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Extended Response: Example 1

Basics The second section of Reasoning Through Language Arts evaluates your ability to integrate reading and writing by way of a 45-minute Extended Response. GED guidelines specify that you will be asked to write an essay about the best-supported position—the most persuasive side of an argument—presented in two passages with opposing points of view.  Accordingly, you will need to produce evidence supporting the most convincing position from either Passage I or Passage II.  Attention to specific details within the passages will help you find the necessary pieces of evidence.

GED.com has excellent resources to help prepare for the Extended Response as follows: • poster • videos • guidelines – english • guidelines – spanish • quick tips – english • quick tips – spanish • practice passages – english • practice passages – spanish

Here, at HowtoPasstheGED.com, a five-paragraph essay will be used as a framework for writing an Extended Response.

Five-Paragraph Essay – Outline Paragraph 1:  Introduction of your position with three supporting points. Paragraph 2:  Discussion of first point. Paragraph 3:  Discussion of second point. Paragraph 4:  Discussion of third point. Paragraph 5:  Summary and Conclusion of your position and its three supporting points.

Five-Paragraph Essay – Choose (Before You Write) • Read Passage I and Passage II. • Choose the best-supported position. • Select three points supporting this position.

Five-Paragraph Essay – Beginner Level (You’re Up and Running!) • Write the first sentence of each of the five paragraphs. • In paragraph 1, introduce your position and its three supporting points. • In paragraph 2, put down the first point. • In paragraph 3, put down the second point. • In paragraph 4, put down the third point. • In paragraph 5, restate your position and its three supporting points.

Five-Paragraph Essay – Intermediate Level (You’re Adding On!) • In paragraph 1, introduce your position and its three supporting points. • In paragraph 2, write at least three sentences about the first point, including mentioning something from the other side. • In paragraph 3, write at least three sentences about the second point, including mentioning something from the other side. • In paragraph 4, write at least three sentences about the third point, including mentioning something from the other side. • In paragraph 5, restate your position and its three supporting points, including coming to a conclusion about them.

Five-Paragraph Essay – Advanced Level (Polish Your Essay If You Have Time) • In paragraph 1, introduce your position and its three supporting points. • In paragraph 2, write at least three sentences about the first point, including mentioning something from the other side. • In paragraph 3, write at least three sentences about the second point, including mentioning something from the other side. • In paragraph 4, write at least three sentences about the third point, including mentioning something from the other side. • In paragraph 5, restate your position and its three supporting points, including coming to a conclusion about them.

The example below goes over the process of writing a five-paragraph essay as an Extended Response to Passage I versus Passage II.

Passage I Working from Home is Beneficial

Some experts say there’s no going back now that both employers and workers have learned that telework can be effective.

“The pandemic has radically changed how we view telework or remote work,” said Timothy Golden, a professor of management at Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute. “Many individuals and companies have realized that we can work remotely effectively. And so, I think remote work is here to stay.”

“We are going to err on the side of letting more people work remotely for longer periods of time,” said Ravi Gajendran, chair of the Department of Global Leadership and Management in the College of Business at Florida International University.

“When that’s not working as well,” added Gajendran, “the pendulum will sort of swing slightly back towards the office. It’s not going to come back to what it was previously, but what we’re going to find is, as new employees join, as new teams form, and as people who have not worked together before are now working remotely, things are not going to be as smooth.”

But, said Golden, “We know that many employees have been highly productive during the pandemic and have been able to carry on their work in a fashion that was consistent with their productivity before the pandemic.”

According to Cathleen Swody, an organizational psychologist at Thrive Leadership, remote work has led to more authentic moments between co-workers who’ve ended up meeting a colleague’s pets or families online, as the pandemic provided a virtual window, and therefore greater insight, into a co-worker’s personal side than working at the office ever did.

“You’ve seen many large companies, and in different industries, make announcements about the future of their workforce in how it is likely to be hybrid. And some workers will be working remotely on a permanent basis, and others will be in a hybrid form,” pointed out Golden. “Companies that do this right and do this in the right way, will have a competitive advantage over those who do not.”

Increased telework could free employees from having to live close to where they work. That could also benefit employers who won’t have to be limited to the local talent pool. More jobs could go to places with lower costs of living and ultimately, overseas.

“It could go to Asia or Africa or South America,” said Gajendran.

With more employees working remotely from home, employers could reduce their costs further by cutting back on office space. – adapted from VOA (04/09/2021, 04/12/2021, 04/29/21)

Passage II Working from Home is Harmful

The benefits of working from home—including skipping a long commute and having a better work-life balance—have been well documented, but employees are literally paying for the privilege, according to a study from the National Bureau of Economic Research.

“People need to dedicate space to work from home,” said Christopher Stanton, an Associate Professor at Harvard Business School who co-authored the study. “For many folks who lived in small apartments or houses before the pandemic, working from home wasn’t a a realistic long-term solution unless they could upgrade to larger apartments or houses.”

The researchers analyzed data from the U.S. Census Bureau to reach their conclusions. They found that between 2013 and 2017, households with at least one teleworker spent on average more of their income on rent or a mortgage to pay for the extra room needed to work from home.

“A household that was spending about $1,000 a month on rent would be spending around $1,070 on rent. So, it’s about a 7% increase, on average, across the income distribution,” Stanton said.

The researchers estimate that about 10% of people who worked in an office before the pandemic could permanently transition to working from home full time. A recent Upwork survey suggests that 36 million Americans will be working remotely by 2025—an 87% increase over pre-pandemic levels, and these workers could potentially take on the additional costs.

The added expense is easier for high-income households to bear but puts an increased burden on workers who earn less money.

“You might have gotten an increase of 20-ish percent in housing expenses for lower-income households with remote workers compared to lower-income households without remote workers,” Stanton said. “That’s a pretty big chunk of expenditure for those households in the bottom half of the income distribution.”

Kristen Carpenter, chief psychologist in the Department of Psychiatry and Behavioral Health at Ohio State University, added that at-home, remote work causes more work to be performed outside normal business hours, so it’s hard “to draw a boundary that prevents work from being ever-present,” including nights and weekends.

Cathleen Swody, an organizational psychologist at Thrive Leadership, also pointed out that when people work from home, “they kind of get stuck in this little place,” whereas going back to the office leads to more interpersonal interaction and innovation. – adapted from VOA (04/09/2021, 04/12/2021, 04/29/21)

Prompt Passage I finds working from home to be beneficial; Passage II finds working from home to be harmful. In your response, analyze the positions presented in Passage I and Passage II to determine which passage is best supported. Use relevant and specific evidence to back your choice. You have 45 minutes to plan, type, and edit your response.

Five-Paragraph Essay – Choose (Before You Write) • Read Passage I and Passage II. • Choose the best-supported position. In this example, Passage I is chosen as the best-supported position. • Select three points supporting this position. (1) Working from home is productive. (2) Working from home improves employee interaction. (3) Working from home saves money.

Passage I is the best-supported position because working from home is productive, improves employee interaction, and saves money.

Working from home is productive.

Working from home improves employee interaction.

Working from home saves money.

In summary, Passage I is the best-supported position because working from home is productive, improves employee interaction, and saves money.

Working from home is productive.  Passage I uses the pandemic to make the relevant observation that individuals and companies realized they could work remotely effectively.  Many employees have been highly productive this way and can stay this way.  Passage II admits in its very first sentence that the benefits of working from home have been well documented. 

Working from home improves employee interaction.  Passage I is persuasive when it notes that remote work has led to “more authentic moments” between co-workers.  However, workers still have the option of working at the office, as well as at home, in a hybrid form.  Thus, Passage II is incorrect when it claims remote workers get stuck in one place.

Working from home saves money.  Passage I makes a convincing argument for freedom.  It asserts that remote work frees employees from having to live close to office buildings.  It also frees employers from having to pay for as much office space.  Passage II says employees need to spend some money to outfit a home office, but this is less costly than commuting.

In summary, Passage I is the best-supported position because working from home is productive, improves employee interaction, and saves money.  In conclusion, there is no place like home.

Working from home is productive.  Passage I uses an authority—Timothy Golden, a professor of management at Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute—to make the following relevant observation: “The pandemic has radically changed how we view telework or remote work.  Many individuals and companies have realized that we can work remotely effectively.  We know that many employees have been highly productive during the pandemic and have been able to carry on their work in a fashion that was consistent with their productivity before the pandemic.  And so, I think remote work is here to stay.”  Passage II admits that at least some of what Golden said is true by stating in its very first sentence “the benefits of working from home—including skipping a long commute and having a better work-life balance—have been well documented.” 

Working from home improves employee interaction.  Passage I effectively uses another expert—Cathleen Swody, an organizational psychologist at Thrive Leadership—to state that remote work has led to “more authentic moments between co-workers who’ve ended up meeting a colleague’s pets or families online, as the pandemic provided a virtual window, and therefore greater insight, into a co-worker’s personal side than working at the office ever did.”  Although Passage II says people who work from home “kind of get stuck in this little place,” Golden affirms that workers aren’t really stuck, because some will be working in a hybrid form, meaning partly at home and partly in an office.

Working from home saves money.  Passage I makes a convincing argument for freedom.  Remote work saves money by freeing employees from having to live close to office buildings and freeing employers from having to pay for as much office space.  According to Christopher Stanton (Associate Professor at Harvard Business School) in Passage II, employees need to spend some money to outfit their apartments or houses with a home office, but this is a small price to pay compared to avoiding a costly daily commute.

In summary, Passage I is the best-supported position because working from home is productive, improves employee interaction, and saves money.  In particular, Passage I leads to the conclusion that working from home is beneficial in that it leaves nobody out: Both employers and employees stand to gain.

Remember, the RLA Extended Response is based on what YOU determine to be the best-supported position presented in either Passage I or Passage II. In order to demonstrate that YOU have room to maneuver, the example below goes over the process of writing a five-paragraph essay as an Extended Response to Passage I versus Passage II with a different choice.

Prior to the pandemic, about 5 million Americans worked remotely. But COVID-19 forced U.S. employers to allow telework on a massive scale, resulting in an estimated 75 million people working from home over the past year.

Five-Paragraph Essay – Choose (Before You Write) • Read Passage I and Passage II. • Choose the best-supported position. In this example, Passage II is chosen as the best-supported position. • Select three points supporting this position. (1) Working from home is unproductive. (2) Working from home hampers employee interaction. (3) Working from home costs money.

Passage II is the best-supported position because working from home is unproductive, hampers employee interaction, and costs money.

Working from home is unproductive.

Working from home hampers employee interaction.

Working from home costs money.

In summary, Passage II is the best-supported position because working from home is unproductive, hampers employee interaction, and costs money.

Working from home is unproductive.  Backed by facts, Passage II is able to make a strong statement when it says working in small setups at home ultimately ends up in fatigue and less productive employees.  In fact, fifty-four percent of home workers feel overworked and 39% are exhausted.  Passage I has no numbers to back up its claim that people can work remotely effectively.

Working from home hampers employee interaction.  Passage II cleverly notes that when people work from home, they get stuck.  Going back to the office leads to more interpersonal interaction and innovation.  Passage I even admits that working from home doesn’t always work well, meaning that people end up back in the office.

Working from home costs money.  Passage II convincingly has money in mind when it states that households with at least one teleworker have to spend some of their income to pay for the extra room needed to work from home.  Lower-income households need to spend even more of their income to set things up at home.  Passage I offers no solutions for employees paying out of pocket to work from home.

In summary, Passage II is the best-supported position because working from home is unproductive, hampers employee interaction, and costs money.  In conclusion, there are places other than home.

Working from home is unproductive.  Passage II comes out swinging with Christopher Stanton, an Associate Professor at Harvard Business School, who asserts having nonergonomic setups in small places [at home] ultimately ends up “leading to fatigue and wear and tear and less productive employees in the long run.”  In fact, “fifty-four percent of people who’ve worked from home this past year feel overworked, and 39% say they’re downright exhausted.”  Although Timothy Golden (professor of management at Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute) claims in Passage I that “many individuals and companies have realized that we can work remotely effectively,” he has no real numbers to back him up.

Working from home hampers employee interaction.  Passage II cites another authority—Cathleen Swody, an organizational psychologist at Thrive Leadership—to point out that people who work from home “kind of get stuck in this little place.”  She goes on to convincingly argue that “going back to the office leads to more interpersonal interaction and innovation.”  In Passage I, Ravi Gajendran, chair of the Department of Global Leadership and Management in the College of Business at Florida International University, even admits that working from home doesn’t always work well, such that “the pendulum will sort of swing” back towards the office.

Working from home costs money.  Passage II hits home with data from the U.S. Census Bureau, which found that “between 2013 and 2017, households with at least one teleworker spent on average more of their income on rent or a mortgage to pay for the extra room needed to work from home.”  Stanton adds that “you might have gotten an increase of 20-ish percent in housing expenses for lower-income households with remote workers compared to lower-income households without remote workers, a pretty big chunk of expenditure for those households in the bottom half of the income distribution.”  Passage I offers no solutions for employees “literally paying for the privilege” of working from home.

In summary, Passage II is the best-supported position because working from home is unproductive, hampers employee interaction, and costs money.  In particular, Passage II leads to the conclusion that working from home can be so harmful that it never stops, becoming an “ever-present” task performed outside normal business hours without a boundary.

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GED Essay Topics for Teenagers

• Effective Study Techniques for High School Students
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• Animal Rights and Teenage Activism
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GED Essay Topics on Current Events

• Income Inequality: Bridging the Wealth Gap
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• Gender Equality: Empowering Women in the Modern World
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• Space Exploration: Pushing the Boundaries of Science
• Education Reform: Enhancing Learning in the 21st Century
• Global Migration: Managing the Challenges of Displacement
• Biotechnology Advancements: Shaping the Future of Medicine
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• Racial Justice: Promoting Equality and Ending Discrimination
• Sustainable Agriculture: Building a Resilient Food System
• Nuclear Power: Evaluating Its Role in a Clean Energy Future
• Automation and Job Displacement: Preparing for the Future of Work
• Refugee Crisis: Providing Support and Integration Strategies
• Genetic Engineering: Exploring the Ethical Implications
• Universal Basic Income: Redefining Social Welfare Systems
• Blockchain Technology: Revolutionizing Industries and Security
• Indigenous Rights: Preserving Cultural Heritage and Land Rights
• Food Waste Reduction: Tackling the Issue of Hunger and Sustainability
• Immigration Policies: Balancing National Security and Compassion

Education GED Essay Topics

• The Significance of Critical Thinking Skills in Education
• Advancing STEM Education for Future Innovators
• Promoting Cultural Diversity Within School Curriculum
• Addressing Educational Disparities and the Achievement Gap
• Integrating Technology for Enhanced Learning
• Effective Strategies for Classroom Management
• Benefits of Early Childhood Education
• Examining the Impact of Homeschooling on Student Development
• Cultivating Creativity and Imagination in Education
• Evaluating the Pros and Cons of Standardized Testing
• The Influence of Social Media on Educational Practices
• Engaging Parents in Education for Student Success
• Implementing Character Development in Schools
• Overcoming Obstacles in Special Education
• The Importance of Financial Literacy in Schooling
• Exploring the Role of Arts Education in Holistic Growth
• Strategies to Combat Bullying and Foster Safe School Environments
• Assessing the Impact of School Funding on Academic Quality
• Promoting Healthy Lifestyles through Physical Education
• Integrating Environmental Awareness in the Curriculum
• Exploring Alternative Educational Approaches and Their Efficacy

GED Essay Topics on Environment

• The Importance of Wetland Conservation
• The Significance of Recycling in Waste Management
• Conservation of Endangered Species: Preserving Earth’s Diversity
• The Role of Technology in Environmental Sustainability
• The Relationship Between Urbanization and Environmental Challenges
• Water Scarcity: Necessity for Conservation Strategies
• The Impact of Industrialization on Air Quality
• Sustainable Transportation: Reducing Carbon Footprints
• The Importance of Oceans in Maintaining Ecosystem Balance
• Ecosystem Restoration: Healing the Planet
• The Role of Government Policies in Environmental Protection
• Impacts of Overfishing on Marine Ecosystems
• Waste Reduction: Minimizing Environmental Footprints
• The Significance of Environmental Justice in Communities
• Transitioning to Renewable Energy: Advantages and Challenges
• Forests’ Roles in Carbon Sequestration
• Consequences of Soil Erosion on Agricultural Productivity
• Importance of Wildlife Conservation for Eco-Tourism
• Benefits of Sustainable Building Practices
• Relationship Between Consumerism and Environmental Degradation

GED Essay Topics on Health

• Enhancing Healthcare Accessibility in Underserved Regions
• Innovative Approaches to Tackle Childhood Obesity
• Encouraging Healthy Aging Practices for Longevity
• Social Media’s Influence on Body Image and Mental Health
• Bridging Health Disparities Among Socioeconomic Groups
• Promoting the Benefits of Meditation for Stress Relief
• Fostering Mental Health Awareness in Educational Institutions
• Preventing Osteoporosis through Regular Exercise
• Managing and Preventing Chronic Pain Effectively
• Environmental Factors’ Significance in Human Health
• Strengthening Disease Prevention Education for Public Health
• Cognitive Function Enhancement through Regular Physical Activity
• Integrating Alternative Medicine Into Mainstream Healthcare
• Combating the Opioid Crisis: Prevention and Treatment Strategies
• Early Detection and Treatment of Chronic Illnesses
• Workplace Wellness Programs: Promoting Employee Health
• Nurturing Healthy Eating Habits in Educational Settings
• Genetic Factors in Disease Prevention and Treatment
• Dual Impacts of Substance Abuse on Physical and Mental Health
• Promoting Adolescent Sexual and Reproductive Health Education
• Respiratory Health Challenges Caused by Air Pollution

Technology GED Essay Topics

• Exploring Ethical Considerations in Genetic Engineering
• Technology’s Roles in Environmental Conservation
• Empowering Individuals With Assistive Innovations
• Advancements in Renewable Energy Solutions
• Social Media’s Influence on Contemporary Society
• Safeguarding Sensitive Information: The Importance of Cybersecurity
• The Evolution of Mobile Devices and Communication Channels
• The Future of Immersive Experiences: Virtual Reality
• Streamlining Workflows: Automating Processes with Technology
• Drones: Revolutionizing Various Sectors
• Biometric Authentication Systems: Pros and Cons
• Blockchain Technology: Transforming Various Spheres
• Artificial Intelligence in Healthcare: Advancements in Patient Care
• Digitalization’s Effects on Traditional Media Platforms
• Green Technology: Sustainable Solutions for the Future
• The Influence of Gaming on Cognitive Abilities and Development
• Cryptocurrencies: Reshaping the Financial Landscape
• Smart Technologies in Transportation Systems
• Robotics in Industrial Automation: Enhancing Efficiency
• Ethical Considerations of Autonomous Vehicles in Society

History GED Essay Topics

• Colonial Influences on Modern-Day American Society: An Exploration
• Reconstruction Policies Post-Civil War: A Comparative Analysis
• American Civil Rights Movement: Its Influence on Global Human Rights Activism
• Collapse of the Roman Empire: Impact on Modern Architecture
• Influence of Ottoman Architecture on Modern Design Principles
• Mughal Rule in India: Legacy in Art, Culture, and Administration
• Impacts of the Bubonic Plague on 14th-Century Europe
• Significance of the Gold Rush in California’s Development
• Roles of Spartan Society in Ancient Greek Military Dominance
• Social Consequences of the Age of Exploration in the Americas
• Significance of the Battle of Hastings in English History
• Historical Analysis of the Suez Crisis and Global Power Dynamics
• Fall of the Soviet Union: Ramifications on Contemporary Politics
• Understanding the Political Landscape of Post-Apartheid South Africa
• Causes and Consequences of the Teapot Dome Scandal in the US
• Cultural Shifts Prompted by the Harlem Renaissance in the 1920s
• Development of Democracy in Athens: Influences on Modern Political Systems
• Impacts of the Khmer Rouge Regime on Cambodia
• Consequences of the Thirty Years’ War on European State Formation
• Exploration of the Ming Dynasty’s Influence on Chinese Culture
• Influence of the Civilian Conservation Corps on the American Environment

GED Math Essay Topics

• The Pros and Cons of Calculators in Mathematics Education
• Mathematics in Cryptography and Data Security
• Graph Theory’s Impacts on Network Connectivity
• Mathematics and Art: Symmetry and Fractals
• Contributions of Mathematics to Economics
• The Significance of Mathematical Reasoning in Problem-Solving
• Geometry in Architectural Design and Construction
• Game Theory in Strategic Decision-Making
• Mathematics and Music Theory Connection
• Calculus and Physics: Analyzing Motion
• Linear Algebra in Computer Graphics and Animation
• Discrete Mathematics in Computer Science Applications
• Statistical Analysis in Medical Research and Clinical Trials
• Mathematical Patterns in Nature
• Ethics in Data Collection and Analysis for Big Data
• Mathematical Principles in Machine Learning Algorithms
• Number Theory’s Applications in Cryptography
• Game Theory in Economics and Business Strategy
• Chaos Theory and Complex Systems
• Mathematics and Genetics: Population Studies

GED Science Essay Topics

• Investigating Nanotechnology’s Benefits and Risks
• Examining Human DNA’s Evolutionary Significance
• Understanding Photosynthesis Mechanics in Plants
• The Influence of Technology on Human Health and Well-Being
• Unraveling Dark Matter’s Mysteries in the Universe
• Ethical Implications of Human Cloning and Stem Cell Research
• Evaluating Antibiotic Resistance’s Impact on Public Health
• Climate Change’s Effects on Biodiversity and Ecosystems
• Analyzing the Relationship Between Genetics and Behavior
• Investigating Space Exploration’s Potential for Human Civilization
• Vaccines’ Roles in Controlling Infectious Diseases
• Understanding Quantum Mechanics’ Physics
• Prospects of Colonizing Other Planets Within the Solar System
• Analyzing the Causes and Consequences of Ocean Acidification
• Exploring Artificial Intelligence’s Effects on Job Automation
• Analyzing Ocean Pollution’s Impacts on Marine Life
• Explaining Evolution and Natural Selection Mechanisms
• Robotics’ Roles in Revolutionizing Manufacturing Industries
• Investigating Gene Therapy’s Potential for Treating Genetic Disorders
• Addressing the Link Between Mental Health and Neurobiology

Essay Topics on Nursing for GED Test

• Exploring the Role of Nurses in Pain Management
• Critical Analysis of Ethical Dilemmas in Nursing
• Holistic Approach to Care: Impact on Patient Outcomes
• Understanding the Importance of Communication in Nursing
• Patient Advocacy: Essential Aspect of Nursing Practice
• Advancements in Technology: Implications for Modern Nursing
• Nurse Burnout: Causes, Consequences, and Prevention Strategies
• Pediatric Nursing: Specific Challenges and Opportunities
• Reflection on Leadership Styles in Nursing Management
• Geriatric Care: Nursing Strategies for Older Adults
• Nursing and Mental Health: The Invisible Battle
• Dissecting the Influence of Nurses in Health Promotion
• Palliative Care Nursing: Dealing with End of Life
• Cultural Sensitivity in Nursing: Its Relevance and Impact
• Legal Issues and Responsibilities in Nursing Profession
• Implications of Chronic Illness Management for Nurses
• The Interplay Between Nursing and Health Policy
• Evolution of the Nursing Profession: A Historical Perspective
• Home Health Care: The Role of Nurses in Community
• Quality Improvement Initiatives: Nursing’s Contribution
• Emergency Nursing: Thriving in High-Pressure Situations

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GED Essay Sample Response

Below is a sample response to our GED Essay Practice Question . Review this response to develop familiarity with the structure of a high-scoring essay. You may notice that this essay follows the template that’s featured in our GED Essay Writing Guide . At the end of this response, there is a short commentary that explains why this is an effective essay and why it would receive a perfect score.

The writer of the pro-recycling passage, unlike the writer of the anti-recycling passage, employs excellent logical reasoning to convince the audience, explaining that recycling is more than simply placing paper and plastic in their proper bins; it is an “involved process of harvesting, transporting, building and shipping.” The author proves that recycling is logical by detailing how much waste is produced when goods are created from scratch, driving home her logical argument with the simple question: “Why cut down a forest instead of recycling paper?”

To lend even more credibility to her already logical argument, the writer includes statistics relevant to recycling. In a clear, bullet-pointed list of data showing the importance of recycling, she provides relevant and useful information: “It takes 95% less energy to recycle aluminum than it does to make it from raw materials.” Recycling aluminum is worth the effort because making new aluminum is less efficient, and the writer has data to prove it. The writer goes on to list four more pieces of data to support her argument while the writer of the other passage only provides one.

Finally, the writer’s purposeful ethical plea in the pro-recycling passage more effectively calls the audience to action. By writing, “It is the morally sound thing to do to protect our beautiful planet for future generations,” the writer conjures images of clear blue skies and clean shining seas, helping the reader emotionally connect to the argument. If we do not recycle, the writer implies, we will be committing a sin against future generations. The writer finishes her argument with a passionate and motivating plea to the audience: “Please make sure you recycle!”

  Commentary

This sample essay would receive a perfect score on the GED. The writer clearly reviewed the prompt and outlined the argument before writing. Generally, the response exhibits the following organization:

• Paragraph 1 — Introduction
• Paragraph 2 — Logical reasoning
• Paragraph 3 — Statistics
• Paragraph 4 — Ethics
• Paragraph 5 — Conclusion

The introduction clearly previews the passage’s topic, explains both sides, and demonstrates that the student understands each writer’s argument. The student uses strong, clear language and concludes with a bold thesis statement that lists three reasons why the argument he or she chose is “better-supported.”

In the body paragraphs, the student demonstrates a strong command of each of the scoring criteria:

• Analysis of Arguments and Use of Evidence: The student quotes multiple sections of the passage to support each point, demonstrating a clear understanding of the material presented.
• Development of Ideas and Structure: The student develops coherent organization by focusing on a supporting reason in each body paragraph and providing transitions like “In addition to” and “Finally” to help the paragraphs flow together.
• Clarity and Command of Standard English: The sentence structure is varied and effective, and the author maintains proper spelling and grammar throughout.

Finally, the passage concludes with a brief concession to the opposing side, showing an ability to recognize the complexity of the issue, before wrapping up the discussion with a summation of why the pro-recycling passage is better-supported than the anti-recycling passage.

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A narrative essay is a form of storytelling where the writer shares a personal experience in a detailed and engaging manner. Crafting a Short Narrative Essay allows the author to focus on a specific event or moment, making it concise and impactful. Writing a Beneficial Narrative Essay helps readers connect with the author’s journey, providing insight and reflection. The Thesis Statement for Narrative Essay serves as the guiding idea, encapsulating the main point or lesson learned. A well-crafted Narrative Summary ensures the story is coherent and compelling, leaving a lasting impression on the audience.

What is Narrative Essay?

A narrative essay is a form of writing that tells a story from the writer’s personal experience, using vivid details and a clear sequence of events. It aims to engage readers by making them feel a part of the journey, often imparting a meaningful lesson or insight.

Examples of Narrative Essay

• A Memorable Family Vacation – Recount a family trip that left a lasting impression.
• My First Day at School – Describe the emotions and experiences of your first school day.
• An Unexpected Adventure – Share a surprising and exciting experience you had.
• Overcoming a Fear – Narrate the story of how you faced and conquered a fear.
• A Life-Changing Event – Detail an event that significantly impacted your life.
• A Lesson Learned the Hard Way – Explain a situation where you learned an important lesson through a challenging experience.
• My Favorite Childhood Memory – Describe a cherished memory from your childhood.
• A Time I Helped Someone – Share a story where you helped someone in need and what you learned from it.
• A Day I Will Never Forget – Narrate a day that stands out vividly in your memory.
• My First Job Experience – Recount your experiences and lessons learned from your first job.
• The Best Decision I Ever Made – Explain a decision that positively changed your life.
• A Time I Stood Up for Myself – Describe an instance where you confidently defended your beliefs or actions.
• A Significant Challenge I Faced – Narrate how you dealt with a major challenge in your life.
• My Favorite Holiday Celebration – Share your experiences and traditions during a special holiday.
• A Friendship That Changed Me – Describe a friendship that had a profound impact on you.
• A Moment of Personal Growth – Explain a situation where you experienced significant personal development.
• A Funny Incident from My Life – Recount a humorous event that still makes you laugh.
• A Time I Felt Truly Happy – Describe an experience that brought you immense joy and fulfillment.
• My Experience Moving to a New Place – Share your feelings and experiences about relocating to a new environment.
• A Mistake That Taught Me a Valuable Lesson – Narrate a mistake you made and the lessons you learned from it.

Narrative Essay Examples for Students

• My First Day at High School : My first day at high school was a mix of excitement and nervousness. Walking through the crowded halls, I felt lost but eager to start a new chapter.
• Overcoming Stage Fright : In eighth grade, I was chosen to lead the school play. Though terrified, I practiced tirelessly and eventually overcame my stage fright.
• A Memorable Family Vacation : Last summer, my family and I went on a trip to the Grand Canyon. The breathtaking views and the bonding moments we shared made it an unforgettable experience.
• The Day I Got My First Pet : Getting my first pet, a golden retriever named Max, was a day filled with joy. I vividly remember the feeling of holding him for the first time and the instant bond we formed.
• Learning to Ride a Bike : Learning to ride a bike was a significant milestone in my childhood. My dad spent countless hours running beside me, encouraging me not to give up.

Narrative Essay Topics

• A Life-Changing Experience
• My First Day at a New School
• An Unforgettable Family Reunion
• The Day I Overcame a Fear
• A Time I Got Lost
• The Best Birthday Party Ever
• A Lesson Learned from a Mistake
• The Moment I Realized I Was Growing Up
• A Memorable Road Trip
• An Unexpected Act of Kindness
• A Funny Incident in My Life
• A Time I Stood Up for Myself
• A Significant Challenge I Faced
• My First Job Experience
• A Time When I Felt Truly Happy
• A Difficult Decision I Had to Make
• The Day I Met My Best Friend
• An Adventure in Nature
• A Family Tradition That Means a Lot to Me
• The First Time I Tried Something New

Narrative Essay Format

Introduction.

From a young age, I was terrified of public speaking. The very thought of standing in front of an audience made my palms sweat and my heart race. However, my journey to overcome this fear taught me valuable lessons about courage and perseverance.

In eighth grade, I was unexpectedly chosen to play the lead role in our school play. At first, I wanted to decline the offer, but my teacher encouraged me to step out of my comfort zone. With her support and my parents’ encouragement, I reluctantly agreed.

As the day of the performance approached, my nerves intensified. However, I remembered my teacher’s advice: “Focus on the story you’re telling, not on the audience.” On the night of the play, I took a deep breath and stepped onto the stage, my heart pounding in my chest.

To my surprise, as I delivered my first lines, the fear began to fade. I became immersed in my character, and the audience’s presence seemed to disappear. By the end of the play, I felt a sense of accomplishment and pride that I had never experienced before.

Overcoming my stage fright was a pivotal moment in my life. It taught me that facing my fears head-on and persevering through challenges can lead to personal growth and unexpected rewards.

How to write Narrative Essay

Choose a Topic : Pick a story or experience from your life that you can describe in detail and that has a clear point or lesson.

Create an Outline : Outline the main events of your story in the order they happened. This will help you organize your thoughts and ensure your essay flows smoothly.

Write the Introduction:

• Hook : Start with an interesting opening sentence to grab the reader’s attention.
• Setting the Scene : Provide background information about where and when the story takes place.
• Thesis Statement : Briefly explain the main point or lesson of your story.

Write the Body Paragraphs :

• Paragraph 1: Beginning of the Story
• Paragraph 2: Rising Action
• Paragraph 3: Climax
• Paragraph 4: Falling Action
• Write the Conclusion : Summarize the lesson or main point of your story.

Tips for Narrative Essay Writing

• Start with a Strong Hook
• Use Vivid Descriptions and Sensory Details
• Show, Don’t Just Tell
• Reflect on the Significance

How does a narrative essay differ from a biography?

Unlike a Biography Narrative Essay , a narrative essay focuses on a specific event or experience.

Can a narrative essay include fictional elements?

Yes, a narrative essay can blend fact and fiction for creative storytelling.

What is a narrative history essay?

A narrative history essay recounts historical events in a story-like format.

How do you start a narrative essay?

Begin with an engaging hook, setting the scene or introducing key characters.

What are the key components of a narrative essay?

Introduction, plot, characters, climax, and conclusion are essential.

How should a narrative essay be structured?

Follow a chronological order or a logical progression of events.

What tone should a narrative essay have?

The tone can vary but should suit the story’s context and audience.

How do you end a narrative essay?

Conclude by reflecting on the story’s significance or lessons learned.

How important is the setting in a narrative essay?

A well-described setting enhances the story’s mood and context.

What is the purpose of a narrative essay?

To entertain, inform, or convey personal experiences and insights.

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GED Essay Prompt

The articles below present arguments from supporters and critics of police militarization.

In your essay, analyze both articles to determine which position is best supported. Use relevant and specific evidence from both articles to support your response.

Type your essay. You should expect to spend up to 45 minutes planning, drafting, and editing your response.

News reports frequently show police wearing helmets and masks, wielding assault rifles, and riding in mine-resistant armored vehicles. These are not isolated incidents—they represent a nationwide trend of police militarization. Federal programs providing surplus military equipment have equipped police officers with firepower that is far beyond what is needed for their jobs as protectors of their communities. Sending a heavily armed team of officers to perform routine police work can dangerously escalate situations that never needed to involve violence in the first place.

Throughout the United States, heavily armed SWAT teams are raiding people’s homes in the middle of the night, often just to search for drugs. Military-style police raids have increased dramatically in recent years, with one report finding over 80,000 such raids last year. It should enrage us that people have needlessly died during these raids, that pets have been shot, and that homes have been ravaged. Sometimes children are in the crossfire—often with deadly results.

Our neighborhoods are not warzones, and the police should not be treating us like wartime enemies. And yet, every year, billions of dollars’ worth of military equipment flows from the federal government to local police departments. The main beneficiaries of this militarization are military contractors who now have another lucrative market in which to sell their products. Companies like Lockheed Martin and Blackhawk Industries are making record profits by selling their equipment to local police departments that have received Department of Homeland Security grants.

Police departments use these wartime weapons in everyday policing, especially to fight the wasteful and failed drug war, which has unfairly targeted people of color. According to a recent ACLU report, “of all the incidents studied where the number and race of the people impacted were known, 39 percent were Black, 11 percent were Latino, 20 were white.” The majority of raids that targeted blacks and Latinos were related to drugs—another metric exposing how the “war on drugs” is racist to the core.

The Truth about Police Militarization

by David Hagner

Over the last few years the role of police in American society has increasingly drawn harsh criticism. Much is made of the militarization of police, from their acquisition and use of surplus military equipment, their training with and adopting similar tactics to the military, and intrusive search procedures. These criticisms are disproportionate and do not take into account the everyday facts of policing, including:

• The nature of the threat has changed: Terrorist attacks on American soil have risen in frequency. Though none have been as destructive as those of 9/11, many more recent attacks have occurred at the local level and have to be confronted by police. When these incidents occur, officers need the best available equipment in order to neutralize heavily armed opponents before they can inflict serious harm on civilians.
• There is little evidence that new procedures have increased causalities: Statistics of police killings of civilians do not show any significant increase, while deaths of officers in the line of duty are at an all-time low, indicating the newer procedures have helped save lives.
• The vast majority of police-civilian interactions are peaceful: Criticisms about the overuse of SWAT teams and officers decked out in military gear ignore the fact that most officers patrol the streets in standard uniforms and interact peacefully with multiple civilians during a given day. Rates of violent crime are down in most parts of the country. Violent confrontations are the exception, not the rule.
• Taking valuable tools away from police officers endangers lives: The stability of police shootings of civilians, the decline in violent crime, and the decline in police officer fatalities all suggest that current procedures are working. If officers lose the tactics and equipment they have come to rely on, these trends could be adversely affected and officers could be put in harm’s way without adequate protection.

Police exist to serve their communities, and while accusations of over-militarization are exaggerated, officers do still need to focus heavily on community outreach and dialogue. The only way misconceptions can be corrected is through transparency, so civilians can see and understand why certain approaches are warranted.

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The college essay is a pivotal piece of the college application showcasing your individuality and differentiated outlook to admissions officers. What makes an essay truly shine? Let’s dive into the words behind three standout essays highlighted by university websites and a school newspaper's brand studio so you can get into the right mindset for crafting your own narrative.

Embracing Differences: Finding Strength In Uniqueness

Essay Excerpt: ‘Bra Shopping ’ (Harvard)

Featured by the Harvard Crimson Brand Studio , Orlee's essay recounts a student's humorous and insightful experience of bra shopping with her grandmother, weaving in her unique family dynamics and challenges at her prestigious school.

What Works:

• Humor and Honesty: The student's humor makes the essay enjoyable to read, while her honesty about her challenges adds depth.
• Self-Awareness: She demonstrates a strong sense of self-awareness, embracing her uniqueness rather than trying to fit in.
• Resilience: Her narrative highlights resilience and the ability to find strength in differences.

For Your Essay : To write an essay that embraces your uniqueness, start by identifying a quirky or challenging experience that reflects who a key insight into your experience. Think about how this experience has shaped your perspective and character. Use humor and honesty to bring your story to life, and focus on how you have embraced your differences to become stronger and more resilient.

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Essay: ‘Brood X Cicadas ’ (Hamilton College)

As an example on Hamilton's admissions website, Nicholas writes about the cicadas swarming his hometown every 17 years and draws a parallel between their emergence and his own transition to college life. He uses humor and self-reflection to create a relatable and engaging narrative.

• Humor: Nicholas uses humor to make his essay entertaining and memorable. His witty comparisons between himself and cicadas add a unique twist.
• Self-Reflection: By comparing his life to the cicadas’, he reflects on his own growth and readiness for change.
• Relatability: His narrative about facing new experiences and challenges resonates with readers who have undergone similar transitions.

For Your Essay: To infuse humor and self-reflection into your essay, start by identifying an ordinary experience or object and think about how it relates to your life. Write down funny or insightful observations about this connection. Use humor to make your essay more engaging, but ensure it still conveys meaningful self-reflection. This balance can make your essay both entertaining and profound.

Persistence and Multicultural Identity: Life Lessons From Tortilla Making

Essay: ‘ Facing The Hot Griddle ’ (Johns Hopkins University)

In this essay published by Hopkins Insider, Rocio uses the process of making tortillas to explore her multicultural identity and the challenges she has faced. Her story beautifully weaves together her Guatemalan heritage and her experiences growing up in the United States.

• Metaphor and Symbolism: The process of making tortillas becomes a powerful metaphor for the student’s journey and struggles. The symbolism of the masa harina and water mixing parallels her blending of cultural identities.
• Personal Growth: The essay highlights her perseverance and adaptability, qualities that are crucial for success in college.
• Cultural Insight: She provides a rich, personal insight into her multicultural background, making her story unique and compelling.

For Your Essay: To write an essay that explores your identity through a metaphor, start by thinking about an activity or tradition that holds significant meaning for you. Consider how this activity relates to your life experiences and personal growth. Use detailed descriptions to bring the activity to life and draw connections between the process and your own journey. Reflect on the lessons you've learned and how they've shaped your identity.

A winning college essay isn’t simply about parading your best accomplishment or dramatizing your challenges. It’s not a contest for which student is the most original or entertaining. Rather, the essay is a chance for you to showcase your authenticity, passion, resilience, social awareness, and intellectual vitality . By sharing genuine stories and insights, you can create an essay that resonates with admissions committees and highlights your unique qualities.

For you to have the best possible essay, mindset is key. Here’s how to get into the zone:

• Reflect Deeply: Spend time thinking about your experiences, challenges, and passions. Journaling can help you uncover deep insights.
• Discuss and Share: Talking about your stories with friends, family, or mentors can provide new perspectives and emotional clarity.
• Immerse Yourself: Engage in activities that you are passionate about to reignite the feelings and memories associated with them.
• Draft Freely: Don’t worry about perfection on the first try. Write freely and honestly, then refine your narrative.

The secret to a standout college essay lies in its authenticity, depth, and emotional resonance. By learning from these successful examples and getting into the right mindset, you can craft an essay that not only stands out but also provides a meaningful insight into who you are. Remember, your essay is your story—make it a piece of writing that you will always be proud of.

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L.B.J. Did It in 1968. Biden Can Do It, Too.

By Kevin Boyle

Mr. Boyle is the author of “The Shattering: America in the 1960s.”

On March 31, 1968, Lyndon Johnson used a nationally televised address from the Oval Office to announce that he would no longer seek, and would not accept, his party’s nomination for the presidency of the United States.

After his catastrophic performance at last week’s debate, President Biden is under growing pressure to do the same. It’s tempting to think of the comparison as pure political tragedy: two proud men coming to the end of their often-distinguished careers, forced to face that they were deeply wounded candidates heading toward humiliating defeats they could avoid only by surrendering the second terms they were sure they deserved.

To see the moment only in those terms, though, misses the importance of what Johnson did in 1968. Yes, his candidacy had been severely damaged. His decision to drop out of the campaign was tangled up in all sorts of political, psychological and emotional issues. What is forgotten about Johnson’s decision is the number of other factors the president was weighing.

More than anything else, he was hoping that by ending his campaign he could defuse an existential threat to the nation. The details may be different, but that’s the situation Mr. Biden is facing, too.

Johnson’s crisis started on Jan. 30, 1968, when the North Vietnamese military broke the Vietnam War’s annual New Year cease-fire with a surprise assault on almost every strategic site in South Vietnam. Analysts would later say that the United States’ counterattack turned the Tet offensive into a rout. But that wasn’t clear at the time. It took 12 days for American and South Vietnamese troops to drive the North Vietnamese out of Saigon’s Cholon district and over a month for them to reclaim the coastal city of Hue, at a casualty rate higher than the Americans had suffered at any previous point in the war.

Then the crisis deepened. On Feb. 27, 1968, the Joint Chiefs of Staff formally requested that Johnson increase the troop deployment in Vietnam to 700,000 soldiers, a 40 percent increase over the half-million already there. For almost two weeks, Johnson’s advisers fiercely debated a potential escalation. On the 13th day — March 10 — news of the request leaked and led to a firestorm of criticism from the Democratic Party’s antiwar wing. Two days later, the wing’s only presidential candidate, Senator Eugene McCarthy of Minnesota, took 42 percent of the vote in the New Hampshire primary, surprisingly only eight points behind Johnson.

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