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• A thesis is a simple sentence that combines your topic and your position on the topic.
• A thesis provides a roadmap to what follows in the paper.
• A thesis is like a wheel's hub--everything revolves around it and is attached to it.

After your prewriting activities-- such as assignment analysis and outlining--you should be ready to take the next step: writing a thesis statement. Although some of your assignments will provide a focus for you, it is still important for your college career and especially for your professional career to be able to state a satisfactory controlling idea or thesis that unifies your thoughts and materials for the reader.

Characteristics of an Effective Thesis

A thesis consists of two main parts: your overall topic and your position on that topic. Here are some example thesis statements that combine topic and position:

Sample Thesis Statements

Importance of tone.

Tone is established in the wording of your thesis, which should match the characteristics of your audience. For example, if you are a concerned citizen proposing a new law to your city's board of supervisors about drunk driving, you would not want to write this:

“It’s time to get the filthy drunks off the street and from behind the wheel: I demand that you pass a mandatory five-year license suspension for every drunk who gets caught driving. Do unto them before they do unto us!”

However, if you’re speaking at a concerned citizen’s meeting and you’re trying to rally voter support, such emotional language could help motivate your audience.

Using Your Thesis to Map Your Paper for the Reader

In academic writing, the thesis statement is often used to signal the paper's overall structure to the reader. An effective thesis allows the reader to predict what will be encountered in the support paragraphs. Here are some examples:

Use the Thesis to Map

Three potential problems to avoid.

Because your thesis is the hub of your essay, it has to be strong and effective. Here are three common pitfalls to avoid:

1. Don’t confuse an announcement with a thesis.

In an announcement, the writer declares personal intentions about the paper instead stating a thesis with clear point of view or position:

Write a Thesis, Not an Announcement

 2. a statement of fact does not provide a point of view and is not a thesis..

An introduction needs a strong, clear position statement. Without one, it will be hard for you to develop your paper with relevant arguments and evidence.

Don't Confuse a Fact with a Thesis

3. avoid overly broad thesis statements.

Broad statements contain vague, general terms that do not provide a clear focus for the essay.

Use the Thesis to Provide Focus

Practice writing an effective thesis.

OK. Time to write a thesis for your paper. What is your topic? What is your position on that topic? State both clearly in a thesis sentence that helps to map your response for the reader.

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Thesis statements, formulating a working thesis.

• Define: Explain a complex term’s meaning. Select words with disputed definitions or words that lend themselves to extended, thoughtful definition, such as “life” or “intelligence.”
• Classify: Explain a topic by categorizing it with like items. Athletes can be placed in the same category as dancers because of their training; plagiarism can be categorized as fraud.
• Compare/Contrast: Illustrate the similarities or differences between set topics, or introduce an outside idea to illuminate a difficult concept. Metaphors can be a powerful method for exploring or explaining. The circulatory system can be compared to geographical structure: it is like rivers but unlike lakes.
• Cause: Consider the cause or root of something. Was a car accident simply driver error? Or was it caused by fatigue? What about our society causes so many people to fall asleep behind the wheel? Do we live in a culture where exhaustion is promoted? Why?
• Effect: Discuss the effects of something. If obesity leads to disease, what does this suggest about policy, laws, or education? How can we avoid bad effects and replicate good ones?
• Evaluate: Determine whether something is good or bad, desirable or undesirable, ethical or unethical, effective or ineffective, etc. Or is it is somewhere in-between?
• Propose: Suggest a necessary action to take, or a solution for a problem.

Types of Thesis Statements

Thesis placement, thesis checklist.

• Specific and precise. “Vouchers are important to schools” is too vague to be useful.
• Arguable. “The Civil War was a crucial event in U.S. history” is too obvious to make a solid thesis.
• The right “size” for the assignment. “The American civil war is the defining event in our country’s history” is arguable, but probably too big to cover in a two-page paper.
• Suited to the assignment. Read back over the assignment prompt to make sure your thesis (and paper as a whole) address the right issue.
• Supported by the content of your paper. Read back over your supporting paragraphs and make sure they demonstrate what your thesis is arguing. If the paper has veered in an unexpected direction during the course of your writing process, revise your thesis to fit your evidence. It may help to write a summary sentence for each key piece of support and then compare those to your thesis statement.

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Thesis Statements

A thesis statement is:.

• The statement of the author’s position on a topic or subject.
• Clear, concise, and goes beyond fact or observation to become an idea that needs to be supported (arguable).
• Often a statement of tension, where the author refutes or complicates an existing assumption or claim (counterargument).
• Often answers WHY or HOW questions related to the topic at hand.

A thesis statement is NOT:

• A statement of fact or observation (no matter how astute the observation).
• A statement of personal conviction or opinion.
• A generalization or overly broad claim.

For the writer, the thesis statement:

• Helps the writer determine the essay’s real focus. What are you trying to say with the evidence presented? A thesis provides a theory to be tested by evidence.
• Serves as a planning tool. The component parts of the thesis often correspond with the essay’s topic sentences.

For the reader, the thesis statement:

• Serves as a “map” to guide the reader through the paper. In the same way the thesis helps you organize your paper, the thesis helps organize the reader’s thinking. Once a solid thesis is presented, the reader will understand that all of the evidence presented is in service of proving the thesis.
• Creates a reason to keep reading. The reader will want to discover the support behind the thesis.

If you are having trouble writing a thesis...

...ask yourself a genuine, difficult question about the topic (usually a “how” or “why” question), and state your response, even if you are not sure why you want to give that answer. Your response may very well be a workable thesis, and the pursuit of proving that answer may reveal to you more about your sources of evidence.

...think of a strong statement or observation you have made about the subject beginning with the words “In this essay, I will...” Then ask yourself why this observation is important, or “So What?” 1 Answer the question with “I believe this is because...” In the draft stage you might phrase a working thesis as the following:

In this essay, I plan to explain how Mark Twain’s Adventures of Huckleberry Finn contrasts his river and shore scenes. I believe Twain is telling us that in order to find America’s true democratic ideals one must leave “civilized” society (the shore) and go back to nature (the river).

Then revise out the “I” statements. A revised version of this thesis might look like this:

Through its contrasting river and shore scenes, Mark Twain’s Adventure’s of Huckleberry Finn suggests that to find the true expression of American democratic ideals, one must leave “civilized” society and go back to nature.

Writing in the Disciplines

Keep in mind that thesis statements vary depending on the purpose of the assignment (or type of essay), and also by discipline. Here are a few notes on the thesis statements and the purpose of writing in a few different disciplines. 2

English: “A thesis is an interpretive argument about a text or an aspect of a text. An interpretive argument is defined as one that makes a reasonable but contestable claim about a text; in other words, it is an opinion about a text that can be supported with textual evidence."

Sciences (Biology): “A well-written scientific paper explains the scientist’s motivation for doing an experiment, the experimental design and execution, and the meaning of the results... The last sentences of the introduction should be a statement of objectives and a statement of hypotheses.”

Business: “When you write in business courses, you will usually write for a specific audience. Your goal will be to communicate in a straight-forward manner and with a clear purpose." 3

History: “In historical writing, a thesis explains the words or deeds of people in the past. It shows cause and effect; it answers the question why?... A thesis must change a reader’s mind to be of value. If it presents only facts or an obvious finding, it will merely confirm what the reader already believes.”

1. This strategy comes from Writing Analytically by Jill Stephen and David Rosenwasser.

2.  The following statements on writing in the disciplines have been borrowed from the Writing Guides found at the Writing Across the Curriculum website at http://wac.gmu.edu/guides/GMU%20guides.html .

3.  From A Writer’s Reference, 6th Edition, with Writing in the Disciplines, by Diana Hacker.

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No. Consultants will discuss your text with you at the time of your appointment.

If we did revise and edit your writing, you might end up with a more polished paper, but you wouldn't understand what we had done to improve it. You wouldn’t know *why* your writing was better, just that it was better. As a result, you would be unable to improve your writing by yourself. However, when we teach you to revise and edit, you not only learn how to make one particular paper better, but you learn how to improve every single paper you write! You improve not only the paper you bring to the Writing Center, but also your overall writing skills. Therefore, consultants will ask you questions to help you, for example, clarify your thesis, expand the analysis of your evidence, understand the requirements of your assignment, test the clarity of your definitions, and find and correct your own grammatical errors.

If you are interested in working as   a writing consultant   at the University Writing Center or Community Writing Center, please complete an online application . With your application, you will be asked to submit a cv/résumé and an academic, research-based writing sample.

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• TEAL Paragraph Development: An Approach to Developing Strong, Meaningful Body Paragraphs

by acburton | Apr 25, 2024 | Resources for Students , Writing Resources

Raise your hand if you have heard of the ‘5-paragraph essay’. Organizing a relatively short set of ideas with an introduction, three body paragraphs, and a conclusion may seem simple enough and effective for a multitude of assignments.  However, when making complex arguments, reviewing a deep topic, or writing a lengthy term paper, you may need more than 5 paragraphs. What then?!

That’s where the TEAL paragraph formula comes in. Using TEAL (Topic Sentence, Example, Analysis, and Link to Thesis), provides you with a structure that will   give you the best results to creating an organized and developed body paragraph. Here’s how to use it!

In this post, we overview how to use TEAL. Download a Word Doc with examples to see TEAL in action.

Begin with your Topic Sentence

A topic sentence should have a piece of your major argument or thesis included, and it should be clearly stated so that the reader can see a clear connection from your thesis to your body paragraph. 

Your Topic Sentence should…

• Reference your thesis statement.
• Provide one specific idea and focus for the body paragraph.
• Clearly show the reader what this paragraph will be about and how it connects to your thesis.

Give Your Reader an Example

Along with providing you a template to discuss complex or in-depth topics, using this structure for your body paragraphs will also allow you to be sure that you are appropriately incorporating evidence into your draft.

Before you begin writing your body paragraph, the example or supporting evidence should be one of the first parts of your essay that you begin thinking about (even before you start writing your paper!). Providing your reader with an example may be the second part of TEAL (aka the second part in building your body paragraph), but you’ll want to think beforehand about how your example will support your topic sentence. If your example doesn’t support your topic sentence, then your topic sentence can’t support your thesis. Examples make it easier for you and your reader to find connections; connections that will lead to insightful points for analysis (up next!).

Examples can be direct quotations, paraphrased text, personal examples, data/statistics, etc. and no matter the type of example, you’ll want to make sure that your evidence is relevant and, again, connects to your topic sentence. Make sure every example is introduced and contextualized and that every example coming from a source other than yourself has a citation in the proper format!

Making Connections With Analysis

Analysis is an integral part of developing your body paragraphs. This is the section of your paragraph where you should be clearly explaining how your examples support your thesis and topic sentences.  

Not sure where to begin? Look to your professor’s prompts and decide what they are asking you to address in the assignment.  When you are sure that you are answering your professor’s prompt, you can also be sure that you are directly explaining how your support is addressing the key requirements of the prompt and assignment.

Things to consider…

• How does this example help your reader understand the topic sentence?
• What specific parts of this example show your topic sentence?
• What is important about this example in connection to your topic sentence?
• Aim for about 3-4 sentences of analysis per example to assure in-depth discussion

REMEMBER! Analysis will always come DIRECTLY after its respective example. You will introduce an example, provide the example, and then provide an analysis. Then, you will repeat this process until you are done giving examples. At the end, you will link the readers back to the thesis (think: T, E1, A1, E2, A2, L.)

Link Back to Your Thesis

When writing the last sentence of your body paragraph ask yourself: what is the key takeaway that the reader should get from this body paragraph? Cogitate how this paragraph (its topic sentence, example, and analysis) trace back to your thesis. How do they work together to help your reader understand your central argument? How does the evidence presented in this paragraph argue your main point? All in all, contemplate the relationship between the body paragraph that you have carefully crafted and your thesis statement.

While each body paragraph will vary in length and have its own number of examples, each paragraph must, however, incorporate each topic in TEAL. So once you have learned how to link back to your thesis in one paragraph, it’ll give you the confidence you need to do the same with the rest of your body paragraphs. It’ll also provide you with the tools to reinforce the assurance you’ve gained toward the evidence you’ve chosen and the thesis you’ve crafted before moving forward.

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As mentioned earlier, following the TEAL paragraph formula will often give you the best results in creating an organized and developed paragraph; however, it is not the only way to create strong paragraphs.  Depending on the assignment and professor, you may need to vary this formula. Visit us at the Writing Center if you have any questions about how to incorporate the TEAL paragraph formula into your next paper or for additional clarification about how to organize your essay using TEAL to address the prompt!

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Moscow, Russia – Architectural Splendor at the Heart of Eurasia

Moscow, Russia – Most Populated Cities in the World

Moscow, the capital city of Russia, stands as an architectural testament to the country’s rich history and cultural legacy. This article explores the architectural landscape of Moscow, uncovering its unique blend of historical monuments, Soviet-era structures, and contemporary designs that define this vibrant metropolis.

Population Dynamics of Moscow

From medieval roots to megacity.

Moscow, with a population exceeding 12 million, has evolved from its medieval roots into a bustling megacity. The city’s demographic dynamism reflects its historical significance as a political, economic, and cultural center. Moscow’s urban growth presents challenges and opportunities for architects and urban planners, requiring a delicate balance between preservation and modernization.

Architectural Diversity in Moscow

Kremlin, red square, and the modern skyline.

Moscow’s architectural diversity is a harmonious blend of historical landmarks and contemporary structures. The iconic Kremlin, with its cathedrals and palaces, dominates the cityscape, while the neighboring Red Square provides a historical focal point. Beyond the historical core, Moscow’s skyline is adorned with modern skyscrapers like the Moscow International Business Center, symbolizing the city’s economic and architectural evolution.

Sustainable Architecture Initiatives

Green innovations amidst urban density.

As Moscow confronts environmental challenges and urban density, architects have championed sustainable solutions. Green building practices, energy-efficient designs, and eco-friendly materials are integral to Moscow’s architectural discourse. The city’s commitment to sustainability is evident in projects like Zaryadye Park, a green oasis in the heart of the city.

Urban Planning and Zoning Strategies

Preserving heritage amidst modernization.

Moscow’s urban planning endeavors to preserve its historical heritage while accommodating modern developments. The preservation of architectural gems like St. Basil’s Cathedral and the Pushkin Museum coexists with contemporary urban projects such as the Moscow City residential complexes. Urban planners in Moscow face the challenge of balancing the demands of a growing population with the need to protect the city’s cultural legacy.

Resilience in the Face of Urban Challenges

Adaptable architecture for harsh climates.

Moscow’s architectural resilience is tested by the city’s harsh climate and urban challenges. Architects prioritize designs that can withstand extreme temperatures and adapt to the evolving urban landscape. The use of durable materials and innovative construction techniques showcases Moscow’s commitment to architectural adaptability.

Technological Integration in Moscow’s Architecture

Smart city initiatives and futuristic designs.

Moscow’s architectural landscape seamlessly integrates cutting-edge technology for enhanced urban living. Smart city initiatives, digital infrastructure, and futuristic designs like the Moscow Central Diameters (MCD) showcase the city’s commitment to technological innovation. Moscow positions itself as a global hub for modern architectural practices, leveraging technology to improve efficiency and sustainability.

Architectural Icons of Moscow

Kremlin and red square.

The Kremlin and Red Square, UNESCO World Heritage Sites, symbolize Moscow’s historical and political significance. The architectural ensemble, including the iconic St. Basil’s Cathedral and the State Historical Museum, reflects Russia’s cultural and religious heritage.

Moscow International Business Center (Moscow City)

Moscow City, with its futuristic skyscrapers, represents the city’s economic prowess and modern aesthetic. The complex includes iconic structures like the Federation Tower and Mercury City Tower, showcasing Moscow’s status as a global financial and architectural hub.

Moscow’s Future Architectural Landscape

As Moscow continues to evolve, the city’s architectural landscape is poised for further transformation. Urban planners and architects are exploring innovative solutions to accommodate the growing population while preserving the city’s unique identity. Moscow’s commitment to sustainable practices, technological integration, and resilient design will shape its architectural future.

In conclusion, Moscow, Russia, stands as a city where architectural marvels narrate the story of a nation’s history and progress. From medieval fortifications to contemporary skyscrapers, Moscow’s architectural landscape is a testament to its resilience and adaptability. As the city looks toward the future, its architectural canvas promises to be a captivating blend of tradition, modernity, and technological innovation at the heart of Eurasia.

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