Paragraph on My Visit to a Shopping Mall – By Anand
Introduction:
A visit to a shopping mall is always exciting for someone who has resided in a rural area all his life.
I was always excited about tall buildings, shopping malls and big restaurants. I happen to have a chance to visit my aunt, who stays in the city.
I had already told her beforehand that the moment I reach, she would take me to a shopping mall to which she had readily agreed.
The shopping mall we went to was not far from her residence and was one of the biggest malls in the city. I was left with my jaw hanging when I looked at the enormity of the structure. It spanned the length equivalent to ten houses in my district. As we were nearing the entry, I felt a gush of cold air coming from inside. Not being very used to air-conditioning, it was a new experience for me. My aunt told me that she would buy new clothes and a bag for me. There was a huge crowd inside the mall and loud music played. At one particular corner, there was a music event in progress.
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We entered one of the stores inside the mall and I was astounded to find so many varieties of clothes at the same place. It looked so colourful from a distance. We went from one rack to another looking through t-shirts and jeans. My aunt bought me a pair of jeans and t-shirts. I had never seen the usage of an ATM card before.
Everything was a new experience for me and I was elated the entire time. We then visited a shoe store because even my aunt had to buy new shoes for herself. She couldn’t find her preference in that store. We then visited almost ten different stores. After getting the shoes we went to have lunch.
Lunch at Shopping Mall:
The eateries at the mall were all big and enticing. Food items ranging from burgers, sandwiches, pizzas to Indian, Chinese, continental, etc. were available. My aunt took me to a Chinese eatery where she ordered haka noodles and ginger chicken. It tasted delicious, better than any other fast food I had before. We then had ice-cream for dessert.
Conclusion:
The visit to the shopping mall was a new and exciting experience for me. I saw many new things which I don’t usually get to see at my place. I was brimming with joy holding my new clothes and wearing new shoes. I expressed my desire of visiting the mall again to my aunt to which she smiled and agreed.
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IELTS Essay: Young People and Shopping Malls
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Today, many young people spend too much of their free time at shopping malls. This can be considered negative for young people and society generally.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In certain countries, it has becoming increasingly common for young people to spend their free time at malls and this is often viewed as a negative. In my opinion, though there are more productive activities, it should be considered a positive overall given the most likely alternatives.
Proponents of this statement point out that malls are typically not a productive use of one’s time. A person who goes to a mall is likely shopping, watching a movie, hanging out idly with friends, eating from a fast food establishment, or engaging in another similarly passive activity. A better use of time could involve playing sports, reading a book, creating art, or working. The rise of malls globally beginning in the 1980s signaled a period when younger individuals strayed from healthy activities and took part in more socially and personally subversive pastimes.
However, the fears detailed above are overblown compared to other free time activities. These days, most young people who are free spend an outsized proportion of their time doing truly unhealthy, passive activities. These largely center around technology and include wasting time on social media, taking pictures, playing online games, chatting online, streaming movies and videos, and using the internet. The mall is now actually a better use of one’s time since it likely will involve in-person socializing, precisely the domain that is most at risk for younger generations and society today.
In conclusion, though time spent at malls is not the ideal activity for a younger person, it is preferable to a more passive lifestyle and should therefore not be condemned. It is likely, however, that malls will continue to decline in popularity in the future so this concern will become less relevant.
1. In certain countries, it has becoming increasingly common for young people to spend their free time at malls and this is often viewed as a negative. 2. In my opinion, though there are more productive activities, it should be considered a positive overall given the most likely alternatives.
- Paraphrase the overall essay topic.
- Write a clear opinion. Read more about introductions here .
1. Proponents of this statement point out that malls are typically not a productive use of one’s time. 2. A person who goes to a mall is likely shopping, watching a movie, hanging out idly with friends, eating from a fast food establishment, or engaging in another similarly passive activity. 3. A better use of time could involve playing sports, reading a book, creating art, or working. 4. The rise of malls globally beginning in the 1980s signaled a period when younger individuals strayed from healthy activities and took part in more socially and personally subversive pastimes.
- Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
- Explain your main idea.
- Develop it with specific or hypothetical examples.
- Keep developing it fully.
1. However, the fears detailed above are overblown compared to other free time activities. 2. These days, most young people who are free spend an outsized proportion of their time doing truly unhealthy, passive activities. 3. These largely center around technology and include wasting time on social media, taking pictures, playing online games, chatting online, streaming movies and videos, and using the internet. 4. The mall is now actually a better use of one’s time since it likely will involve in-person socializing, precisely the domain that is most at risk for younger generations and society today.
- Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
- Explain your new main idea.
- Include specific details and examples.
- Add as much information as you can and make sure it links logically.
1. In conclusion, though time spent at malls is not the ideal activity for a younger person, it is preferable to a more passive lifestyle and should therefore not be condemned. 2. It is likely, however, that malls will continue to decline in popularity in the future so this concern will become less relevant.
- Summarise your main ideas.
- Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here .
What do the words in bold below mean? Make some notes on paper to aid memory and then check below.
In certain countries , it has becoming increasingly common for young people to spend their free time at malls and this is often viewed as a negative . In my opinion, though there are more productive activities , it should be considered a positive overall given the most likely alternatives .
Proponents of this statement point out that malls are typically not a productive use of one’s time. A person who goes to a mall is likely shopping , watching a movie, hanging out idly with friends , eating from a fast food establishment , or engaging in another similarly passive activity . A better use of time could involve playing sports, reading a book, creating art, or working. The rise of malls globally beginning in the 1980s signaled a period when younger individuals strayed from healthy activities and took part in more socially and personally subversive pastimes .
However, the fears detailed above are overblown compared to other free time activities. These days, most young people who are free spend an outsized proportion of their time doing truly unhealthy, passive activities. These largely center around technology and include wasting time on social media , taking pictures, playing online games, chatting online, streaming movies and videos, and using the internet. The mall is now actually a better use of one’s time since it likely will involve in-person socializing , precisely the domain that is most at risk for younger generations and society today.
In conclusion, though time spent at malls is not the ideal activity for a younger person, it is preferable to a more passive lifestyle and should therefore not be condemned . It is likely, however, that malls will continue to decline in popularity in the future so this concern will become less relevant .
For extra practice, write an antonym (opposite word) on a piece of paper to help you remember the new vocabulary:
certain countries some nations
increasingly common happens more and more
malls shopping centers
often viewed as a negative usually considered bad
productive activities useful uses of your time
considered thought of
positive overall good in general
given the most likely alternatives considering what will probably happen instead
proponents supporters
statement point out statement argue
typically usually
productive use good use
shopping buying things
hanging out idly with friends just spending time with friends
fast food establishment fast food restaurants
engaging in doing
similarly passive activity not very active pastime
involve have to do with
rise increase
globally all over the world
signaled was a mark of
period time
strayed gone off the path to
took part in participated in
socially with others
personally relating to individuals
subversive pastimes undermining uses of time
fears detailed above threats explained before
overblown compared to emphasized too much relative to
outsized proportion too much emphasis
truly really
passive not active
largely center around mostly has to do with
wasting time not good use of free time
social media Facebook, Instagram, TikTok, etc.
streaming movies watching shows online, Netflix
actually in fact
likely probably
involve in-person socializing will be hanging around with friends
precisely exactly
domain area
most at risk concerning area
younger generations not old people, youths
ideal perfect
preferable better
lifestyle how people live
condemned criticized
decline decrease
popularity how common it is
concern worry
less relevant not an issue any more
Pronunciation
Practice saying the vocabulary below and use this tip about Google voice search :
ˈsɜːtn ˈkʌntriz ɪnˈkriːsɪŋli ˈkɒmən mɔːlz ˈɒf(ə)n vjuːd æz ə ˈnɛgətɪv prəˈdʌktɪv ækˈtɪvɪtiz kənˈsɪdəd ˈpɒzətɪv ˈəʊvərɔːl ˈgɪvn ðə məʊst ˈlaɪkli ɔːlˈtɜːnətɪvz prəˈpəʊnənts ˈsteɪtmənt pɔɪnt aʊt ˈtɪpɪk(ə)li prəˈdʌktɪv juːz ˈʃɒpɪŋ ˈhæŋɪŋ aʊt ˈaɪdli wɪð frɛndz fɑːst fuːd ɪsˈtæblɪʃmənt ɪnˈgeɪʤɪŋ ɪn ˈsɪmɪləli ˈpæsɪv ækˈtɪvɪti ɪnˈvɒlv raɪz ˈgləʊbəli ˈsɪgnld ˈpɪərɪəd streɪd tʊk pɑːt ɪn ˈsəʊʃəli ˈpɜːsnəli səbˈvɜːsɪv ˈpɑːstaɪmz fɪəz ˈdiːteɪld əˈbʌv ˌəʊvəˈbləʊn kəmˈpeəd tuː ˈaʊtsaɪzd prəˈpɔːʃən ˈtruːli ˈpæsɪv ˈlɑːʤli ˈsɛntər əˈraʊnd ˈweɪstɪŋ taɪm ˈsəʊʃəl ˈmiːdiə ˈstriːmɪŋ ˈmuːviz ˈækʧʊəli ˈlaɪkli ɪnˈvɒlv ɪn-ˈpɜːsn ˈsəʊʃəlaɪzɪŋ prɪˈsaɪsli dəʊˈmeɪn məʊst æt rɪsk ˈjʌŋə ˌʤɛnəˈreɪʃənz aɪˈdɪəl ˈprɛfərəbl ˈlaɪfˌstaɪl kənˈdɛmd dɪˈklaɪn ˌpɒpjʊˈlærɪti kənˈsɜːn lɛs ˈrɛlɪvənt
Vocabulary Practice
I recommend getting a pencil and piece of paper because that aids memory. Then write down the missing vocabulary from my sample answer in your notebook:
In c_ _________________ s , it has becoming i___________________n for young people to spend their free time at m____s and this is o________________________e . In my opinion, though there are more p______________________s , it should be c_____________d a p_________________l g_____________________________s .
P___________-s of this s____________t p___________t that malls are t__________y not a p_____________e of one’s time. A person who goes to a mall is likely s___________g , watching a movie, h___________________________s , eating from a f____________________________t , or e____________n another s___________________________y . A better use of time could i_________e playing sports, reading a book, creating art, or working. The r____e of malls g_______y beginning in the 1980s s__________d a p________d when younger individuals s___________d from healthy activities and t_______________n more s_________y and p______________________________s .
However, the f_________________e are o______________n c________d to other free time activities. These days, most young people who are free spend an o__________________n of their time doing t_____y unhealthy, p____e activities. These l________________________d technology and include w____________e on s__________a , taking pictures, playing online games, chatting online, s_______________s and videos, and using the internet. The mall is now a___________y a better use of one’s time since it l_______y will i_________e i____________________g , p___________y the d_________n that is m____________k for y___________________s and society today.
In conclusion, though time spent at malls is not the i_______l activity for a younger person, it is p_________e to a more passive l________e and should therefore not be c__________d . It is likely, however, that malls will continue to d_______e in p____________y in the future so this c_______n will become l_______________t .
Listening Practice
Learn more about this topic by watching videos from The New York Times YouTube channel below and practice with these activities :
Reading Practice
Read more about this topic and use these ideas to practice :
15 Most Amazing Shopping Malls In The World
Speaking Practice
Practice with the following speaking questions from the real IELTS speaking exam :
- What do you usually shop for?
- Do you often go to malls?
- Do you shop online a lot?
- How common are shopping centers in your country?
Writing Practice
Practice with the related IELTS essay topic below:
Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activities in many countries for young adults.
Why is this?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
IELTS Essay: Malls and Leisure Time
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Today, many young people spend too much of their free time at shopping malls. This can BE considered negative for young people and society generally.
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In paragraph 1: Is “It has becoming” grammaly correct? If correct, what’s the difference between “It has become” & “It has becoming” ? Is “becoming” used to express that the trend are continuing ?
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Essay on Shopping Mall
Students are often asked to write an essay on Shopping Mall in their schools and colleges. And if you’re also looking for the same, we have created 100-word, 250-word, and 500-word essays on the topic.
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100 Words Essay on Shopping Mall
What is a shopping mall.
A shopping mall is a large building with many stores. These stores sell different things like clothes, shoes, toys, books, and food. People go to malls to shop, eat, and have fun. Malls are usually very busy, especially on weekends.
Layout of a Shopping Mall
A shopping mall has many levels. Each level has many stores. There’s also a food court where you can eat. Some malls have movie theaters, play areas for kids, and even skating rinks. Malls are designed to make shopping easy and enjoyable.
Benefits of Shopping Malls
Shopping malls are convenient. You can find many different things in one place. Malls also have sales and discounts which help people save money. They are also a great place to meet friends and spend time together.
Challenges with Shopping Malls
While malls are fun, they can also be crowded. Finding parking can be hard. Sometimes, malls can be expensive too. It’s important to be careful with money when shopping at a mall.
250 Words Essay on Shopping Mall
A shopping mall is a big building that has many different stores. It is like a big market under one roof. You can find a variety of goods and services in a shopping mall. From clothes, shoes, and toys to food, electronics, and books, you can find almost everything.
Features of a Shopping Mall
Most shopping malls have a wide range of facilities. They have parking lots for cars and bikes. Inside, they have elevators and escalators for easy movement. Some malls also have movie theaters, play zones for kids, and food courts with different types of food.
Advantages of Shopping Malls
Shopping malls are very convenient. You can buy many things in one place. They save time and energy. They are also a great place to hang out with friends or family. They offer comfort and fun, along with shopping.
Disadvantages of Shopping Malls
Despite the benefits, shopping malls also have some downsides. They can be very crowded, especially on weekends. Prices can also be higher compared to local markets. Lastly, they can lead to impulse buying, which means buying things you don’t really need.
To sum up, shopping malls are a modern way to shop. They offer a wide range of goods and services under one roof. They have some advantages like convenience and variety, but also some disadvantages like higher prices and crowds. Still, they are a popular choice for shopping and entertainment.
500 Words Essay on Shopping Mall
Introduction to shopping malls.
Shopping malls are large buildings filled with many different stores. These stores sell a variety of items, like clothes, shoes, toys, electronics, and food. Shopping malls are a popular place for people to shop because they offer a wide range of products under one roof.
Structure of Shopping Malls
Shopping malls are usually multi-storied buildings. Each floor has a number of shops or stores. There are also escalators or elevators to help people move from one floor to another. Most malls have a food court, where there are many different types of food stalls. Some shopping malls even have movie theaters, play zones for kids, and other entertainment facilities.
Shopping malls offer many benefits. First, they save time. Instead of going to different places to buy different things, you can find everything you need in one place. This makes shopping easier and more convenient. Second, shopping malls offer a wide variety of products. You can compare prices and quality before making a purchase. Lastly, shopping malls are a great place to socialize. You can meet friends, have a meal together, or just spend time browsing the stores.
Challenges of Shopping Malls
Despite the benefits, there are also challenges with shopping malls. One of the main challenges is that they can be very crowded, especially on weekends and holidays. This can make shopping stressful and tiring. Another challenge is that items in shopping malls can be more expensive than in local markets or online stores. This is because the shops in the malls need to pay for their rent and other expenses.
Impact of Shopping Malls on Society
Shopping malls have a big impact on society. They have changed the way people shop and spend their leisure time. Many people prefer to go to shopping malls because they offer a comfortable and convenient shopping environment. They also create jobs for many people, from shopkeepers to security guards. On the other hand, shopping malls can also lead to increased consumerism. People may buy things they don’t really need just because they are available and easy to buy.
In conclusion, shopping malls are an important part of modern life. They offer a convenient place to shop, eat, and have fun. Despite the challenges, they continue to be popular with people of all ages. It is important to be mindful of our spending habits in malls and make wise choices. Shopping malls are more than just places to shop – they are also places where we can spend time with friends and family, and enjoy our leisure time.
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The experience in a shopping mall can be exciting and overwhelming, with various stores and products to choose from. The atmosphere is often bustling, and shoppers can enjoy browsing through different items or making quick purchases. Mall-goers can also find entertainment options such as movie theaters, arcades, and food courts. However, the crowds can sometimes make it challenging to navigate or find parking. Overall, a shopping mall is a convenient one-stop shopping destination for many people.
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