynamic environment that encourages cross-cultural understanding and collaboration.

It’s no secret that UIUC is a top-tier institution. Known for academic excellence, research impact, and diversity, UIUC prepares its graduates for success in a rapidly evolving global landscape.

More supplemental essay resources from CollegeAdvisor

As you begin crafting your application for UIUC, consider exploring additional resources from CollegeAdvisor to enhance your preparation. These valuable tools are designed to provide expert guidance throughout the application process, ensuring you present your strongest and most authentic version of yourself. CollegeAdvisor’s resources go beyond the conventional and offer tailored advice for navigating specific aspects of the application journey.

Here are a few resources to check out before you start your application to UIUC:

• How to Get into UIUC Guide : This guide is a treasure trove of information, offering a detailed roadmap for securing admission to the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign. It provides strategic insights into UIUC’s admissions process, tips for writing compelling UIUC essays, and advice on showcasing your unique qualities to stand out in the competitive applicant pool.
• College Essay Topics : Crafting impactful essays is a crucial aspect of the application process. This College Essay Topics resource assists you in exploring creative and meaningful ideas for your essays. It provides inspiration and guidance to help you tell your story in a way that resonates with admissions committees.
• How to Start a Personal Statement : Your very first sentence will set the tone for your entire essay. This resource offers practical tips on how to start a personal statement effectively, helping you capture the reader’s attention from the outset. Learn how to craft a compelling opening that reflects your voice and establishes a strong foundation for your narrative.

Exploring these resources will undoubtedly enhance your understanding of the application process. That way, you can feel empowered to create compelling materials, increasing your chances of success at UIUC and other esteemed universities.

UIUC Supplemental Essays – Final Thoughts

The University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign ( UIUC ) presents a unique and dynamic opportunity for prospective students. With UIUC ranking #30 in the nation by Forbes, UIUC stands as one of the nation’s premier public universities in the Midwest . UIUC’s rigorous admissions process underscores its commitment to identifying candidates who both excel academically and align with its values.

The UIUC application process goes beyond standardized test scores, reflecting the university’s commitment to understanding the values and aspirations of each applicant. As such, the UIUC supplemental essays are incredibly important. UIUC essays require self-reflection, creativity, and a genuine connection to UIUC’s academic environment.

Before you go, here are some final takeaways from our guide to the UIUC supplemental essays. 

Navigating the UIUC essay prompts

• The major-specific UIUC essay prompts offer applicants a chance to showcase hands-on involvement and articulate how their chosen major aligns with their personal and career goals.
• Undeclared major applicants can express their academic interests and future aspirations through the tailored UIUC essay prompts, providing a glimpse into their exploration of potential academic paths.
• The UIUC second-choice major essay prompts allow applicants to delve into the motivations behind their secondary major or articulate broader academic and professional objectives, adding depth to their application.

Tips for writing your UIUC essays

• Resources from CollegeAdvisor, such as the “How to Get into UIUC Guide,” “College Essay Topics,” and “How to Start a Personal Statement,” provide strategic insights and practical tips to enhance your application journey, especially your UIUC essays.
• UIUC supplemental essays are essential for conveying your unique qualities and commitment to UIUC’s academic and innovative community. Approach the UIUC essays with authenticity, creativity, and a genuine connection to the university’s values, ensuring your application stands out in the competitive University of Illinois admissions process.

With these strategies, you can create UIUC essays that meet the requirements, stand out, and make a lasting impression on the UIUC admissions committee. We wish you the best of luck with your application and writing your UIUC supplemental essays. And good luck on your application journey!

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The University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign is mainly located in Champaign, Illinois. Technically, UIUC is located in the “twin cities” of Champaign and Urbana, so you may not always be in Champaign if you decide to attend! Founded in 1867, UIUC is the flagship institution of the University of Illinois system. The UIUC supplemental essays are split up based on whether you are applying to a specific major or their undeclared program. Therefore, it is important to have an idea of what you want to study before you begin filling out the UIUC application. 

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Before answering the UIUC supplemental essay questions

The UIUC supplemental essay questions are divided based on whether applicants are applying to a specific major, undeclared program or have a second-choice major. 

Therefore, it is important to do your research on UIUC and the academic programs available. Figure out what drives you and what you picture yourself doing in the future. If your future is not clear, do not worry! You still have plenty of time to explore and figure out what you are interested in by becoming an undeclared major. 

You will have to answer two-three short-answer questions depending on whether you’re applying to a major or undeclared program and if you have selected a second choice major.

Each short answer response should not exceed 150 words. This is not a lot of space for creative freedom, so be sure to be clear and concise. Do not drag on! Make sure you simply just answer the question and put your personality on the page. 

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If you’re applying to a major

If you are applying to a major , there are two UIUC supplemental essays you will need to complete (150 words each).

First essay

“Explain, in detail, an experience you’ve had in the past 3 to 4 years related to your first-choice major. This can be an experience from an extracurricular activity, in a class you’ve taken, or through something else.”

To begin answering this prompt, you should first describe what exactly your first-choice major is. You can give some background into how you discovered your passion for this subject. For example, maybe you want to study biology because you were obsessed with a particular lab you completed in high school. 

After giving a brief description of your major, talk about some meaningful experiences you have had that have added to your desire to study this topic. For example, you can choose to write about a particular “aha” experience in your biology class or a mandatory book for English class that changed your perspective on life. You can also choose to write about an outside the classroom experience such as a club or volunteer work you have done. You can even talk about a figure in your life that has inspired you. The limits are endless! 

Ensure that whatever experiences you choose to write about that they connect back to your first-choice major. 

Second essay

“Describe your personal and/or career goals after graduating from UIUC and how your selected first-choice major will help you achieve them.” 

The second supplemental essay question for applicants who have selected a first-choice major is pretty straightforward. What do you envision yourself doing after college? What is the career you are working towards with this major? 

This question will allow admissions officers to see that you are working towards something bigger than yourself. They want to see that you have a plan ready for your future. 

So, describe exactly what you intend to do with your degree from UIUC. Be sure to mention why this particular path is the right one for you. 

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If you’re applying to uiuc’s undeclared program.

If you’re applying to the undeclared program, there are two UIUC supplemental essays you will have to write (150 words each). 

“What are your academic interests? Please include 2-3 majors you’re considering at Illinois and why.” 

Having your future aspirations figured out is not something that is required to attend university. Therefore, do not stress if you are not exactly sure what you want to major in at UIUC. 

Luckily, their undeclared program is a popular option for incoming freshmen. In this program, you are able to explore different majors while still remaining on track for graduation. 

Therefore, this prompt wants to get you thinking about where your academic strengths and interests lie. Are you a book lover and cannot wait to go to English class every day? Do you love learning new languages? Is calculus your jam? Wherever your strengths and interests lie, be sure to write about all of them. Include some background information on why you love these particular subjects. Maybe your mom read to you every night when you were younger, and your love of reading continues to this day. Or, maybe you always were the banker while playing Monopoly so math is now your favorite subject 

Just remember not to exceed 150 words in your response! 

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“What are your future career or academic goals? You may include courses you took in high school and how these impacted your goals.” 

As mentioned above, you do not need to have your life figured out! Therefore, your answer to this question does not need to be extremely specific. Rather, it can be quite broad. 

For example, if you do not know what you want to do, but you enjoy reading and working as a camp counselor for first graders over the summer, you can talk about your love for this and how it may open a door to teaching in your future career. You can even be more broad and say that you picture yourself helping others in your future career because that is what makes you feel good. 

UIUC does not want you to have your future figured out and does not expect you to! They just want to see that their undeclared applicants are thinking about their futures and potential career paths. 

If you’ve selected a second-choice major (including undeclared) 

If you’re applying to a second-choice major you will need to answer one supplemental essay question (150 words). 

“Please explain your interest in your second-choice major or your overall academic or career goals.” 

A second-choice major is essentially a “backup” major. It means if you are not admitted to your first-choice major, you will then be considered for your second-choice major. 

Essentially, like the other UIUC supplemental essays, this question wants to get to the bottom of the “why?” Why do you want to study this as your second choice? Why is this option not your first choice? 

Be sure to include how studying this major will still help you reach your career goals despite not being your first choice major. Why does this secondary area of study appeal to you? 

Next steps after applying to UIUC 

Once you have completed your UIUC supplemental essays – congratulations! Be sure to read over your responses or ask a trusted friend to read them over for you. Remember, you want to submit a flawless essay, not one filled with silly mistakes that make you seem careless.

Make sure you do not repeat any information throughout your responses, despite the questions being similar. Be sure to reveal new information throughout your application so admissions officers get a well-rounded idea of “you.” 

Now that you have beautiful and flawless UIUC supplemental essay answers written, it is officially time to submit your application! 

Once your application is submitted, be sure to check your UIUC portal and email for updates on your application status.

In addition, show demonstrated interest in UIUC by following them on social media or scheduling an in-person tour. This will give you an opportunity to get to know UIUC a little better, and give UIUC the chance to get to know you as well. 

Best of luck in the rest of your college admissions journey! 

Additional resources

If UIUC is the first school you have applied to or the last or somewhere in the middle, we know you need some help along the way! Luckily, we have an abundance of resources at your fingertips. 

Not sure if UIUC should be the only school you apply to? Check out our guide on how many schools to apply to . Make sure to read up after about how to find safety, reach, and match schools . 

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UIUC Supplemental Essays 2023-2024

By Eric Eng

Welcome to the world of college applications – a journey where each step is a unique opportunity to showcase your aspirations, experiences, and personality. Among these steps, the University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign (UIUC) supplemental essays for the 2023-2024 application cycle stand out as a critical component. These essays are more than just a formality; they’re a chance for you to let your individuality shine through to the admissions committee.

As a prospective student aiming for a seat in one of the nation’s most prestigious universities, you understand the importance of making every word count. The UIUC supplemental essays are your canvas, and how you paint your story can make all the difference. Whether you’re a budding engineer, a future entrepreneur, or an aspiring artist, these prompts are designed to unearth the depths of your creativity and intellect.

In this blog, we’ll dive deep into the nuances of the 2023-2024 UIUC supplemental essays. Our aim is to equip you with insights, strategies, and tips to transform these prompts from daunting tasks into opportunities for self-expression and impactful storytelling. So, let’s get started on this exciting journey toward crafting essays that resonate with your dream college’s ethos and bring you one step closer to your academic aspirations at UIUC.

How Many Supplemental Essays Does UIUC Have?

UIUC requires applicants to answer two to three major-specific prompts and one additional essay prompt as part of their application for the 2023-2024 cycle. These prompts vary based on whether the applicant is applying to a specific major, the undeclared program, or has a second-choice major. 

The major-specific prompts, each approximately 150 words long, ask applicants to detail experiences related to their first-choice major, describe personal or career goals, or explain their interest in a second-choice major or overall academic goals. Additionally, applicants must respond to one of the essay prompts from the Common App, with a response length ranging from 250 to 650 words.

The purpose of these essays is multifaceted. They provide a platform for students to convey their experiences, ambitions, and compatibility with their chosen field of study or academic interests. Through these essays, UIUC aims to gain deeper insights into the applicant’s personality, intellectual curiosity, and potential contributions to the university community. This personalized approach in the application process allows the university to assess the holistic qualities of applicants beyond academic metrics, ensuring a diverse and dynamic student body.

What are the 2023-2024 UIUC Supplemental Essay Prompts?

For each of the prompts, your written responses should be around 150 words in length. When you’re applying via the Common Application, you can locate the specific writing prompts for the University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign under the “Writing” section. This will become visible in the supplemental questions area once you have added UIUC to your list of prospective colleges on the Common App platform. This arrangement ensures that applicants have direct access to the necessary prompts tailored to their application to UIUC.

If You’re Applying to a Major:

Explain, in detail, an experience you’ve had in the past 3 to 4 years related to your first-choice major. This can be an experience from an extracurricular activity, in a class you’ve taken, or through something else.

Describe your personal and/or career goals after graduating from UIUC and how your selected first-choice major will help you achieve them.

If You’re Applying to the Undeclared Program in the Division of General Studies:

What are your academic interests? Please include 2-3 majors you’re considering at Illinois and why.

What are your future career or academic goals? You may include courses you took in high school and how these impacted your goals.

If You’ve Selected a Second-Choice Major (Including Undeclared):

Please explain your interest in your second-choice major or your overall academic or career goals.

How to Write the 2023-2024 UIUC Supplemental Essays

Specific major prompt 1, understanding the prompt.

This prompt wants you to think about an important event or activity that connects closely with the major you want to study. It’s an opportunity for you to show how excited and dedicated you are to this field of study. You can use this chance to explain why you’re a good fit for this major. Talk about how this experience has helped shape your interest and skills in the subject. Share what you learned from it and how it has prepared you for the major. This is your moment to really express your enthusiasm and readiness for this area of study. Here are some key points to consider when answering this prompt, along with detailed explanations for each.

Key Points to Consider

1. Identify a Defining Experience: Begin by identifying a specific experience from the past 3-4 years that had a profound impact on your interest in your chosen major. This could be a project in a relevant class, an extracurricular activity, an internship, or even a personal project. Be selective; choose an experience that truly deepened your interest and understanding of the field.

2. Detail Your Role and Responsibilities: Once you’ve chosen the experience, describe your role in detail. What were your responsibilities? Did you lead a team, conduct research, or overcome a particular challenge? Provide enough context so that the reader understands the scope and significance of your involvement.

3. Reflect on Learning and Growth: Discuss what you learned from this experience. How did it deepen your understanding of the subject? Did it challenge any preconceived notions you had about the field? Reflect on any skills or insights you gained, and how they have prepared you for a major in this area.

4. Connect to Your Future Goals: Explain how this experience has shaped your academic and career goals. How does it reinforce your choice of major? What specific aspects of the major are you excited to explore further in college? This connection is vital as it shows the admissions committee that your interest is well-considered and aligns with your long-term goals.

5. Showcase Your Enthusiasm and Commitment: Finally, let your enthusiasm for the subject shine through in your writing. Use specific examples and anecdotes to convey your passion. This is your opportunity to show the admissions committee not just what you’ve done, but also who you are and why you are a perfect fit for the program.

Remember, this essay is as much about you as it is about the experience. It’s an opportunity to offer a glimpse into your personality, your intellectual pursuits, and your potential as a student at UIUC. Be authentic, reflective, and precise in your writing to make a strong impression.

Specific Major Prompt 2

This prompt wants you to clearly describe your future goals and explain how they relate to the major you want to study at UIUC. It helps the admissions team see your big plans for the future and how your chosen area of study fits with these plans. They want to know how the subjects you’re interested in will help you reach your personal and career targets. In other words, you need to show how your chosen major is a key part of achieving your dreams. It’s about making a clear link between what you want to do in life and the courses you’ll take at UIUC. This way, the admissions committee can see that you have a clear direction and purpose for your education.

1. Define Your Goals: Start by clearly defining your personal and career objectives. Are you aiming for a specific profession? Do you have entrepreneurial aspirations? Perhaps you’re driven by a desire to make a societal impact. It’s important that these goals are not just ambitious but also specific and realistic. For example, if you’re applying for a Computer Science major, you might talk about your goal to develop innovative software solutions to address environmental issues.

2. Link Goals to Your Major: Explain how the major you’ve chosen is a stepping stone to these goals. This part of your essay should demonstrate a clear understanding of what the major entails and how its curriculum, resources, and opportunities at UIUC specifically support your aspirations. If your goal is to become a software developer specializing in green technologies, you could discuss specific courses or projects within the UIUC Computer Science program that focus on sustainable technology.

3. Personal Experiences and Interests: Incorporate personal experiences and interests that have led you to these goals. This could include relevant academic projects, extracurricular activities, internships, or even personal experiences that sparked your interest in the field. This personal touch not only adds authenticity to your essay but also shows a deeper engagement with your chosen field of study.

4. Future Vision: Illustrate a vivid picture of where you see yourself after graduation. How will your experiences and education at UIUC contribute to your professional journey? For instance, if you’re interested in a career in sustainable architecture, describe how studying in UIUC’s Architecture program will equip you with the innovative design skills and environmental consciousness needed in the field.

5. Reflect on Impact and Contribution: Finally, reflect on how achieving your goals will allow you to contribute to your field, community, or society at large. Universities like UIUC are looking for students who are not only academically capable but also have the potential to make a positive impact. Whether it’s contributing to technological advancements, influencing public policy, or driving social change, showing how you plan to use your education for the greater good can be a powerful conclusion to your essay.

Remember, this essay is your opportunity to showcase how your academic interests and career aspirations align, and how UIUC is the right place for you to realize these ambitions. Be sincere, specific, and forward-thinking in your response.

Undeclared Program Prompt 1

This prompt aims to understand how curious you are about learning, how you think about choosing your majors, and how these choices fit with what you like and what you want to achieve in the future. It wants to see if you have a clear idea of what you want to study and why. The question also checks if the subjects you’re interested in match your plans for the future.

It’s a way for the college to see how well you’ve thought about your education and career path. They want to know if you’re picking majors just because they sound good, or if you have a real interest and plan behind your choices. This prompt is a chance for you to show that you’re serious about your studies and have a good plan for your future.

1. Identify and Explain Your Academic Interests: Begin by articulating your core academic interests. These are the subjects or areas of study that genuinely excite and engage you. For instance, you might have a keen interest in environmental science due to a passion for sustainability, or in computer science because of a fascination with technology and its potential to solve real-world problems. Be specific about what aspects of these fields intrigue you.

2. Select 2-3 Majors at Illinois: Choose two or three majors offered at the University of Illinois that align with these interests. It’s important to do your research on each major, understanding the curriculum and unique opportunities they offer. For example, if you are interested in both environmental sustainability and technology, you might consider majors like Environmental Engineering and Computer Science.

3. Articulate Why You’re Considering These Majors: For each selected major, provide specific reasons for your interest. These reasons should reflect how the major aligns with your academic interests and long-term goals. If you’re considering Environmental Engineering, discuss how it combines your interest in protecting the environment with your strength in math and science, and how it can lead to a career in sustainable design.

4. Connect Majors to Future Goals: Explain how these majors could potentially help you achieve your future academic or career objectives. This might include discussing the types of skills you expect to develop, the kind of knowledge you hope to gain, or the career paths these majors could open for you. For example, studying Computer Science might be a step toward your goal of developing innovative software solutions.

5. Reflect on Openness to Exploration: Given that you’re considering multiple majors, it’s also beneficial to reflect on your openness to interdisciplinary learning and exploration. Universities value students who are eager to explore and integrate different fields of study. You might mention how the diverse academic environment at Illinois is ideal for this kind of exploration and how it can help you in making a well-informed decision about your major.

Reme mber, this prompt is an opportunity to show the admissions committee your genuine academic interests and how you have thoughtfully considered your options at Illinois. It’s about demonstrating your enthusiasm for learning and your ability to make informed decisions about your educational journey.

Undeclared Program Prompt 2

The prompt wants you to talk about your future plans and dreams, either for your job or for more learning after high school. It asks you to think about what you want to do in the long run. You should also think about how your time in high school has shaped these plans.

Consider the classes you took and events you experienced that made you want these goals. Reflect on how these past experiences in school have guided you toward your future ambitions. Share how your high school journey has helped you figure out what you want to do later in life.

1. Outline Your Future Goals: Begin by clearly defining your career or academic aspirations. Are you aiming to pursue a specific profession, such as becoming a doctor, engineer, or writer? Or do you have broader educational goals, like wanting to explore interdisciplinary studies or conduct research in a certain field? Be as specific as possible about what you want to achieve in the future.

2. Connect High School Experiences to Your Goals: Reflect on the courses or experiences in high school that have shaped these goals. For instance, if you developed an interest in engineering, you might talk about a particular project in physics class that sparked your fascination with how things work. Or, if you’re drawn to literature, a memorable English class might have been a turning point for you. Describe these experiences in detail and explain how they influenced your decision-making and goal-setting.

3. Discuss Skills and Knowledge Gained: Explain the skills and knowledge you acquired through these high school courses and how they contribute to your future goals. For example, if you’re interested in a career in environmental science, you might discuss how biology and chemistry classes provided you with a foundational understanding of ecosystems and environmental issues, which are critical for your future studies and career.

4. Link Goals to University Education: Elaborate on how you plan to use your time at the university to further these goals. This could include specific majors or courses at the university that align with your goals, extracurricular activities, or research opportunities you wish to pursue. Show that you have a clear plan for how your university education will help you achieve your long-term objectives.

5. Reflect on Personal Development: Finally, consider adding a personal element by discussing how these goals align with your values or personal growth. For example, if you aim to become a healthcare professional, you might talk about a personal experience that instilled a deep sense of empathy and a desire to help others, which is driving your career choice.

In answering this prompt, it’s important to demonstrate a clear connection between your high school experiences, your future goals, a nd how your intended university education will help bridge the two. This shows the admissions committee that you have a thoughtful, well-planned approach to your education and future career.

Second-Choice Major Prompt

This prompt wants you to explain why you’ve picked a certain area of study as your backup choice and how it fits with your wider educational interests or career plans. It allows you to show that you’re open to different ideas and have a wide range of interests.

You should talk about what draws you to this second-choice subject and how it connects to the things you are most interested in learning about. Describe how this alternative field could still help you reach your future goals. It’s a chance for you to show that you’re open-minded and eager to learn in more than one area. This approach shows the admissions team that you’re flexible and can see the value in various subjects.

1. Clarify Your Interest in the Second-Choice Major: Begin by explaining why you selected this specific major as your second choice. You should aim to show a genuine interest in this field, even if it’s not your top choice. Discuss what aspects of this field appeal to you, whether it’s a particular subject matter, skills you wish to acquire, or potential career paths it opens up. For example, if your first choice is Mechanical Engineering and your second choice is Physics, you might discuss your fascination with the fundamental principles of mechanics that underlie both fields.

2. Connect to Your Primary Academic Interests: Explain how your second-choice major complements or overlaps with your first-choice major or primary academic interests. This connection can demonstrate your well-roundedness and ability to engage with multiple disciplines. For instance, if your primary interest is in Biomedical Engineering and your second choice is Biology, talk about how a deep understanding of biological sciences is crucial for innovation in biomedical solutions.

3. Discuss Skills and Perspectives Gained: Reflect on the unique skills or perspectives you believe studying this second-choice major will offer. This could include interdisciplinary skills, a different methodological approach, or a broader understanding of a related field. For instance, a second-choice major in Computer Science might provide valuable technical skills and computational thinking beneficial to almost any field.

4. Link to Career or Academic Goals: Describe how this second-choice major could still help you achieve your overall career or academic goals. Even if it’s not your first choice, this major can still play a significant role in your future plans. For example, if you aspire to work in environmental policy, a second-choice major in Political Science could provide you with insights into policy-making processes.

5. Express Openness to Exploration and Growth: Lastly, show your openness to exploration and personal growth. Universities appreciate students who are adaptable and willing to explore different academic avenues. Expressing a positive attitude towards your second-choice major can demonstrate your resilience and willingness to embrace various opportunities for learning and growth.

In answering this prompt, it’s important to convey a thoughtful and well-rounded academic profile, showing that you have carefully considered how different fields of study can contribute to your overall educational and career objectives. This approach demonstrates to the admissions committee not only your adaptability but also your ability to find value in diverse academic pursuits.

Preparing to Write Your 2023-2024 UIUC Supplemental Essays

Before you dive into writing your UIUC supplemental essays, it’s crucial to arm yourself with the right information. These essays are your opportunity to show the admissions committee who you are beyond your grades and test scores. Here’s a guide on what you should read to prepare effectively.

Understanding UIUC’s Mission and Values

Before you start writing your UIUC supplemental essays, it’s essential to understand the heart and soul of the University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign. Every university has its unique set of values and mission, and UIUC is no different.

Dive into the university’s official website and materials to grasp their commitment to innovation, inclusivity, and making a global impact. This understanding will help you align your essays with what the university values most, showcasing how you, as a prospective student, fit into their community and ethos.

Deciphering the Essay Prompts

The 2023-2024 UIUC supplemental essay prompts are your canvas to paint a picture of yourself. Read each prompt carefully and repeatedly. Ask yourself what each question is truly seeking. Is it probing into your problem-solving skills, your leadership experiences, or your vision for the future? Understanding the depth and intention behind each prompt is crucial for a response that is both genuine and resonates with the admissions committee.

Exploring Course Descriptions

If you have a specific major or program in mind, familiarize yourself with UIUC’s course offerings and program specifics. This research can be pivotal in writing an essay that convincingly argues why UIUC is the perfect fit for your academic journey. Detailing how specific courses or programs align with your goals shows the admissions committee your commitment and clarity about your educational path.

Keeping Up with Current Events in Your Field

Admissions officers are always on the lookout for students who are not just academically proficient but also passionately engaged with their chosen field. Keep yourself updated with the latest news, research breakthroughs, technological advancements, or significant discussions in your field of interest. Incorporating these elements into your essay demonstrates a proactive and engaged mindset, which is crucial for a thriving university student.

Analyzing Successful Essays

Reading essays from students who have successfully gained admission to UIUC can offer you a wealth of insights. Look for these sample essays online or through educational forums. Notice how they structure their arguments, the anecdotes they use, and how they align their personal stories with UIUC’s values. Remember, the goal is not to replicate their essays but to understand what makes a successful UIUC application essay and use those insights to enhance your own writing.

Brushing Up on Writing Skills

Last but not least, good writing skills are imperative. You don’t need to use complex vocabulary or overly intricate sentences. Often, a simple, clear, and articulate writing style is more effective and engaging. Utilize online resources to brush up on essay structure, grammar, and style. A well-written essay makes a strong impression and ensures that your ideas are conveyed clearly.

Remember, your supplemental essays are a chance to showcase your unique story. By reading and understanding these key resources, you’ll be well-prepared to write essays that are not only compelling but also a true reflection of who you are.

The Importance of Structure in Your 2023-2024 UIUC Supplemental Essays

When you’re writing your 2023-2024 UIUC supplemental essays, the structure isn’t just a formality; it’s the backbone of your narrative. A well-structured essay guides the reader through your thoughts and experiences, making your story both compelling and easy to follow. It’s like a roadmap that leads the admissions committee through the landscape of your ideas, ensuring they don’t get lost in the details. Here are three key points on how you can structure your UIUC supplemental essays to make a lasting impression:

1. Start with a Hook: Your opening sentence or paragraph is your first impression. Make it count! Start with a hook – something that grabs the reader’s attention immediately. It could be a vivid description, a thought-provoking question, or an intriguing statement. This hook should be closely tied to the theme of your essay. For instance, if you’re writing about a challenge you’ve overcome, you might start with a moment of tension or a pivotal moment of realization. Your goal is to make the reader eager to learn more about your story.

3. Develop a Clear Narrative: After your compelling start, it’s crucial to maintain a clear and logical flow. Organize your essay into a beginning, middle, and end. In the beginning, set the scene and introduce the main idea or challenge. The middle part should delve into the actions you took or the insights you gained. Be specific about your experiences and reflections. This part is the heart of your essay, where you reveal your character, values, and intellect. Finally, conclude with a strong ending that ties back to your opening and provides a sense of closure or a look into the future. This structure helps you present a coherent story that is easy to follow and leaves a memorable impression.

4. Reflect and Connect to UIUC: A vital component of your supplemental essays is reflection. Don’t just narrate events; reflect on what they mean to you and how they have shaped you. This reflection should connect back to your aspirations at UIUC. For each experience or idea you discuss, consider how it relates to your future goals, your chosen field of study, or the values and opportunities at UIUC. This connection demonstrates that you’re not just recounting past experiences, but you’re also thinking critically about how they have prepared you for your future at UIUC.

Remember, the structure of your essay is not just about organizing content; it’s about creating an engaging narrative that showcases your personality, intellect, and fit for UIUC. A well-structured essay makes your story shine and helps the admissions committee see the unique individual behind the words. So, as you draft your 2023-2024 UIUC supplemental essays, pay attention to the structure—it might just be the key to making your application stand out.

Revising and Proofreading Your 2023-2024 UIUC Supplemental Essays

After pouring your heart and soul into writing your 2023-2024 UIUC supplemental essays, the next crucial step is to revise and proofread them. This process polishes your essays, ensuring they shine brightly in the eyes of the admissions committee. Here are detailed steps on how you can effectively revise and proofread your essays:

1. Take a Break Before Revising: Once you’ve completed your first draft, step away from it for a while. This could be a few hours or even a day. Taking a break gives you the distance you need to review your essay with fresh eyes. When you come back, you’ll be more likely to catch errors or see where your arguments might not be as clear or compelling as you initially thought.

2. Read Aloud for Clarity and Flow: Reading your essay aloud is a surprisingly effective technique. It helps you catch awkward phrasing, run-on sentences, and grammatical errors that you might miss when reading silently. As you read, pay attention to the rhythm and flow of your sentences. Do they sound natural? Are your ideas clearly articulated? Is there a smooth transition between paragraphs? This step is crucial in ensuring that your essay reads well and your ideas are cohesively presented.

3. Seek Feedback for a Fresh Perspective: Sometimes, what makes perfect sense in your head doesn’t translate as clearly on paper. Getting feedback from teachers, mentors, or peers can provide invaluable insights. They can point out areas that need more clarity, parts where your personality shines through, or even simple spelling and grammatical errors. Remember to seek feedback from people who will be honest and constructive with their criticism.

4. Focus on Specific Elements in Each Revision Round: Tackle different elements of your essay in each round of revision. In one round, focus on the structure and flow. In the next, hone in on word choice and sentence construction. Then, look at how well you’ve answered the prompt and reflected your personal story. Breaking down the revision process makes it less overwhelming and ensures you cover all aspects thoroughly.

5. Final Proofreading: Your final step is a thorough proofreading session. Check for spelling mistakes, punctuation errors, and grammatical issues. Small errors can distract from the content of your essay and give an impression of carelessness. Tools like spell checkers are helpful, but they’re not infallible, so rely on your judgment, too.

Remember, your UIUC supplemental essays are more than just answers to prompts; they’re a reflection of you as a prospective student. By meticulously revising and proofreading, you ensure that you’re presenting the best version of your essays – and yourself – to the admissions committee. Take your time with this process; it’s as important as the initial writing itself. 

Why You Should Study at UIUC

As you’re crafting your 2023-2024 UIUC supplemental essays, it’s important to articulate why the University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign (UIUC) is the ideal place for your higher education journey. Here’s why UIUC stands out as a top choice:

Academic Excellence and Renowned Programs

UIUC is celebrated for its academic rigor and diverse range of programs. According to recent rankings, UIUC consistently appears among the top public universities in the United States. Its engineering programs, for instance, are renowned globally, often ranking in the top 10 in various disciplines. Whether you’re interested in engineering, business, the arts, or sciences, UIUC offers a wealth of programs that are not only highly rated but also taught by faculty members who are leaders in their fields. This combination of quality education and expert guidance positions you perfectly for both academic and professional success.

Innovative Research Opportunities

As a student at UIUC, you’ll have access to cutting-edge research opportunities. The university is known for its significant contributions to research, particularly in areas like engineering, technology, and the sciences. UIUC’s research facilities are among the best in the nation, offering you hands-on experience in your field of study. This environment fosters innovation and creativity, allowing you to work on projects that can have real-world applications and potentially contribute to significant advancements in your field.

Vibrant Campus Life and Community

Beyond academics, UIUC boasts a vibrant campus life. It’s home to a diverse community of students from all over the world, creating an inclusive and enriching environment. With hundreds of student organizations and clubs, you’ll have numerous opportunities to engage in activities that interest you, develop new skills, and build lasting friendships. The university’s commitment to student life ensures that your college experience will be as socially rewarding as it is academically fulfilling.

Strong Career Prospects

Graduates from UIUC are highly sought after. The university’s strong ties with industries and its robust career services provide ample networking opportunities, internships, and job placements. This means that studying at UIUC not only prepares you academically but also gives you a competitive edge in the job market. The university’s global alumni network is an invaluable resource as you embark on your professional journey.

Commitment to Innovation and Sustainability

UIUC is a leader in sustainability and innovation. If you are passionate about environmental issues and want to be part of a community that actively works towards sustainable solutions, UIUC is the place for you. The university’s numerous sustainability initiatives and projects allow you to be directly involved in creating a positive impact on the planet.

In your UIUC supplemental essays, reflecting on these aspects can help convey your enthusiasm and fit for the university. UIUC isn’t just an institution; it’s a community where education, innovation, and personal growth go hand in hand. As you write your essays, remember to express how these unique features align with your academic goals and personal values. UIUC offers more than just a degree; it offers an experience that shapes its students into future leaders and innovators.

UIUC Application Deadlines and Other Key Metrics

As you consider your journey with the 2023-2024 UIUC supplemental essays, it’s vital to understand the current landscape of the University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign (UIUC), including its acceptance rates, application deadlines, and student success metrics. This information not only informs your application strategy but also gives you insights into what your future at UIUC might look like.

UIUC’s Acceptance Rate

For the academic year 2023-2024, UIUC has an overall admit rate of 43.7%. However, this rate varies significantly across different colleges and programs within the university. For instance, the admit rate for the first-choice applicants stands at 34.7%. Some of the more competitive programs include the Grainger College of Engineering, with an acceptance rate of 22.3%, and the School of Information Sciences at 21.6%. Notably, Computer Science stands out with a notably lower acceptance rate of 7.5%, underscoring the competitive nature of this field.

Application Deadlines

For fall 2024 admission, the application process opens on September 1. If you’re aiming for early action, which is non-binding, your application must be submitted by 11:59 p.m. CT on November 1, with all required items received by November 7. The regular decision deadline is January 5, with required items due by January 11. Notifications for early action are announced by January 26, while regular decision applicants will hear back in early March. Remember, meeting the early action deadline could improve your chances for admission to the most selective programs, as well as consideration for honors programs and merit awards.

Graduation and Retention Rates

UIUC boasts a strong record of student success, with a freshmen retention rate of 94%, indicating that the vast majority of first-year students return for their second year. This rate is well above the national average, reflecting the supportive and engaging environment that UIUC offers its students. The 6-year graduation rate is 85%, which means the majority of students complete their degrees within a reasonable timeframe. However, it’s also important to note that about 14% of students do not complete their degree within eight years, highlighting the challenges that some students may face during their academic journey.

In crafting your 2023-2024 UIUC supplemental essays, understanding these aspects of UIUC can help you tailor your application effectively. Reflect on how the university’s competitive nature aligns with your academic ambitions, and consider how the institution’s strong support system could help you thrive academically and personally. Remember, your application is not just about meeting criteria; it’s about demonstrating your potential to contribute to and benefit from everything UIUC has to offer.

How Important are Supplemental Essays in the College Admissions Process?

Supplemental essays, particularly for your 2023-2024 UIUC application, are a critical element in the college admissions process. They are more than just a standard requirement; these essays are a vital tool that can significantly influence your chances of admission .

Firstly, supplemental essays provide a window into your personality, which your grades and test scores cannot fully convey. They allow you to share your unique story, experiences, and values, adding a personal dimension to your application. In a pool of applicants with similar academic credentials, these personal insights can make a considerable difference.

Furthermore, these essays are an opportunity to demonstrate your fit with the university’s culture and ethos. Colleges like UIUC are not just looking for academically excellent students; they seek individuals who will contribute positively to their campus community. Through your supplemental essays, you can highlight how your goals, values, and interests align with UIUC’s offerings, making a compelling case for your admission.

Additionally, supplemental essays enable you to highlight unique aspects of your identity and experiences that might not be evident in other parts of your application. Whether it’s a unique hobby, a challenging life event, or a significant achievement, these narratives add depth to your application and help you stand out.

Moreover, these essays are a testament to your writing skills, showcasing your ability to communicate effectively and express your ideas coherently. Good writing is essential for college success, and by submitting well-crafted essays, you demonstrate that you are ready for the academic challenges at a university like UIUC.

Lastly, a well-written supplemental essay can leave a lasting impression on the admissions committee. A memorable story, thoughtful reflection, or unique perspective can make your application stand out, significantly increasing your chances of admission.

Final Thoughts

As we wrap up our exploration of the 2023-2024 UIUC supplemental essays, it’s important to remember that these essays are more than just a requirement; they are a gateway to your future. The University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign is not just looking for students who meet the academic threshold; they are in search of individuals who bring something unique to their campus – that could be you.

Your journey through these essays is an opportunity to reflect, to dream, and most importantly, to share your true self with the admissions committee. Each word you choose, every anecdote you share, adds color to the picture you are painting of yourself. Remember, it’s not just about impressing the committee, but also about being honest and genuine in your storytelling.

As you put the final touches on your essays, take a moment to appreciate the hard work you’ve put into them. This process is not just about securing a place at UIUC but also about understanding yourself better as you stand on the threshold of a new and exciting phase of your life.

We hope this blog has equipped you with the tools and confidence to tackle the 2023-2024 UIUC supplemental essays with ease and creativity. Trust in your abilities, believe in your story, and let your essays be the bridge that connects you to the college of your dreams.

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Explain your interest in the major you selected and describe how you have recently explored or developed this interest inside and/or outside the classroom. you may also explain how this major relates to your future career goals. if you’re applying to the division of general studies, explain your academic interests and strengths or your future career goals. you may include any majors or areas of study you’re currently considering. (300-400 words).

Since this is the most extensive essay UIUC will be receiving from you, it is also the most important! This prompt asks you to write a “Why This Major” essay. Your main objectives here should be conveying your passion for a certain subject and explaining how that relates to your future goals. Also, focus on expressing your love for the school by touching on specific aspects of the school that you think will suit you well.

While you might be tempted to simply reference your extracurricular activities in this section, this is not enough . Admission officers can already see your activities, so mentioning them again without further elaboration would be redundant. Instead, you should hone in on something more personal, and then proceed to explain it in greater depth.

Although your essay should not just restate extracurriculars or relevant classes, it is okay to briefly mention them as long as they provide a transition into new, more meaningful information. This “something meaningful” can be anything from an entertaining moment during one of your activities/classes to a more serious discussion of how you arrived at that passion. Just make sure your response illuminates something unique about you.

Because this essay is the most complex for this school, we recommend tackling it in smaller chunks. You’ll find that focusing on the structure of these shorter essays often does wonders for the overall cohesion of the finished product.

Introduction (100 words or less)

In this section of the response, your primary goal is to indicate your prospective major, but in a manner that the school would find compelling. Some of the most effective ways to hook the reader are by using figurative language or an anecdote, but there are a plethora of other ways as well — just be creative! Also, make sure your introduction allows for enough elaboration in the body section.

Because the introduction is so crucial to the development of this essay, below are some examples of good and bad introductions with explanations.

Good examples :

• “Time to get to work. My classmates opened the textbook and saw gibberish, but I saw a colony of enchanting symbols beckoning me to dance with them. Smug and graceful, they taunted me with their movements, tantalizing me into an exotic tango. These symbols held the secrets of the universe. It was during this fateful study group that I pinpointed my undying love for math…” Why it’s good: While a little cheesy, this author has introduced their love of math with flair. They use the imagery of “enchanting symbols” within the context of a specific instance during their study group, likely intriguing the reader as to why this led to such passion. A capable writer would go on to explain this whimsical statement in the body of the essay.
• “The summer of skeletons was drawing to a close. On my last day at the clinic, they crept up on me, begging me to stay. I knew I had to return one day. They liked being analyzed by me — the touch, the care. These cadavers were always desperate for my attention, but it took me a full six weeks to realize that I was also desperate for theirs…” Why it’s good: While it could be a little creepy and somewhat obsessive, it certainly conveys the author’s passion for bone structures. This author still needs to specify their major (biology, anthropology, bioengineering, etc.), but otherwise, they have the foundation for a great essay. Moving forward, they have two options: focus on this sudden realization at the end of what is presumably a summer internship or talk a little more about the ongoing process. Either one is suitable.

Bad examples :

• “Ever since a young age, I was interested in math. It’s always been my favorite subject. That’s why I want to major in it when I get to college. UIUC has an amazing math program that I want to participate in with amazing faculty. I’ve always pursued difficult math classes, and I’ve even engaged in some extracurricular activities related to math. These activities had possibly the biggest impact on me out of any of my activities…” Why it’s bad: It’s easy to imagine an adcom reading this introduction and wanting to go back to sleep. The author hasn’t shown any personality, and they certainly haven’t set themselves up for anything more than a simple retelling of their most impactful extracurricular activities.
• “Growing up, I’ve always admired the true heroes of our society: doctors. That’s why I want to major in bioengineering. I want to be a hero just like them. At UIUC, the main track for pre-med students is bioengineering, which is also a topic that really interests me. I’ve done a lot of extracurriculars pertaining to the medical field, and I’ve even had some hands-on experience through clinical internships. Bioengineering at UIUC is definitely right for me…” Why it’s bad: This “bad example” is certainly better than the first one, but it still has a lot of room for improvement. Using the theme of doctors as heroes isn’t necessarily bad, but it isn’t implemented well here. Instead, the author should’ve discussed a specific time (perhaps during their clinical internship) that they saw a doctor do something brave, and how that inspired them to become a doctor. This introduction really goes downhill when they abruptly move on to general statements about their interests and past experiences. Also, statements like “Bioengineering at UIUC is definitely right for me” should be avoided at all cost. Remember to show, rather than tell.

Body (250 Words or Less)

Your goal with the body of this essay is to further elaborate on your involvement with your respective major. It is okay to mention extracurriculars and classes in this section, but only if you couple them with explanations of how they impacted you. Consider implementing some additional discussion of your future career plans if you haven’t already done so in the introduction.

The body of your essay doesn’t have to be quite as flashy as the introduction, but it needs to be more purposeful. You might spend less time here on an extended metaphor, and instead opt to explain why your experience in a particular subject area inspired you to pursue it further.

No length is specified in the conclusion, because it varies depending on how many words you have already used, and to what extent your intro/body necessitates closure.

If you have a lot of space left, you might mention specific programs or clubs that fit with your major. You could also go into greater depth here regarding your long-term career goals. If you find a program at UIUC that incorporates your career aspirations — take, for example, a school-funded internship program — this is a great place to discuss it.

Otherwise, the conclusion should simply wrap up the main idea of your essay with a general discussion of your interests that you already set forth. Avoid being too repetitive; it’s better to keep your summary brief and to the point. If you began the essay with thematic material, it should resurface in the conclusion. The last sentence of the essay should be powerful enough to leave a lasting impression on the reader. This will ensure that adcoms remember your essay.

If you select a second-choice major other than the Division of General Studies on your application, write a second essay explaining your interest in this major, too. (300-400 words)

This prompt is similar to the previous one, so you should approach it in largely the same manner. It might be tempting to focus less on this essay, but you shouldn’t neglect it just because it’s your second-choice major. Admission officers will be able to tell if you’ve gotten lazy.

Other than that, make sure you keep our suggestions from the previous section in mind. Remember to provide adequate insight into any examples you provide, and focus on being succinct, so you can add in as much content as possible.

Some Final Words

It’s already been mentioned, but it’s important enough to mention again: These are the only essays UIUC will see. That means you have a huge responsibility to be personable and unique while also demonstrating competent writing style and academic focus.

While we at CollegeVine sometimes encourage riskier supplemental essays, you should avoid that for UIUC. This is because you aren’t coupling these with your Common App essay, which tends to be more grounded and central to your identity.

Most importantly, make sure your essays are truly a reflection of you . Don’t try to use overly elevated language if that isn’t how you normally write. If you’re unsure whether your voice is coming across, ask a family member or friend to read over your essays; they often have invaluable advice.

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• Jun 14, 2023

goat12 said: UICOM website says they require 3 LORs (and gives specific combinations that we can use). However, on MSAR it states minimum of 3 and maximum of 10. Does anyone know which one is accurate? I was thinking of submitting between 4-6. Click to expand...

• Jul 7, 2023

Does anyone have the secondary yet?  

Wavin' Howdy 🤠

Nope  

• Jul 10, 2023

oos secondary received!  

Secondary questions: 1. What characteristics, qualities, or attributes do you possess that have helped you to deal with conflict and change? 2. Which characteristics, qualities, or attributes of UICOM attracted you to apply for medical school here? 3. An important part of UICOM’s identity is the concept of “one college, three campuses.” The curriculum is identical on each campus; however, each campus has unique characteristics. Please describe what you have learned about at least two of our three campuses. 4. What are some of the causes and consequences of prejudice and injustice? What does an individual’s response to prejudice and injustice reveal about their character? What is the role of a bystander who witnesses prejudice or injustice? 5. UICOM values a wide range of perspectives. Describe an aspect of your own perspective, value system, or lived experience that is important to you and how it would contribute to the diverse and collaborative community at UICOM. 6. Have you applied for admission to medical school previously? Yes/No If you are reapplying this year please describe what you have done during the past year. 7. Have you ever matriculated into and not completed a professional/graduate program? Yes/No Please describe the circumstances of why you did not complete the program of study.  

+1 IS  

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+1 OOS  

deleted1148226

Damn they really changed all of their prompts  

orbitgum231

Does anyone know if there is a word or character limit for these prompts?  

SultanateIV

AnxiousCapybara said: Damn they really changed all of their prompts Click to expand...

lifetimeBenefit53589

Do any of these prompts have a word or character limit?  

it doesnt look like there is any word/character limit... unless I'm missing something  

Gotjokes_345

They really changed the whole thing L-O-L  

lifetimeBenefit53589 said: Do any of these prompts have a word or character limit? Click to expand...

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secondary received, OOS, verified 6/27  

Secondary received, OOS  

absdot4 said: There does not appear to be when I put my answers in. I am just aiming for around 300-500 words cause I believe that's what it was last year Click to expand...

chilly_md said: If others who received this secondary can confirm the changes and which questions are being asked, we will pin the prompts at the top. Click to expand...

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srs.md said: Secondary questions: 1. What characteristics, qualities, or attributes do you possess that have helped you to deal with conflict and change? 2. Which characteristics, qualities, or attributes of UICOM attracted you to apply for medical school here? 3. An important part of UICOM’s identity is the concept of “one college, three campuses.” The curriculum is identical on each campus; however, each campus has unique characteristics. Please describe what you have learned about at least two of our three campuses. 4. What are some of the causes and consequences of prejudice and injustice? What does an individual’s response to prejudice and injustice reveal about their character? What is the role of a bystander who witnesses prejudice or injustice? 5. UICOM values a wide range of perspectives. Describe an aspect of your own perspective, value system, or lived experience that is important to you and how it would contribute to the diverse and collaborative community at UICOM. 6. Have you applied for admission to medical school previously? Yes/No If you are reapplying this year please describe what you have done during the past year. 7. Have you ever matriculated into and not completed a professional/graduate program? Yes/No Please describe the circumstances of why you did not complete the program of study. Click to expand...

Is the text for #1 smaller than the rest? Also, do you guys have a check next to International Documentation in the status section?  

Thanks @srs.md for providing the prompts and @albb28 and @moonshapedpooll for confirming.  

Is anyone else having trouble accessing the education portion of the chicago campus on the website?  

• Jul 11, 2023

Hi everyone, does anyone know how we should approach this question on the secondary, are we just supposed to state facts about the campuses? Oror maybe integrate our experiences in there somewhere (not sure how though)? --- An important part of UICOM’s identity is the concept of “one college, three campuses.” The curriculum is identical on each campus; however, each campus has unique characteristics. Please describe what you have learned about at least two of our three campuses.---  

Gotjokes_345 said: Hi everyone, does anyone know how we should approach this question on the secondary, are we just supposed to state facts about the campuses? Oror maybe integrate our experiences in there somewhere (not sure how though)? --- An important part of UICOM’s identity is the concept of “one college, three campuses.” The curriculum is identical on each campus; however, each campus has unique characteristics. Please describe what you have learned about at least two of our three campuses.--- Click to expand...

can anyone else not find the option to apply to scholarly concentration in the supplemental application?  

• Jul 12, 2023

Did you guys have an option for selecting a Rural Medicine Program? There was nothing on my secondary application that asked that, or any scholarly concentrations for that matter.  

albb28 said: Did you guys have an option for selecting a Rural Medicine Program? There was nothing on my secondary application that asked that, or any scholarly concentrations for that matter. Click to expand...

moonshapedpooll said: i noticed this too. they also have an Urban Med program I was gonna apply to, but don't see anything about concentrations on the portal/in the essays Click to expand...

Dr. Doofenshmirtz

I have no word or character limit available. Has anyone emailed them to find out any specifics?  

FriendlyStranger

• Jul 16, 2023

What is the deal with the word limits? Does it look bad to submit a full fledge essay for each of these questions?  

• Jul 17, 2023

anyone know how long they take to mark "international documentation" as received?  

km1119 said: Does UICOM tend to offer scholarships/financial aid? The OOS tuition is super high. Click to expand...

FriendlyStranger said: What is the deal with the word limits? Does it look bad to submit a full fledge essay for each of these questions? Click to expand...

• Jul 18, 2023

j_diggity said: IS secondary received today, 7/18, at noon! Was AMCAS verified Friday, 7/14. Hooray for one of my top choice schools! Now if only they hadn't completely changed all their prompts, I would be ready to submit today... Click to expand...

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• Jul 21, 2023

Gotjokes_345 said: Wondering the same thing. Even in instances where we might write a full essay for some prompts and end up with smaller ones for some of the other prompts, idk :/ Click to expand...

For the second question, can I focus on one campus or more in general for all three campuses? Because there are particular programs I like in one campus  

anyone know how to apply for the scholarly concentrations? I already submitted and completed my application, but there was no option / mention of scholarly conc  

medicallyfragile

goat12 said: anyone know how to apply for the scholarly concentrations? I already submitted and completed my application, but there was no option / mention of scholarly conc Click to expand...

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• Jul 24, 2023

goat12 said: anyone know how long they take to mark "international documentation" as received? Click to expand...

zzzhaozhuye said: I'm having the same question - how long did it take them to mark yours? Click to expand...

medicallyfragile said: I believe that you apply after acceptance? I might be wrong though Click to expand...

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goat1080 said: Incoming M1 here. Yes, this is correct. They changed how it worked last year so there was some confusion on when to apply, but it's definitely post-acceptance. Basically, at some point (sorry, I don't remember exactly when), the prompts for the concentrations will appear in the AMP portal, and then you can fill them out. Just for reference, I was accepted into IMED, and I submitted my application at the end of March, received my (2) interviews in mid-April, and was accepted near the end of April. And I think they said you can apply to multiple concentrations, but can only be in 1 if you are accepted into multiple. One other thing to note is that your campus assignment will affect your ability to do a certain concentration. As in, if you apply to a concentration and get assigned to a campus where that concentration isn't offered, then you won't be able to do it, which is why they have it as post-acceptance I think. They also had a couple of Zoom sessions about scholarly concentrations in November last cycle, but I didn't attend so I'm not sure what they covered or anything. And if anyone has any questions you think I can answer let me know, and I'll try to help if I can. Good luck everyone! Click to expand...

icedamericanopls said: do you have any suggestions for answering what we learned about each campus at UI COM? especially with the previous question asking about why UI COM, it is a bit difficult to navigate this question so that it does not sound repetitive Click to expand...

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BYU’s football team wrapped up preseason training camp on Tuesday, took Wednesday off, then turned its attention to Southern Illinois on Thursday.

The Cougars will host the Salukis of the Football Championship Subdivision on Aug. 31 at 6 p.m. MDT, and suffice it to say the pressure to win — regardless of the division of the opponent — is as high as it has ever been for BYU in the Kalani Sitake era.

A five-game losing streak will do that to a program. And as daunting as BYU’s 2024 schedule is, a loss could continue a run of futility that hasn’t been seen in Provo since 2017 — Sitake’s second season.

“Really good team,” Sitake said of Southern Illinois, which is based in Carbondale, Illinois, and competes in the Ohio Valley Conference, widely considered the top conference in FCS football.

“I know some of the coaches on that staff,” Sitake said. “They are a well-coached team. They have had success playing against FBS teams, and so we need to make sure that we are ready for it, and part of that is making sure that we are prepped and have a plan going into it.”

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Sitake said the Cougars are “sick of playing against each other” and eager to get the season started, after last year ended the way it did — with BYU out of a bowl game for the first season since 2017.

A year ago, BYU signaled rough days ahead when it could only beat Sam Houston 14-0 in the 2023 opener at LaVell Edwards Stadium. The Bearkats were technically an FBS team, having made the jump from the FCS ranks that season.

On paper, the Salukis pose a bigger threat to BYU’s all-time record of 18-0 against FCS foes. Picked fourth in the 10-team OVC, SIU is 3-5 against FBS teams in coach Nick Hill’s tenure.

The Salukis beat Northwestern 31-24 in Evanston, Illinois, in 2022 and beat Northern Illinois 14-11 last year in DeKalb, Illinois.

Also last year, Southern Illinois went 8-5 and lost to Idaho in the second round of the FCS playoffs.

Linebacker Colin Bohanek, offensive lineman Chase Evans, defensive back Ubayd Steed and receiver Vinson Davis III are preseason all-league picks. Although Hill was an NFL quarterback, SIU’s calling card is defense. The Salukis ranked No. 4 in the FCS in defense last year, but is retooling a bit on that side of the ball, having lost four of its top five tacklers.

BYU offensive coordinator Aaron Roderick said BYU’s offense got a look at SIU’s defensive schemes (simulated by a scout team) in a 10-minute practice period Monday.

BYU is paying $425,000 for the game, according to multiple reports from SIU-based websites when the game was announced in 2022. Southern Illinois was originally going to get $500K from Kansas for the 2024 Week 1 game, but the Jayhawks bought it out and will play Lindenwood on Thursday night at Children’s Mercy Park in Kansas City because Booth Stadium is being renovated this season.

As far as BYU’s readiness level is concerned, coaches and players haven’t spoken publicly to media members since last Monday, when the starting quarterback battle was the big topic of the day.

Roderick said that day that “a combination of things” would determine whether he picks Retzlaff or Bohanon.

“It is someone who moves the team and scores touchdowns, and I was hopeful that that would be more clear than it is by now,” Roderick said. “I think it has been a matter of both of them playing well, not that either one of them has seized the day, or seized the job. So we will keep working our way through it a little bit longer.”

BYU is expected to release its depth chart for the opener on Monday, right about the time Sitake conducts his weekly press briefing with reporters via Zoom.

Other offensive position battles to keep an eye on are right guard — Sonny Makasini or Austin Leausa — and at tight end, where former receiver Keanu Hill is the presumed starter but is facing competition from Ethan Erickson, Mata’ava Ta’ase and freshman sensation Ryner Swanson , among others.

Defensively, the most hotly contested starting spots are outside end — Isaiah Bagnah or Logan Lutui — and safety, where there are a half-dozen candidates for the two starting spots.

“This is a really close team,” Roderick said, when asked if any of the position battles, including quarterback, are threatening to divide the team. “We haven’t won a game yet, but I feel like we have a close-knit group here, definitely more so than we had a year ago.”